I Am About to Become an Immortal and Be Apprenticed to the Empress

I have watched almost half of it, and my feeling is that the 4 heroines are the best so far, neither more nor less. However, I still hope that the characteristics, personalities, and appearance and expressions of each heroine in a specific place or at a specific moment can be described in more detail. Small comments are for reference only!

Yaya has the best personality in the book. She is a good wife and loving mother. I hope she can have a place with the protagonist in the end and not end up alone as a confidante.

If I like this type, I don't want too many female protagonists, but I don't like single female protagonists either. Two or three will do, and it will be more to my liking.

I thought the first part was okay, and the plot was well developed. I gave it 4 stars because there was a book before where the first part was good, but the second part was so disgusting that it pushed the reader's head to the ground and rubbed it. So I wanted to read the second part and give it 5 stars if it was good.

It feels pretty good. I like Master-Disciple Romance very much, but I like Shangguan Ling more.

Very nice, I really like this type. The characters are flesh and blood. It's different from what I've seen before. The previous protagonists were either stupid and didn't know how awesome they were. Otherwise, it will be after reaching a high level. Inhumane and unkind.

To be honest, as long as the writing is amazing, I don't have to worry about whether there are multiple girls or singles. So far, it still suits my taste. As long as this book is not written in my heart, I will always support it. How can I get a gift?

It's well written. I really like reading this type of book. Good luck to the author! ! !

Today is August 14, 2022. I officially finished reading it at 04:40. The author's writing is very good. I didn't really want to read this book when I saw the title. But by chance, I opened it. It took me 10 hours of reading, but I was also a little disappointed. I saw the author's previous description that only Bai Rongrong or the first disciple should be the Taoist companion, but it later turned into a harem novel. This is also the only harem novel that I won't be disgusted by (I used to feel nauseous when reading harems). I hope the author will get better and better, and I look forward to the next book [Salute]

This book is really well written, what can I say? It just gives me the feeling that if you lose your focus or jump around, you won't know what the protagonist is doing. So we have to start from the front and give it 4 stars! Come on, author!

Generally speaking, the writing is very good. I think the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very good. Unlike other novels, the girl has never doubted the male protagonist and neither does the male protagonist. This novel is more realistic in terms of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. Secondly, the ending can make readers imagine. The novel is very well written and I hope the author can continue his work.

Well, very good, very good, the content is very interesting, mainly about Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf.

This is a very good novel. The male protagonist travels through time and comes with his own system, and the female protagonist is an empress and is reborn with her own data analysis.

The more I watch it, the more comfortable it becomes. The thinking and logic are also good. The best thing is that there are very few cowardly things like bullying a young man into being poor. It's great.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking and the writing is very good.

It can be said that this is the most exciting book I have read on Tomato (my personal situation), but I feel that Lengquan is very uncomfortable if he does not reveal his strength in the early stage. I hope the author can write more and more exciting things (I have read a lot of bad books, so I have to make up the word count) and not write too much. I also hope that the author can write more plots where the protagonist abuses food. I wish the author and everyone a happy Year of the Tiger!

Overall, it's okay, but only those who like to read harem stories can read it. It's a bit unsatisfactory to collect so many in the later period. I hope this won't happen in the new book. Also, sometimes when I read it, it feels a bit like a running account. Although I don't know how to write it to make it more exciting, I hope it can be better in this aspect. Come on!

The characters in this book are well written, and the plot development is also good. There is nothing brainless. The two female protagonists are very good!

This book is the most common sense among all the invincible novels I have read so far. The writing style is also good. Although there are some minor flaws and exaggerations, they are not major problems. I hope the author will continue to

Super pretty! Change the number and continue watching. Come on, author! As long as you keep writing, I won't abandon the book!

This is so good. I stayed up late watching it for 3 hours and felt like I still hadn't seen enough.

It's quite good-looking, not the kind where the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger all day long, and is ridiculed on the surface. The cool points are up to standard, but the poisonous points are not found or are so small that they can be ignored. The author greatly hopes for stable updates, and I give you five stars.

This book is very well written. I hope the author can speed up ╰(‵□′)╯.

As an old bookworm, I feel that this book is already very well written as the author's first book. It has surpassed many other authors' first books. Keep up the good work.

Come on, author, I like your plot very much. Don't be influenced by other people who don't like the books you write. We will always support you! ! Come on

Boys who can say moma are the best, and the author happens to be this type of person. Please see Chapter 202 for details. (Help me make a hot comment, handsome and beautiful readers)

It looks great, come on, if it's a harem, just handle the relationships and details well, at least don't make it uncomfortable to watch.

The book is not bad, but as the author himself said, this is a book between a novice and an old man. It is not recommended for old bookworms with picky tastes. Foodies who pursue perfection and require rigorous logic and rigorous settings can pass. This book is just for fun. It is a good herb but can be eaten to solve the book shortage.

It's okay for the time being. I hope there are more daily scenes with the heroine, and a bit more of a beast mother. You'll know after watching the movie version of the auntie

This is the second book that made me read it from the beginning, and the second one that made me update it 😂