The Male Protagonist of "Quick Travel" Treats Me as His Love Rival

I think this one is really cruel. I have tried it three times, and every time I am tortured to the point of crying like a dog. The first world: I am in the sea, you don't have to be afraid, I will accompany you; The second world: It was you who turned me into a monster with your own hands; Anyway, it's still very cruel later on. The author's writing is very good and the plot is great! There are not too many gorgeous words, but it made me burst into tears and made the readers really feel the emotion the author wanted to express. It is one of the few excellent works I have seen on Tomato. The score can definitely be raised to 9 points, but why is it only over 8 points? Is it because no one is watching? Highly recommended!

The only fast-traveling article I have ever read, I responded with tenderness ~ The person you care about most in your life, do you love him? A Yu accepted it, but A Chu escaped. "I want to be buried at sea" "In the future, don't be afraid anymore, because I am in the sea." "I will find you wherever you are." "When a vampire falls in love with someone, he grows old." "Because the heart is beating, he is not a vampire." You are so disgusting I'm in love with you There are regrets, abuse, and unwillingness, but the most important thing is that this book is very gentle and touching. The ideas in each world are very good and not lengthy. I highly recommend it and it is a good read.

Very nice! I have never read a novel in one go. There are a lot of good foreshadowings in it. The author's writing is very good and makes people feel comfortable. I really didn't expect that after reading so many sadistic articles, I actually cried in this story with a happy ending... I am not sad. I am happy for them in the novel (there are some spoilers below). At first, I was a little disappointed in the plane of 5898. After all, I didn't finish it. Then he appeared in the last plane. It was a surprise! Feng Yaner also wants to be happy~

I only like the first plane, it's plain yet gentle, for me, it's the title of God

Very nice! From the initial confession, regret, and separation, to the encounters in different worlds, from the virtual recognition of one's own feelings gradually, to the subsequent reunion in reality, together! A very good ending. I think this is the story that many people want in Secret Love. I hope everyone can have a happy ending like Lu Yu and Qin Xichu.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! To be honest, I was really sad when I just finished watching 5898. I was lying on the ground alone, no one cared about me. Fortunately, there is a sequel, otherwise I would really want to complain😄The ending is nice, I love it, I love it, hahaha

The writing style is very delicate. It is a very sadistic novel. I feel sorry for Lu Yu. The male protagonist's realistic emotional line is written very deeply and clearly. The ending of A Yu and Chu Chu made people very happy, but the sentence "really disgusting" really made me feel bad and uncomfortable. Chu Chu really owed A Yu too much, and the following chapters made me cry. I feel that those with low ratings probably feel that their feelings are not equal. After all, it has always been Ah Yu who tolerates Chu Chu.

I was made to cry by the first few stories [crying], but after seeing the beautiful ending of Chu Chu and Xiao Yu, I was really satisfied [blowing kiss]. It's so beautiful, the more you read, the better it gets. Every story is so good. I really regret not knowing this book. It is definitely the top 1 quick travel article I read on Tomato. I like it. Chu Chu Xiaoyu must last forever ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's so beautiful. The music makes me feel so immersive. It makes me feel sad. Ah Yu loves me so humbly. Fortunately, the ending is good

It's really good to read. It's obviously a sweet story, but sometimes I suddenly feel sour while reading it. Ayu and Chuchu are a perfect match, I wish them a long life in a world we cannot touch [blowing kiss]

This novel gave me a very different feeling. Real love is true. It's a little sad, but it's just right. It's worth reading. But there are a few typos and omissions, but they are all normal. Take your time and read it. If you like it, don't like it. Don't use ky or make bad comments. Just watch it happily. It's over. Goodbye, Xiaoyu, Chuchu. 2022.2.7

This book is very interesting, the plot is very good, and it is relatively popular. I actually like Lu very much, and I am not too disgusted with Qin, but the sentence is so disgusting and true, it pierced my heart. To be honest, I feel that Qin's happiness comes so easily that it gives me a feeling of love, which is very cheap. It's not that Qin is not good, but it can't make up for Lu. I really hope that two wife-chasing crematoriums can come to Qin to experience what Lu felt at that time. Finally, I sincerely wish them a sweet married life.

It looks good. It feels like Lu Yu is a very lonely person from the beginning. It feels like his whole world is very quiet. The appearance of Qin Xichu makes more voices around him. For Lu Yu, Qin Xichu has always been unique. But when Qin Xichu pushed him away, Lu Yu's reaction was too calm. In fact, it must be very uncomfortable. Otherwise, he would not comfort himself with "just becoming lonely again". On the surface, he seemed not to care, but in fact, he couldn't let go. Fortunately, when Lu Yu was about to give up, Qin Xichu caught up with him. From then on, Lu Yu, the fish, had Qin Xichu, the ocean.

This article is very sweet and niche, and life requires and is necessary to experience some ups and downs and failures. Because after you experience these setbacks, you will find that life is not as smooth and beautiful as ordinary people think. Only by experiencing these, will your potential abilities be stimulated in the face of difficulties. In the end, the lovers finally got married, but the promised extra episode did not appear.

It's sweet, but very embarrassing. Some of the stories are a little messy. The male protagonist seems to be Yazi who is not very smart. Generally, don't open the comment area in the later stage, because it is a group of irrational people commenting. {Don't argue, the argument is that you are right} I feel that we are only qualified to watch their stories, and we cannot judge them. The author's views are quite upright. Hey, I discovered that I can also turn this star into red?

This book is really good. The first two planes made me wet my eyes. "Don't be afraid anymore, because I am in the sea." This sentence really touched my tears, and the ending also made me cry [cry] [cry] Overall, highly recommended! Moreover, this book is not very long, so you will finish it quickly.

I like Ah Yu very much. He is a gentle, upright and strong person. The story is not long but very warm. Everyone is gentle and everyone is so kind. This makes me feel that Chu Chu is not good. He should not let Ah Yu face all the problems alone.

This book is really well written. The author has written every step and detail very well, but at the end of each task, the plot is not very clear, and it is gone as soon as it is over. However, other parts are very well written, and there are a lot of foreshadowings, which are very eye-catching.

I really like this ending! ! ! ! That pair of 5898 has always been my favorite. Seeing him like this makes me really happy [full]. I really like this story, but it feels so short...

It's good to watch, but I felt a little reluctant to leave after watching it. I just accompanied them here. Their story is not over yet, but I just feel a lot of reluctant to leave the world that Ayu has completed. Well, it's always better to be happy when the flowers are over. Goodbye Ayu, goodbye Chuchu.

It's very worthwhile and gentle. I don't know how to describe it. After reading it, these two words are the only ones that come to my mind. It feels so unreal, but also very realistic. Are there many people like A Yu? I feel sorry for him but I also envy him. Goodbye, Ayu. Goodbye ChuChu. I hope you will always be happy. Just like the last vows you said, we will grow old together and love each other forever.

This is the first novel I have read in a row! And I didn't skip a chapter. Every time a world leaves, my heart hurts inexplicably, but I don't cry. I want to give this book fifty stars! ! !

It is very beautiful, and every story is very good. This is one of the few books that I can read in one sitting. "The fish who loves the sea deeply and the sea that tolerates everything about fish", the love that goes in both directions, is so beautiful. Really, very, very beautiful, highly recommended, must watch! [Blowing kiss]

The book is very exciting. It's a coincidence that I discovered this book during the Chinese Valentine's Day. I read it all night long. It was my first all-nighter in my life. It was quite exciting. The most exciting thing is that I finished reading it at 5:20! Love it! ! Confession But it's a bit hard to reconcile. The emotional investment in the real world of receiving and attacking doesn't feel equal, but the small world is very good, the characters are also nice, and the writing style is also good, but some worlds are a little bit sadistic. Overall, it is a sweet story, HE, but in the end it still feels like a sadistic story, Ayu... Hey! But I am still the calm type, a bit like a strong person!

This book is really good! Each small world is independent and coherent, and the story is complete. It belongs to the kind of plot where sugar is boiled with glass slag (at first I wanted to abandon the story, but in the end the more I read, the more I read). However, I still hope that the ending is BE (not that the author's writing is not good), Chu Chu really doesn't deserve it! That "disgusting" sentence really touched me. I really can't accept a love that is disgusted by the world, and I can't calm down! Finally, where did the author go with your runaway extra story! ! ! Come back to me! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

It's so good. I didn't finish the series when I read it, so I took it out of the bookshelf for some reason. Then I watched it again. I always thought I only saw the mermaid, but it felt more familiar the more I watched it. Then I discovered that except for the ending, which was not serialized until the end, I had watched almost all the other smaller planes. But it's really pretty.

The content is very exciting and the plot is also great. Although there were misunderstandings, they were solved in the end. HE, every character is written very realistically.

It's good to watch, but it's also very sad. The ending of the world, well... It's just that Lu Yu left with all his favorability, and the other male protagonist committed suicide because of his undying love for Lu Yu [I'm about to cry] I can't stand it after watching the second world, I really can't bear to watch a little bit of abuse [crying] [crying] [crying]

Looking forward to the author's new works

The plot is a bit short, the writing is pretty good, and the structure is a bit old-fashioned, but overall it's worth watching. However, the emotions between the male protagonists still need to be carefully portrayed. It is recommended to be more detailed at the end to perfect the entire layout and reach a small climax. As the climax of the whole book, I personally suggest that it is best to have more inner descriptions when the two male protagonists express their feelings to each other. The number of words should be as large as possible to avoid giving people a feeling of a rushed ending. In other words, it is recommended that Da Da have a clearer and detailed division. As a fast-travel novel, the plot and the emotional line need to be advanced together with a double helix structure so that both parties can refine it together. Then other descriptions can be appropriately simplified, rather than being petty and compromising. All in all, it is still worth recommending To believe is to be reasonable, to be reasonable is to exist May the people in the so-called book be safe and happy in that world, and may everything be successful.