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The book is very good, but can you add a female protagonist? I have already commented to you that there are so many female characters, can't you choose one? I beg you!

It's not bad. Although it's not the best among the elf novels I've read, at least it's not below average. I didn't add my own thoughts like some elf novel authors do. I wrote it completely based on the games and animations. This is a bonus.

It's so slow. I've seen novels updated ten times a day. Why don't you give it a try?

The content is not bad, but the updates are too slow. It looks unpleasant. More please.

Author, please listen to me There is no gorgeous language decoration in your article. But it impresses readers with its plain and true feelings, and its sentences are smooth and vivid. Qi Ah Cheng, the psychological portrayal and detailed description are both successful. Gives people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials It's very novel, the angles are clear and the language is plain but not concise. Losing style, concise and full of meaning, it can be called a classic article Fan! This article shows extraordinary literature in the ordinary. The foundation of skills can be said to be every word, every sentence is a reference, and it can be achieved From the perspective of art, we have reached a height that is beyond our reach. In terms of degree, this article still needs to be improved, but its meaning Yidu still has a big body and a small body, but he still pays a fixed amount The use of numbers is even more beneficial. Read yours word for word After this article, my heart cannot be calm for a long time! In this life How could there be such a penetrating article in this time? I don't know Just trust your own eyes. You make me understand deeply I understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the sky". After finishing the article, I didn't dare to reply. I was worried that I would be mediocre. Vulgar language will stain the rare literature in this world. Chapter. But I still replied because I felt that if not I can leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article. It will be a regret in my life. Please cool me down selfishness! No matter how eloquent the rhetoric is, it cannot To describe how wonderful this article is, I just want to say One sentence: Your novel is so touching! Add... Another chapter?

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Although the details are not in place, as long as you don't care about those details. Then this book is pretty good.

Not bad, not bad. But the plot of the system is a bit too little. When there is time, it's time to throw the ball.

Why should such an active author not be given five stars? It's just too short. If possible, I hope the author will update it by 10,000 words per day☻

It's better to update it quickly, after all, there are still relatively few such themes.

Yes, it would be better if the protagonist could have more physical combat.

It's a bit watery at the beginning, I hope the author won't be too watery at the end, but the writing is good.

The author gave me a thumbs up and posted a new chapter at 23:47. Thanks for your hard work!

Just watch Pokémon fandom and have fun, have some more laughs

Come on! In the special edition, I only have the underworld plot of the ghost bog monster and the female ghost on the ship. It should be faster. I am looking forward to it.

I want to save until the end

Shi Huihai virtual machine

Just so-so, I'll give it five stars first.

The author made me laugh

Very good, I think we can add one later, Gardevoir.

This is the most active author I have ever seen

Why are all the good novels nowadays so short? 💀

Overall, there are relatively few magical changes in this book. One Year Old is not like other cool books, but this book is more interesting to read, and the author's writing style is also quite good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. If any more outstanding chapters are deleted in the future, please add this comment👍👍👍By the way, you are awesome🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹

What's the name of the new book?

Okay, this book just wants to ask the author whether he will conquer a first-level god in the future?

Most of these readers don't know Pokémon, and Chapter 74 is just gone? ? ?

The supernatural version of Pokémon, wow, it's so novel

It's very interesting to watch, but the plot is basically a red version with slight revisions. If you haven't played the game or read the comics, you may not know some things.

I really can't understand it! The thunder slate is actually used by Gyarados.

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