Naruto************

The writing is okay! It's that part between Uchiha Shisui and Yuhi Kurenai that was so bad!

Great, Konohamaru is dead, I won't be disgusted by the resurrection of Konohamaru, even though he has been shaved off ! ! ! ! ! !

You, the author, are awesome for turning a fanfic into a horror novel.

I feel a little pitiful for Asma😔

It's scary to think about it. Those four-dimensional creatures that give rewards are us, right?

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hehe！ ! ! ! ! !

It's simply a masterpiece, and it's full of flaws. I hope the author will keep updating it and become a perpetual motion machine [laughing]

I feel that this book is well written and has a sense of drama. Of course, this may also be due to my personal reasons and the author speeding up the update. I want to read it.

The style of this book is very unique, and the writing is also very realistic. Some people may not be able to accept it, but I still recommend you to read it. After all, it is very close to reality, and the darkness and light in the world are also well written! ! ! I would like to emphasize again that this book is very good, but there are some parts that you may not be able to accept, but the literary talent is still acceptable. The first ten pictures are a bit watery, so I suggest you start reading the 11th picture.

I hope the next book will also be erotic

Author, we want to see a family that loves each other and lives together harmoniously.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh running s**t I'm so annoyed, the plot is so awkward, the author can practice his writing and read more about Naruto. This type of book is the most embarrassing after reading seven or eight books. However, the author's attitude in the comment area is very good, so I'll give it a five-star rating. I hope it can improve a bit. Come on

I personally feel that the writing is pretty good and can be improved.

I just figured it out, don't the spectators from another world refer to us readers?

The subject matter is not bad. Come on, the author. I don't have any money now. If you have money, please support me.

I think all boys should be allowed to dance in women's clothing, what do you think? Goose this idea.

Wonderful, wonderful and beautiful!

Hey author, I have read so many comments and they are basically scolding you and saying that your writing is not good, but you still have to work hard. If you write well, others will not say anything about you. As the saying goes, "Failure is the mother of success." Keep working hard. I will give you a five-star

Nice writing, keep up the good work.

I don't know how this book passed the review process.

Apart from the fact that the character's personality has changed beyond recognition, it's okay

It looks pretty good, but it was only updated to chapter 50 when I came in. . . . . .

In fact, I gave up after reading only chapter 11. I didn't want to read it, but the author said that the following chapter 15 was very exciting. Ah, so I'm going to read it. I'll give it 4 stars first to encourage the little author.

I hope the author can continue to work hard. I think this book is very interesting.

Not bad, I hope the protagonist can be darkened

I have only seen three books on this subject so far.

Not bad, the updated chapter is also philosophical, explaining that in today's society, five-star

It's pretty good-looking, much better than other similar ones.

Yes, just because the protagonist's name is my uncle, we have to support him

Divine power, earth-blasting stars