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A handsome young junior brother came to the Mirror Moon Sect—Qin Wuyan.
Who doesn't love good-looking people?
Several senior sisters volunteered one after another to give tutoring lessons to this handsome little junior brother, but...
"Oh, my talent is stupid. It took me three days to practice the Purple Mirror Underworld Scroll before I reached Small Consummation. Is there any way for me to practice faster? Senior sister, please teach me!"
"It took me a day to completely remove the impurities from this Kuaishen Iron. Am I still qualified to learn to refine weapons? Senior sister, please teach me!"
"Ah! This spell can only attract thunder and lightning, but it attracts nine-color sky thunder. Did I draw it wrong? Senior sister, please teach me!"
Hearing that the senior sisters not only did not blame him, but also comforted him that "the younger junior brother is very talented", Qin Wuyan vowed to practice hard and not to live up to the trust of the senior sisters!
(This book is also known as "Senior Sisters Taught Me" and "I always make mistakes in my practice, and my senior sisters rush to guide me")
Reader comments
Let's add more protagonists and the five senior sisters. I hope that the five senior sisters and the master can be included in the end, and don't add more. That's enough✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.
I think it's very good-looking, but the male protagonist is a bit stupid and has a steely straight man.
Emmmmmmm
Why does it feel a bit like "Junior brother, please stop practicing"
Pretty good
Give the author a big 5 stars
Come on Ollie!
It's so beautiful (。・ω・。)ノ♡, but the author keeps misremembering the realm and deducted one star.
It looks good, but it always makes people rush. I am very dissatisfied with this, and I will try to improve it. (Just kidding, it's still very good. The author is very angry)
The author's writing is quite good, but there are some problems with the protagonist's character. He is too modest. Even if you traveled back in time, it's impossible that you wouldn't know the ways of the world, as mentioned above. He lived two lives. Even if he doesn't know what his talent is, he should judge it from other people's reactions and their level. And think about it, a person who feels that his talent is very poor. It should be a kind of inferiority complex. He actually has this kind of inferiority complex. Those senior sisters like him, so he should have some conceitedness. I feel like I'm not worthy of them. This is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.
So I hope the author can change it
Or let the protagonist experience something easier later. Or when you meet a person and change yourself through that person, I say that change is to change the character of the protagonist, but don't change it too much. His mood is a good thing, but it just makes you feel inferior and conceited, so I hope the author can change it a lot.
Dear author, could you please consider that later the male protagonist will take the five senior sisters and Jing Lingyu and the others back to modern times? Oh, I think it would be more fun.
It's well written, but there are some shortcomings. I hope the author will pay attention to it when writing in the future. It would be better if the main character of this book did not travel through time, because to me it read like a teenager who traveled through time, and in that case it would be better not to travel through time. Come on ୧⍢⃝୨ ୧⍢⃝୨ ୧⍢⃝୨
It's beautiful, I can't express it in words, I just jumped to watch it [laughing crookedly], please forgive me for the late review.
I want to know if the world I entered when I was refining the elixir really existed and was not destroyed😁
Not bad. You can know nothing about pig's feet in the early stage, but other than practicing, there is no need to be like a noob.
In other words, the distinction between realms is often mistaken, but I personally think the plot is okay |・ω・`)
I give it five stars, but to be honest, it shouldn't be five stars. The content in the front is sometimes different from the content in the back, and the levels of elixirs and talismans are vaguely defined.
Well, I personally think it's pretty good, but the number of updates is a bit small.
The writing is pretty good, the subject matter is very attractive, and I am a bit curious about the relationship between the younger junior brother and the four senior sisters later on.
It's wonderful, I still want to see it, one link after another, one link after another!
I thought it was a harem, but I expected it in vain.
If you are not into reading, you can consider reading it. The overall plot is not bad, except for some unreasonable parts. At least I feel that I can continue to read it, but the update is interrupted [face-covering][face-covering]
You, the author, are quite hard-working, and you are still posting this update so late at night.
(๑ʘ̅ д ʘ̅๑)!!!
I think it's okay
I'm curious why there are no chapter reviews and paragraph reviews
I feel like my writing is pretty good, but it's not easy to write like this without a system!
The protagonist goes to Versailles every day, but he doesn't know it and thinks he's a bad guy. It's pretty funny anyway.
By the way, the emotional line of this story is pitiful
*⁂((✪⥎✪))⁂*O(o・`з・´o)ノ!!! Come on come on come on
When mortals see the end, talents see collapse
Whether you have a Chong Master or not, wouldn't it be good to be a Chong Master and a rebel disciple?
I hope there will be more updates, more eye-catching and more detailed. I hope it will last longer.
Great, I hope there are more words per page and the update is faster╰(‵□′)╯
Let's add more protagonists and the five senior sisters. I hope that the five senior sisters and the master can be included in the end, and don't add more. That's enough✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.
I think it's very good-looking, but the male protagonist is a bit stupid and has a steely straight man.
Emmmmmmm Why does it feel a bit like "Junior brother, please stop practicing" Pretty good Give the author a big 5 stars Come on Ollie!
The content is rich and the plot is very good!
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It's so beautiful (。・ω・。)ノ♡, but the author keeps misremembering the realm and deducted one star.
It looks good, but it always makes people rush. I am very dissatisfied with this, and I will try to improve it. (Just kidding, it's still very good. The author is very angry)
The author's writing is quite good, but there are some problems with the protagonist's character. He is too modest. Even if you traveled back in time, it's impossible that you wouldn't know the ways of the world, as mentioned above. He lived two lives. Even if he doesn't know what his talent is, he should judge it from other people's reactions and their level. And think about it, a person who feels that his talent is very poor. It should be a kind of inferiority complex. He actually has this kind of inferiority complex. Those senior sisters like him, so he should have some conceitedness. I feel like I'm not worthy of them. This is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. So I hope the author can change it Or let the protagonist experience something easier later. Or when you meet a person and change yourself through that person, I say that change is to change the character of the protagonist, but don't change it too much. His mood is a good thing, but it just makes you feel inferior and conceited, so I hope the author can change it a lot.
Dear author, could you please consider that later the male protagonist will take the five senior sisters and Jing Lingyu and the others back to modern times? Oh, I think it would be more fun.
It's well written, but there are some shortcomings. I hope the author will pay attention to it when writing in the future. It would be better if the main character of this book did not travel through time, because to me it read like a teenager who traveled through time, and in that case it would be better not to travel through time. Come on ୧⍢⃝୨ ୧⍢⃝୨ ୧⍢⃝୨
It's beautiful, I can't express it in words, I just jumped to watch it [laughing crookedly], please forgive me for the late review.
I want to know if the world I entered when I was refining the elixir really existed and was not destroyed😁
Not bad. You can know nothing about pig's feet in the early stage, but other than practicing, there is no need to be like a noob.
In other words, the distinction between realms is often mistaken, but I personally think the plot is okay |・ω・`)
I give it five stars, but to be honest, it shouldn't be five stars. The content in the front is sometimes different from the content in the back, and the levels of elixirs and talismans are vaguely defined.
Well, I personally think it's pretty good, but the number of updates is a bit small.
The writing is pretty good, the subject matter is very attractive, and I am a bit curious about the relationship between the younger junior brother and the four senior sisters later on.
It's wonderful, I still want to see it, one link after another, one link after another!
I thought it was a harem, but I expected it in vain.
If you are not into reading, you can consider reading it. The overall plot is not bad, except for some unreasonable parts. At least I feel that I can continue to read it, but the update is interrupted [face-covering][face-covering]
You, the author, are quite hard-working, and you are still posting this update so late at night. (๑ʘ̅ д ʘ̅๑)!!!
I think it's okay I'm curious why there are no chapter reviews and paragraph reviews
I feel like my writing is pretty good, but it's not easy to write like this without a system!
The protagonist goes to Versailles every day, but he doesn't know it and thinks he's a bad guy. It's pretty funny anyway.
By the way, the emotional line of this story is pitiful
*⁂((✪⥎✪))⁂*O(o・`з・´o)ノ!!! Come on come on come on
When mortals see the end, talents see collapse
Whether you have a Chong Master or not, wouldn't it be good to be a Chong Master and a rebel disciple?
I hope there will be more updates, more eye-catching and more detailed. I hope it will last longer.
Great, I hope there are more words per page and the update is faster╰(‵□′)╯