海贼二十年，我教路飞开发尼卡形

Chapter 28 so far, I really like it. I haven't watched One Piece seriously, I just follow along when my brother watches it, and sometimes I skip it. There are many pirate fanfics out there, but none of them suit your taste. Maybe it's because I'm a little picky! But I really like this one so far. I'll get it now while there aren't many people around. I'll be an old fan in the future, hahaha ✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡

Author, I really want to see the scene where the protagonist defeats Roger the Whitebeard! Really want to see it! The protagonists in other novels are all semi-invincible, which is really uncomfortable to read. I hope the author makes the protagonist stronger. I recommend brothers in the army to read it and give you a thumbs up👍

Let me tell you, don't read reviews when reading a book. If you do read them, it's for reference only. They say it's not good, but they think it's good for your taste. There are also some people who buy reviews to make their novels popular, say they are good, and then buy reviews to discredit others. Anyway, I think it's quite good.

Recommended by a three-year old book boy. The author has good writing and rich plot. If there is no heroine yet and you want to watch it without a heroine, come and read it. The protagonist is not as powerful as the Virgin in the early stage, so it is not beyond the standard. For me, I have a good grasp of this. The early stage is too invincible and the later stage is difficult to write. I recommend you to keep reading. The author will update for the eighth time. When I see a book with good writing, (I don't know if the author has time to reply at a fixed update time), I recommend reading it. It is highly recommended and the plot of One Piece is rich. You can popularize science while reading it. It is a big benefit for people who like reading novels but don't like watching anime! Recommended, recommended, five-star praise! ! !

Personally, I think it's very good. The timeline is also well written. It just depends on whether the growth line will jump after Luffy goes to sea. The foreshadowing in the early stage must have Wang Zha at the end. CP9. The Revolutionary Army, the 5 Emperors, and the Navy all have clones.

This book is more in line with my personality. Don't be lazy when developing. It is the fruit of soil. The development is not very good. Earth can also overcome water. You can use the Chinese principle of the five elements to restrain each other. You can also use soil to make a super giant.

To be honest, the score of 8.6 Is a bit unfair. I personally think that the author's writing is really good, and it should be about 9.1. This book looks much more comfortable than those that have been published, and the concept and plot settings are very logical. It can be seen that the author is a careful person, but I still want to make two comments to the author: 1: Don't be led astray by readers. It is difficult to adjust to the opinions of others. No matter how good your writing is, you can't stop the trolls. 2: You are so slow to update. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

Good book, good book. It was rated 8.5 When I read it this morning, but now it's rated 9. Brothers, do you understand? Follow him. The author is great. Please update soon.

In the early stages of the book, the book is humorous and casual, but in the later stages, it is neither a saint nor a mindless murderer.

I think it is a more exciting book. I hope the author will work hard to update more than 100 chapters a day, right? ( ,,´･㉨･)ﾉ"(´っω･｀｡)Touch your head

Awesome, awesome, very good at writing. You can relax your mind and body every time you watch it, and there are also some funny plots. To be honest, it was really interesting to see what Lee wrote when he was in the navy. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Hey, after reading it for so long, I haven't commented yet? (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) Well, there's not much to say. It's really good-looking. According to the timeline, it's still very early. I'm really looking forward to it ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ

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It feels pretty good. I'd like to support the new book by giving it five stars.

What you have written, author, is very wonderful. Although it is a bit short, I can read it correctly. I hope you can maintain good health and not break down your body while updating quickly. By the way, I have no time to read after I go to school.

The author's writing is very good, the timeline is very clear, and I personally feel that the character's personality is well grasped. Of course, a few more chapters would be better.

Come on, this book is good. I will keep watching. Please update 1

It looks so much better than other similar pirates. Write more. Are those skills from other anime really good? I still feel good about playing pirates.

Yes, there may be more in the future: updates are also one or two chapters a day. Not bad, come on

It's pretty good, I just hope the author doesn't end up with a bad ending, and his strength improves too quickly, so maybe there won't be much to watch later (ー_ー)!!

It looks okay. I hope the author will keep up the good work and update it soon. I would like to suggest that the main body should stop being so stubborn. The clones have become so famous. I almost thought that the second clone is the protagonist. The first clone doesn't leave the country much. If he continues to be stubborn, he will become a supporting role.

Not bad, but the speed is a bit slow. I want to watch the war on the top

The protagonist kills decisively, is not holy and does not ruin the plot in particular, and the protagonist is very stubborn.

It's pretty good. Those who don't like reading should read other novels. Don't affect the mood of those who like reading. After all, the author also said that it's hard to agree with everyone, right? And I think the writing is pretty good. What else do you want?

I read it and it was well written. Hope to keep up the good work. Come on. Five little stars ⭐️ for you.

🌈☀️🅷🅴🅻🅻🅾︎ 🅹🆄🅻🆈 ✪🍃Life is getting sweeter and cuter little by little, ✨You have to work harder in July✨

This is the first time I've seen such a wonderful One Piece novel, it's so damn good

Abba Abba, these pig's feet are really good. The use of the clone fruit by the main character is a plus for me. Whee! 😁

At present, it seems to be a very good pirate book. The timeline has not been changed randomly, and there is no messy magic change. It is very good. I hope to keep it up. Come on

Very good, very tasty. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง! Add more.