Grandfather**********

This book, how should I put it, has a bad point, that is, after leaving the hospital, I kept staring at the beautiful woman, but after looking at it, it was really good. I believe I will definitely not be wrong. Five stars are enough.

The writing is quite good, and it makes people want to read it, and there is still a little bit of expectation, and it doesn't involve all kinds of mindless and crazy things.

The story is interesting and the subject matter is novel. However, the author's content focuses too much on the characters' language and lacks the description of the characters' personalities and behaviors. Some plots are too exaggerated, which makes people feel tired. Although mindless novels are indeed enjoyable to read, they will become boring after reading too much. If you are a full-time writer or really like writing novels, I hope you can pay more attention to the overall coherence of the development of the novel story, which will help increase your book fans. (Nothing else, I just hope the work can be better●ｽv●)

The language material of the live broadcast is very rich, and the author has a good grasp of it! 👍👍👍

The moment I had the idea of ​​having a granddaughter, I fell in love with it. It was like watching a warm family TV series. There were no ups and downs. It was quite bland. It wasn't ugly, and I couldn't say it was too good to watch. More than 8 points is just that.

Very cool. Although it is said that cultivators do whatever they want. But I feel like this one is recruiting disciples after this one. A bit sloppy. Overall it's pretty good, give it 5 stars.

This book is very interesting, thank you to the author!

Urban cultivating immortality is a cliché, but the main character being a grandfather is quite novel. The atmosphere is very lively, the characters are lively and the plot is unique. Leisure cultivation.

The novel is ok, it is easy to read, funny and easy to cultivate immortality. Just write it like this. The author is great. Never use a knife🔪 Support

I have read it, including other people's comments, and everyone is saying that Su Yan is not good. Su Yan was indeed a bit too casual when she first came out, but she became very good later on. However, I suggest that this kind of character can be written more before the heroine is determined, or brought out from the beginning, otherwise it will feel a bit sudden when she suddenly becomes the heroine in the middle. There are indeed some peeing spots in the middle, you can get it after reading a few more chapters, and the article is not too long, so it is a very good novel to pass the time. After all, the book has been in short supply for a long time, haha ​​[laugh] [laugh]

Overall, it's pretty good. I've always watched it carefully. Although some places are a bit exaggerated, it's still acceptable. It's just that he was called grandpa before and then got married, which was a bit awkward. Maybe it was too much too quickly. In fact, it can be written about the male protagonist's ideological struggle. Everything else is fine.

Quite exciting. The routine is still the same, but it creates a different feeling. Support it. Hope it doesn't break down.

Author, please listen to me. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, it can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart can't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish my selfishness. Please forgive me! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it is impossible to describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say: your novel is very touching. Will you add another chapter?

It's so interesting😄I couldn't stop laughing and gave the author a like👍👍👍

There is a smell of fireworks, I hope it won't collapse and just become a blind cultivator (✪▽✪).

This book made me laugh. It is one of the better novels I have ever read. I believe the author will write better, 😀😀

The new book is good. It's just that the beauty at the beginning is a bit distracting. But it's also to get closer to life. Come on (ง •̀_•́)งLooking up. How can it be done with only fifty chapters?

Five-star reviews are coming. Although there are some flaws, it is really good. I hope the author will update it soon😏

A commemoration of entering the pit, a new book to open up, recommended by the system, visual inspection is okay, the writing style in the first few chapters is a bit smooth, and the setting is a bit strange. It is a cool type of writing, but it is not particularly cool, not the kind of coolness that is revealed inadvertently, it is just forcing you to do what you want. You think it's cool, but the foreshadowing is a bit weak. I just want to ask who the heroine is and where the love scene is. I don't want to watch the love between grandfather and grandson. It's chapter 42. The grandpa's heroine didn't show up, and the granddaughter's hero didn't show up either. Instead, the heroine took her place and rewarded her one after another. I don't understand... I hope it's not a bad ending, and I hope I can finish it successfully! Amen - Amitabha - Infinite Lord!

Lily Lily Lily👀The sense of immersion is so strong, the protagonist is already my grandfather

A very good spiritual recovery + live broadcast + powerful soul penetration type novel Upgrades quickly, no lag, no madness, no pitfalls At the end, the grandfather and granddaughter are together. Some people don't like this scene. For me, I can read it however the author writes it. It's still very good. Like it.

It's beautiful and interesting. Others are traveling through the immortal world to become immortals, but you are an immortal traveling through modern times. Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Come on, author, keep updating, keep an eye on you, we will reward you for three chapters a day.

Yes, it must be rated five stars. This book is wonderful and I recommend everyone to read it.

Good-looking, very good-looking, so good-looking, so fucking good-looking, so damn good-looking

Overall, it's good. It might be better if we can keep developing the plot of the earth and downplay the plot of the fairy world. After all, the plot of the earth is relatively more daily and cheerful, while most of the time in the fairy world is spent on fighting and training.

Interesting, witty, not embarrassing, the logic is correct, the settings before and after are not confusing, and it looks good

As a book about rebirth, the subject matter is novel. I hope to continue fighting hard. One more thing, I hope the update can be faster😄

This book is super nice. I highly recommend it. The content is so clear that it's like seeing it with your eyes open. I highly recommend it.

This novel is very good for its genre, but there are still some minor flaws in some places. I hope the author will work harder! If the male protagonist is awesome, make him even more awesome!