Zhutian: I Want to Change the World

It's pretty good, come on, as long as there's no heroine, no ambiguity, no virginity, it'll be fine

Not bad, the protagonist is not a womanizer, is decisive in killing, and will put aside the kindness in his heart for the sake of profit. He is a person who does great things. The author's writing is okay, but he always writes unnecessary things. I haven't finished reading the first volume, which is only about a hundred and a few chapters, but after reading the first volume, I feel that most of the first volume can be skipped, which tells you that the system is not only for the protagonist, but also for places similar to the main god space, such as the Ten Thousand Realms Space. The Emperor of Great Xia in the first volume joined the Ten Thousand Realms Space. The author is reminded to write the plot quickly and write ten or twenty chapters of the battle without writing any key points. It is just a water character. Pay attention to the system owner. Except for the protagonist, you should write as little as possible. It is best to change the settings and not write other systems. To be honest, this thing is easy to persuade. Come on author, give it five stars because I want to read it. After all, there aren't many books with good protagonists and good plots.

The nature of some of the masterminds traveling around and changing the trajectory of the world is quite interesting, but the update speed (○ﾟεﾟ○) is a little lacking.

Similar to fast travel, the main task is to change the trajectory of the world, half-time behind-the-scenes, not the Holy Mother, come on, the author, I like it very much (灬º‿º灬)♡ Don't be put off by ratings, thank you. Those who give low scores are all gangsters/dog heads to save their lives.

It's not bad, but I don't know why the score is so low. I think it's better than many novels, and it's not too bad. This is the best thing.

The book is still good, but I feel that the levels of the worlds I have encountered so far are a bit low. . . The highest is the pinnacle of foundation building. . .

After reading Chapter 10, I was persuaded to quit. A strong Qi practitioner is so terrifying... The beginning was okay, the cards were produced using mechanical engineering to produce prototypes (a very large project can indeed print hundreds of millions of cards in a short period of time) Then use Spirit Gathering to complete it (although I don't know why the world's spiritual energy density, which can complete tens of millions of space cards in such a small place in seven days, is described as very low in the book.) I think it's very reasonable (just assume that the protagonist has a very high vision and cannot support breaking time, and the world beyond space is a low-fantasy world) But in Chapter 10, tens of millions of wild beasts were harvested in one night (not yet overnight, it was only midnight, three hours of feeding) If a crowd as dense as a prefecture-level city disappears overnight, it would take half a day to mobilize a well-trained army of tens of millions (and it is also a special emergency march, transported by air.) If the author doesn't change his evil ways, I really can't force myself to pretend to be blind and continue reading. It's so uncomfortable!!! The first few chapters were obviously normal, but in the tenth chapter I almost died from poison. (If you want to read it, I suggest you skip Chapter 10, and just make up your own mind that the protagonist spent a long time slowly collecting beasts, rationalize it to yourself, and pretend you didn't see it...) 💕 Come on, Mr. Author!!! (I will definitely read your next book and give it a reward. Let's forget about this one...)

There is no heroine in this book, but the plot is interesting and the author is active. Those who like to watch the world behind the scenes can give it a try. (The first two worlds are more poisonous)😜

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After reading it for so long, I feel a little embarrassed now without commenting to the author ¯\_(ツ)_/¯