
Disciple, Stop It, You Are Committing the Following Crime
徒孙住手,你这是以下犯上
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 206k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Two Male Protagonists
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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I Want a Master-Disciple Story, a Male Master and a Male Apprentice, the Master Is Aloof and the Apprentice Is Paranoid, Thank You
The Irascible Regent and the Delicate and Beautiful Emperor
Is there that kind of ancient emperor and regent who were paired together? Then the emperor coughed every three steps and gasped every five steps, and he was a puppet emperor.
A Novel About Cultivating Immortality with Two Men and No Heroine
Two men and no woman, the main cultivators of immortality, quickly travel through the group and dote on the evil ancient times
Send Out Your Best Master-Disciple Love😏😏😏
What kind of master-student romance would you like, where the heroine is the master?
Is There a Master-Disciple Story in Which the Aunt Laughs Throughout the Whole Process, Without a Female Protagonist?
More cruel
It's Beautiful, It's Finished, I Can't Bear to Delete It, I Regret Not Watching It
Worth an all nighter
Shuangnan, Ancient Times, Jianghu, Sisters Please💦💦
A Sweet Story About Two Nans, the Male Protagonists Are Both Strong, and the Ending Is HE
Here Are Some High-Scoring Novels Without a Heroine
Let's try some high-scoring novels without a heroine, something with more or less brains.
Is There the Kind of Shuangnan Main Article That Is Brave and Bold in the World🙏
The Main Text of the Ancient Saying "Shuang Nan"
A Book Seeking Love Between Master and Disciple
Master and apprentice
The Master-Disciple Story Is Similar to the Villain Master Who Is as Beautiful as a Flower
Seeking to Be Possessed by the Devil, Criticize Like Crazy, There Is No Holy Mother, No Heroine
I want to read a book similar to "Villain: I, the Forbidden Lord of Darkness, Will Destroy the Eternal Heavens".
Master, I have read too many articles. Please ask my uncle and nephew. It would be great if they don't abuse me. It's also best if it's a two-man theme. Something like "Uncle Master, are you still running away?"
Is There Really No Shuangnanxian Chivalrous Novel in the World That Does Not Wear Books and Is Not Reborn? ?
Help🆘, I really want to read this kind of article. It's best if it's a master and a disciple. They both know how to suck.
















































































In the end, A'que didn't meet Feng Zhi's young apprentice and broke his promise. After all, Shiyi didn't know that the woman he liked also liked him. A'que carried Hua Yunxian to a paradise no one knew about. He was still greedy for Yunxian's peach blossom wine and thought about the peach blossom cake at Guixu Villa... Nothing could go back, under this cliff. Everyone knows about the big devil Yuan Cen, but how do they know about his past? Everyone praises the young knight in red, but how do you know that he slaughtered Aque's family? This young man held a grudge and wanted revenge, but he killed the wrong person, his mentor, his lovely junior brother, and the entire Guixu sect...
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Everyone knows that the devil Yuan Cen is unforgivable, but who knows that the devil Yuan Cen also has a child's heart❤️. If the red swordsman hadn't destroyed his family and killed everyone, why would he have so many things on his back? Why did the red swordsman kill so many people, but still be respected by the world? Even if he is hateful, there are always innocent people. The world respects the swordsman in red, scolds Yuan Cen, the demon who avenged a wrong, but died to apologize. But if it weren't for the swordsman in red, Ning Alan's family was ruined, why would he have to admit his wrong enemy, avenge his wrong, practice magic skills, and finally know the truth? Devastated, she apologized to death and suffered infamy, but the murderer was at large and was respected by thousands of people. A Lan lost her memory and started a new life. She fell in love with Hua Yunxian, but you prevented them from falling in love, and even felt that A Lan's last apology was not enough. You always say that the devil Yuan Cen is not a good person, but a heinous devil. But if a heinous devil avenges the wrong person and kills the wrong person, he will even die to apologize and be heartbroken. He originally had a childlike innocence and disdained killing, but the hatred of genocide forced him to give up his childlike innocence and practice magic skills. Who caused all this? The demon Yuan Cen you reviled, after gaining the strength to defeat the enemy he considered, all he wanted in his heart was to defeat the master. Even after recovering his memory and knowing that the world had reviled him, he never harmed anyone, and even the person who helped you eliminate demons and slay demons was the demon. 😭😭😭😭😭 The world is unfair and I have pity on my Ah Lan (ಥ_ಥ)
Because I prefer ancient novels, I chose this novel, which was not highly rated. I didn't expect that there would be a surprise. I don't know why the ratings for such a good novel are not high. Regardless of the subject matter and writing, it is considered to be of high quality.
In the end, the cliff gave way to love, and there were no more clouds and gaps in the world. The author's writing is superb, and the twist at the end really surprised me. It really made me cry at the end. I really didn't expect that the two of them... (No spoilers, just watch it for yourself) actually cried. Zhizhi and Shiyi are also a bit sadistic. When Aque said Zhizhi couldn't get married in the future, I was wondering if she would be like Axiang, but it turned out that Zhizhi didn't even tell him about the person she liked, and she liked him too. Then let's talk about Bai Youran. I don't think he is a villain, after all, he loved Leng Yiqiu, but at that time...(Looking at it for yourself), so he couldn't marry Leng Yiqiu, and he also had his own difficulties. Later, Bai Youran also told the world about Leng Zhuo and Leng Yiqiu. I can understand Leng Zhuo not letting go. After all, it is a fact that Zhuo and Qiu had poor life experiences.
Hua Yunxian at the beginning: Why is this person so annoying? Hua Yunxian, who was agitated and kissed Ah Que: "This guy... Doesn't seem to be very annoying. He's pretty good-looking." When Hua Yunxian realized that he liked Ah Que: Ah Que, I miss you so much... Ah Que at the beginning: This person (Hua Yunxian) is good-looking, not bad. Ah Que after being kissed by Hua Yunxian:! ? How could he... Did he kiss me just now? Later, he discovered that he fell in love with Hua Yunxian's Ah Que: (I don't know how to describe it) the title became "A Xian" every time. Both attack and reception are pure, and Hua Yunxian is willing to leave the school for Ah Que's words of not caring about the world! ! I'll go straight to yyds! ! ~\(≧▽≦)/~
In the end, Eleven didn't know that the only one he liked also liked him, and Ah Que took Ah Xian to a paradise no one knew about. The world only knew that the boy in red was a hero, but they didn't know that he slaughtered all of Ah Que's family. Ah Que was finally my fault. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]
Super nice I was looking for this book because of the shortage of books. I saw that the score was only 8.8. I didn't want to read it at first (the score was not high). But after reading the reviews, they all said it was good, so I read it with the attitude of giving it a try. After reading it, I have to say that the author's writing is really good. I highly recommend reading it.
"Axian, what is your ideal life like?" "Wherever you are, it is my ideal place..."
There are still some feelings that are difficult to let go... I was originally a guest who never returned from the blue lamp... But I fell in love with the world of mortals because of the drunkenness... We miss each other in the same place and are covered in snow, and we can be regarded as growing old together in this life...
This novel is really super good. The story has novel themes and ups and downs in the content. You must read this kind of unique novel. I was so moved at night that I couldn't easily evaluate the love between them. It is a good book worth reading.
After reading it, the story line is very complete. It's really beautiful, so I wrote two sentences of the original text: "Wu Tong treats each other in old age, Yun Que can hardly live alone" and "Because I meet you in this life, I can't give up my life." Before Aque lost his memory, there was no Yunxian, but after he lost his memory, it was all Yunxian. Yunxian fell in love with Yuncen and they had a good ending. Unfortunately, Eleven has never met the girl he likes once, and Yu Fengzhi cannot tell Eleven personally that she likes him. And Bai Xingzhi also married a girl he didn't like. After all, he couldn't live a free and unrestrained life and could only be a caged bird. The biggest villain never understood how one person could give up his life for another person until his death. And Du Qianyu, although he never thought about seeking revenge against Yun Cen, he never saw Yun Cen again until his death. I think he was also very regretful. That's all. If you want to know more about it, just read the article.
This book is funny at the beginning and sad at the end, but the ending is good after all. Author, you obviously lied to me for nothing and I lost a lot of gold beans. But now it is April 16, 2022. I was lucky enough to see Ah Que and Ah Xian grow old together. Grandfather, if you were exposed to the snow together once, you would be considered dead together in this life. Originally, Qing Deng was not a guest, but because of the drunkenness, he fell in love with the world of mortals.
I thought it would be hard to get over it... In the end we got together, they were sweet and sad and I really liked them. Once we fell in love with each other and were showered with snow, we can be considered old together in this life. We were originally strangers to each other, but we fell in love with the world of mortals because of drunkenness... In this life, I met you, and I couldn't give up my life...
The extra chapter finally rescued me, but after all, Eleven didn't know Zhizhi's feelings, and Ah Shuang didn't know what the uncle in the master's words looked like. The book is good to read and the plot is also exciting. Of course it is sweet and sad. Anyway, just remember that the extras are good medicine🌝
Although it's a bit slow, the plot is tight and every character is interesting. Like.
I was tortured to death, but my hand slipped and there was an extra episode. Oops - so good! 😄😄😄
Nice! ! ! ! ! Very nice! ! ! ! It's a bit like the Patriarch of the Demonic Way, but a little different. In short, I like it very much. I will always be touched a lot when reading this book. Sometimes I cry and sometimes I laugh. I am very satisfied when I read the final ending!
In the end, Eleven didn't know that Zhizhi, whom he liked, also liked him, and A'que carried A'Xian to a paradise no one knew about... The world only knew that A'que was a big devil, but they didn't know that the boy in red slaughtered A'que's whole family. The last few chapters are so sad.
Very good, I like it very much. I hope that Ah Que and Ah Xian will be together for a lifetime, happy and worry-free, so that they can fulfill their lifelong wish and never forget the same journey together!
What is right and wrong, right and wrong, are all told by others. Hua Yunxian and Aque only see each other. No matter what the outside world looks like, you are still the you I know in my heart.
Wow! The author is amazing👍. I looked at all the book reviews and found that they were either five stars or four stars. There was no one below four stars. It was really amazing. To be honest, this article touched my heart. This type of article is my favorite, bar none. How can I put it this way? The author's writing is very good and I won't lose money if I invest in it, hahaha!
When I first started watching it, I thought it was he, but I didn't expect the ending to be (actually not that sad), but the author added an extra story. In a place where there were only A'que and Hua Yunxian, they were together again, and no one bothered them anymore. It's really beautiful, thank you to the author for your hard work. Highly recommended!!!
When I first read it, it was purely because of the author's good writing style. Later, as I read it, I gradually became attracted to the plot and characters in the book, and I finished it without even realizing it. The latter part of the plot really made me cry. There are also many regrets. Ah Que could not meet Zhi Zhi's young apprentice. Shi Yi didn't know that Zhi Zhi also liked him.
Aque and Axian are living very well in paradise, and there is no more trouble in the world. If Zhizhi had not died, she would have lived with Shiyi and given birth to a baby.
I almost thought it was be, but fortunately the author left me a trace of comfort at the end. But the writing style is great, I fell in love with it at first glance!
I'm not very good at commenting, so I can only wish them happiness and good health for the rest of their lives!
Zhizhi's death has become the biggest difficulty in this article. Fortunately, the ending is good.
The writing is so good! If there wasn't a side story, it would be another story [laughing]
Super exciting ≥≤Big love~( ̄▽ ̄~)~, come on (ง •̀_•́)งThe author is great.