One Piece Invites Me on Board

The ending is very good. It is the best among all the pirate novels I have read. If the One Piece anime has the same ending, it seems to be good, but I won't give five stars if Momonosuke is not dead.

How can I put it this way? This book has the smoothest plot I have ever read in a Pirates fanfic. Of course, the protagonist of this book is equivalent to the Invincible style (the kind who gets stronger a little bit but is never defeated), so the villain's IQ is naturally worrying. Also, the protagonist is from time travel, but the protagonist's intermittent pirate memory really needs to be strengthened, but overall, this book is indeed a pretty good Pirates fanfic.

"Luffy, right? I can accept your invitation, but I have something to say first. My goal is One Piece and the pursuit of the lost history, so if you invite me on board, you must have an archaeological expert." Moonlight said. "Yes. You and I have thought of it together. As long as we can meet, we will definitely invite them. In addition to historians, there will also be chefs, musicians, navigators, shipwrights, and ship doctors." Luffy nodded and agreed. "Okay, Captain!" Hearing this, Yueguang nodded and agreed. "Great, before we set sail, let's send this guy to a nearby island." Luffy nodded and pointed at Kirby behind him. "Is this guy? You are really helpful."

The other pirates either formed their own groups or were in other people's pirate groups. Finally, I saw one on the airship😁😁

This book makes me feel like I'm watching the real One Piece, but this one is even more burning than that one. I highly recommend reading it. It's so exciting.

This is a beautiful book, but it is also full of holes. This book is the only pirate fanfic I have read. From the description of Moonlight's strength and action language, especially the part where Moonlight saves people but sails the boat in the wrong direction, it can be seen that the Straw Hats are harmonious. Others write that the protagonist is invincible, handsome, and cold. I always feel that I can't fit in with the Straw Hats. But this article refreshed my understanding of pirate fanfic. I like this book very much. After reading it, I still feel a bit reluctant to part with it.

To be honest, this novel is really well written. I really like the feeling of the protagonist merging with Luffy and his gang.

Author, I hope you can write another pirate novel. This one is very nice. If possible, it would be great to have another one with a female protagonist. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's very beautiful, but Momonosuke is not dead

Although the ending feels weird, it is the best quality One Piece fanfic I have ever seen. I hope there will be a sequel😘

The main core of this book is that a family has conflicts, which triggers a series of world wars! ! !

Personally, I think it's okay, and the plot direction of the whole book is correct. And it's not the kind of person who is directly invincible at the beginning. He is strong when he should be strong, and weak when he should be weak. And the ending was okay. But if some people insist on Monosuke's death and feel that it won't work without him dying, they can leave. Or maybe you feel that you can kill Whitebeard, so of course you can leave. After all, there are more than 500 pictures in this book, so it is impossible to cover everything. There are still a few minor bugs that should be there, but that doesn't hurt. You can take a look. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.)

Very good writing so far. I hope that in the future time travelers will not be too strong.

I feel that this is the real One Piece. This is the only one that made me read the book word for word seriously. It is really exciting and a must-read! ! ! ! ! !

Wow, I can give you 5 stars and then give you 11 points, just in case you are not proud😜😜😜Come on

It's pretty cool, but I want to know how the skull survived after losing the Underworld Fruit?

I'll give it five stars first. I like Pirates, and this is the end of it. I'm curious about the author's one piece.

How should I put it? The protagonist joins the Straw Hats, but I always feel that there is a gap in it. The original Straw Hats have become a foil, but it is really fun to read the book from the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist is very powerful.

He shaped a person who does not belong to this world into a person of this world. His writing style, imagination and imagination are all top-notch. After reading it, I was a little bit confused. It seemed that this was more like a new story than a fanfic. I hope the author will continue to release new works. After watching it, I was very disappointed. I didn't even see half of it and thought it was rubbish.

The book leaves a pretty good ending at the end. But the story never ends; When a story ends, there will be a new beginning. Although there are some regrets in this story, this is life. There will always be regrets, so we look for perfection in this hypocritical world, but life is so wonderful because it is not perfect, and it makes people race against time in a limited time. Moonlight, Luffy, Sanji, Zoro... Their stories are not over yet, and we will also begin to describe our story, a different story. This adventurous spirit and people will remain in my heart forever...

It's very good. It's much better than those who start a harem right away. So far, this is the only fanfic in the One Piece series that I've read. The protagonist is very powerful, but the author didn't completely destroy the Straw Hats.

The content follows the anime, without changing the plot, and it's not far-fetched. It's quite good.

Author, can you write a time-travel novel about "Spell Return"? Please

Not bad, but it's a pity that it adheres too closely to the original work and lacks a little bit. It would be better to continue or rewrite another story line and flesh out the plot~

It's a nice pirate fanfic, but it doesn't have too many details and the text is a bit empty.

The early part was okay, but the mid-term was somewhat late (in the mid-term, it was mainly a bit funny, but it forcibly reduced the protagonist's combat power so it felt a bit collapsed). I felt that the combat power was a bit collapsed. I just want to say that the late ending was wonderful (the ending surpassed a lot of fan fiction). In addition, let me first say that Moonlight has been here for more than ten years, so the plot may not be that comprehensive (of course this is my personal opinion). After all, who can remember things so clearly more than ten years ago.

The finish is a bit sloppy, but the design is pretty good. If you don't know how to write wt, you can refer to it.

It's very good, but it takes the protagonist too fast, and I don't feel the growth of the protagonist.

Very exciting. Both the plot and the characterization are very good. The passion and invincibility are mixed with daily warmth.

I want to read harem stories, but why aren't they available?