Adventure: Start as Wang Ye, Teammate Zhang Qilin

It's good to watch, but the content is a bit lacking. Well, the role played by Wang Ye is a bit unqualified and a bit wrong. I hope the author will continue to be inspired and happy every day.

Very well written! Keep up the good work. Once upon a time, there was a kitten. He clamped himself on the clothesline and wanted to stretch his ears. It is said that he fell in love with a rabbit.

Author, please listen to me. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, and the language is plain yet elegant. It is brilliant, concise and full of meaning, and it can be called a model of the article. This article shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is vivid and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive me for being selfish. No matter how gorgeous the words are, I can't describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say: Your novel is so touching!... One more chapter?

To be honest, the author, Zhang Qiling and the protagonist are together, I think it is really good. This couple is really awesome, I think it's great, so cute! The author tells me your home address if! If they're not together anymore, tell me what color you like and I'm going to take you away in a sack. Write a novel for me alone, write what I like, hehe! This is really good for CP. I beg you not to break up any heroines and get out of here. My male protagonist is beautiful alone, as long as his little brother is around.

The author is really humorous. I read the title and synopsis and thought it was a normal adventure to spawn monsters. I came in and saw if there was a relationship line. Zhang Qiling and the protagonist thought it was a bisexual and chased away a group of people who didn't like bisexuals. In the end, they found out that Zhang Qiling was a private woman who disguised herself as a man and offended the remaining group of bisexuals.

Sisters and sisters, look here! [Working on the manuscript] The guy in the early stage is still very good, but the guy in the middle and later stages is not so good, but our Chen Xuan is amazing from beginning to end, with such explosive power! That sense of security! In the process, he also flirted with the younger brother. The innocent young man was flirted with online, his face was so pink! [Admiration] I still enjoy watching it so far! As a result, a reverse boy turned into a beauty! Good guy! It caught me off guard [shocked] my brain shut down [petrified] sisters with strong receptive abilities, highly recommended! [Note] Sisters who can't accept it, look ahead or retreat! Retreat! Retreat! [Punch hard]

It's pretty good-looking, but why is the younger brother a female in the later stage? 😭😭😭I lost my CP o(╥╥)o

Why don't you let Chen Xuan change his clothes a little? After all, he is playing the role of the Yiling Patriarch. If his clothes are still the Taoist priest uniforms from before, they are a little different... Also, since he is playing the Yiling Patriarch, his personality should be a little colder. I don't understand why forced changes are needed [grievance]

Everything is good up front, the only dissatisfaction is how the guy turned into a woman at the end [angry][angry][angry] 2023.8.28 Monday

Zhang Qiling, I can't seem to remember clearly. I only remember that he loves to use black gold ancient swords and wear hoodies. He is 180cm tall and suffers from amnesia. His two fingers are unusually long. His eyes are indifferent and he is unparalleled. The most amazing peaks are the Qinling Mountains, the most arrogant snow-capped mountains are Changbai, the clear light on the sea and the full moon are Xisha, the most broken slips are the Warring States silk scripts, the thinnest handwriting is the thin gold script, and the most enviable part of the world is the tomb robbing notes. We may never know whether the third uncle is the creator or the narrator. The fat man is the sun, the little brother is the god, and Wu Xie is the human world. If there is no human world, no one will see the brilliance of the sun, and the gods will lose their only bond with this world. Take me home, wait for me to go home, go home for me - I am naive, I am naive when I am wrong, I am naive at all times

I think the personalities are okay, but don't be too different, otherwise it will look a bit weird! After all, you have already preconceived ideas about one role, and the other role is too different, and there is a sudden change, which makes you a little confused. Of course, the most important thing is to cp. I hope I can come back as soon as possible.

This book is very good, but the audience is not that good? The rest of the place is fine. I hope the author will write better about the audience in the future! Come on.

Ouch! ! ! I haven't read Wang Ye and Qi, but I really like the big novels! ! ! Good luck! ! !

Dear author, please update as soon as possible! This Kavin is really awesome! Author, what are you stuck on? What you are stuck on is the happiness of readers! (-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___ -̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩ ̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩___-̩̩̩ -̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)(-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩__-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩-̩̩̩) Please update.

When I think of the protagonist and the little brother, I smile like a fujoshi. I hope the author can let the protagonist and the little brother do CP! ! ! (￣Y▽￣)~* Cover your mouth and snicker I really didn't see the back! After looking through previous book reviews, I realized that this book is so poisonous at the end.

The content of this book is indeed good, but the first paragraph of it is too unpopular with netizens. To be honest, I rarely change book reviews 😂 And the author is so good at writing that I can't even count the number of pregnancies the author has had (ps: the author Kavin is pregnant)

🌚🌚I think the barrage section is about the same. After all, bloggers or celebrities with more fans will be criticized for doing something🌚But why doesn't this author remember his own plot? He clearly said before that he treats the male protagonist of Youtiao as not an ordinary person, and now he says that he has always treated him as an ordinary person🌚🌚

I like it very much so far, and I suggest that the protagonist's character be more contrasting in the future. For example, someone with a cold personality, such as Lan Wangji. I'm really looking forward to what will happen when two big ice cubes come together. Just thinking about it makes me happy

Very nice! The protagonist and the little brother are really sweet! It's just that the little brother has weakened a bit. But overall I personally think it's okay. (Also, may I ask the author, where is your address? There is a little cutie here who really wants to give you some "souvenirs"~)

It's so beautiful\(//∇//)\The interaction between the little brother and the time traveler was so sweet

So pretty! ! ! The author will update it as soon as possible! ! ! ! !

Author, you can try to write about Li Xin. That's because Li Xin has three forms, and he can bring in the skin of a god and a devil, half god, half devil, and he can write a separate plot for the awakening of the devil and the god. This way there are a lot of plot lines to develop. Come on author٩(*´◒`*)۶

Not bad, not bad, I bumped into Chen Xuan (´◊ω◊｀)

After reading more, I know that the live broadcast barrages in the article can make people mad, so I don't read these barrages in detail, and only concentrate on being my teacher~✧*｡٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*｡

I think it's great, but I feel like it's a little broken later on, but how can it be sweet if it doesn't break? I can do that! ! ! (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)

It's so sweet. Please marry Lu Xuan where you are. I'll move here from the Civil Affairs Bureau (✿＞◡❛). And the author °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°Wonderful ╭( ･ㅂ･)وCreate greater glory (✺^▽^)✺Come on

Why did the rating drop? When I first watched it, it was 8.7, And then I came over to watch it. I thought it was pretty good. Why did the score drop? ⊙ω⊙Thank you so much to the author💪, why did you lose your followers? It dropped to 8.1. I watched helplessly as you dropped to this point step by step. It's very cool.

At first glance this book looks good but you have to update it quickly I can't wait. 😍😍😍The establishment must be as fast as these vehicles. 🚀🚀🚀🚄🚄🚄🚉🚉🚉

This book is very interesting, thank you to the author\^O^/! Support you!(*￣￣*) But can we say goodbye to old Kavin →_→ It's not enough to watch at all (><) Urge for more updates \\(≧▽≦)∥

It's really beautiful, but it's just not enough. The author would like to work on the coding💕