I Was in Tokyo and Met Hyakki Yakou at the Beginning.

I like your theme better, but is the plot a bit too tight, developing too fast, and relying too much on anime characters to possess you? It's not as interesting as the actual strength. However, the writing style is good, and the number of words is not enough. I hope you can accept my opinion. I like your article very much. Come on!

I have a friend who writes online articles. His updates are very slow, and then he was stabbed by his fans.

Looking forward to..., The protagonist's last name is Saiki, which reminds me of Saiki Kusuo's disaster; Kusanagi Sword reminds me of Kusanagi Kyo (King of Fighters character), and I wonder if Orochi will appear in the end, and whether Iori Yagami, Kagura Chizuru, and Kusanagi Kyo will appear. Okay~_~, I digressed a little bit, the theme is the grandson of the Slippery Ghost and Naruto. Dear author, if you lack ideas, you can ask me, I will be very happy to provide advice, hehe😁.

To be honest, the plot is well connected, but the writing style makes the whole article a bit rushed. It would be better if the pace were slowed down. Although I don't like the protagonist's character very much, but it's hard to find a slick ghost theme, so I'll give it another star.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Come on, author, I have read this novel you wrote and it is very good.

I like it so much. I have always wanted to read a novel about the grandson of the Slippery Ghost, but there are none. Otherwise, the main character time travels and becomes Nura Rikuo. I don't like that kind. I also fancied that the main character is Yamabuki's child combined with Natsume. I really like this book. Please give it a try.

Boss, I will help you shovel the soil and carry you out. I love watching it😏

It's okay, the plot is a bit fast

I have a friend who writes novels and never updates them. I saw him on the guillotine yesterday.

The plot is a bit fast. This book may be written in 500,000 words. It can be slower.