I Became a Security Guard at 18 and Saved 50 Years of Detours

Well written and beautiful. Now that the door to the harem has been opened, just keep what you need to keep, including those from the past life. Take them back when you encounter them to make up for the regrets of the previous life. Don't give up on Zichu, you still need to give the male protagonist multiple opportunities to chase him, otherwise it will be boring for urban women to chase men, and they will have to chase him until the finale. Fighting for a career requires an emotional drama. Some rebirth novels discard the emotional drama in the second half of the writing, leaving only the struggle. Reading it is like chewing wax, and it is boring and boring. I'm looking forward to going back 30 years and writing some.

This article is a bit interesting. Although the logic is not very rigorous in some places, it is indeed an enjoyable article. Please encourage me.

The writing is pretty good. Since you are a scumbag, don't hesitate.

The writing is very good, and each character's personality has its own characteristics, allowing readers to remember it deeply. I am a senior reader in the Shenzhen area. I hope the author can design some resonant chapters. That would be perfect. (For example: loyal bodyguards, loyal protectors, large rewards, which can make the protagonist more personable. In addition, if there are too many women, he will definitely be favored by the big brother in society. You can write about kidnapping, forcefully saving your girlfriend, directly using money to cooperate with the government, the Flying Tigers coming out to suppress local snakes... Etc., These are all very classic chapters, just personal suggestions, because looking at women all the time will not be good. After all, there are still many people who don't like to watch studs 😂 😂) After all, I am also a veteran VIP. Why can't I write comments while reading 🤦🤦🤦

This book is the ceiling of similar books,,,,, it's good, it's good

It's quite good. If life isn't very exciting, why shouldn't the novel be exciting?

The articles on harem entrepreneurship are more exciting and refreshing, but there are too many harems, and some women stop them after the second chapter, which is a bit too fast.

A must-read classic novel for men Although a bit exaggerated but i like The ending is perfect~Thank you so much to the author 😄😄😄😄

Maybe I have read too many online novels and am very picky, but this novel with this writing style makes me want to put it down! She has muscles and bones, flesh and blood! The emotional description is delicate and the character's personality is well portrayed, giving us a natural appearance: campus style, entrepreneurial psychology, and pure naturalness of a girl! The expressions are connected very smoothly! Thank you to the author for your hard work! Thumbs up for your writing 👍!

I have read both of the author's books and they are very well written. But I still have some suggestions: First, the timeline is still not long, the main plot is within 2 years, and it is too early to have a child. Second, the description of the heroine is not vivid enough. Some heroines are still not written in the later stage. You can stop writing so many people and write more accurately. Third, since it is a rebirth literary career, we should focus on it. In the early stage, we are crazy about making money, and in the middle and later stages, we must become a standard setter for high-end and sophisticated industries. Fourth, some plots can be made crazier. In short, this is a very good novel that satisfies all the thoughts of men. Although the writing is very obscure, it can still be seen. PS: The core of the competition between China and the United States is the opportunity for the next industrial revolution.