I've Been Trapped on This Day for Ten Thousand Years

A saliva novel?

If you are sick, go and see him 🤮

There are too many loopholes and it's not smooth.

The first few chapters are okay, but the writing in the later chapters is terrible!

The next chapter comes out of nowhere. I don't even know what it said. It's rubbish.

Not good

Baffling.

I suggest changing the name to "My Life Over Ten Thousand Years Again" and then turning it into a fantasy (joke)

Obviously I haven't stepped into social life yet and I don't have any common sense. The writing is inconsistent!

Damn it, I was blinded 666