Sword, Moon, Zither, and Star

I read it every few days when I had free time, and finally saw the latest chapter. Let me share my feelings about this book. First of all, A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality pays more attention to logic than many other immortality novels, and the contents are interlocking. Although there are some minor plot errors, they can all be corrected or explained. Secondly, the novel conforms to the set world background, including culture, ethics, etiquette, customs, social concepts, etc. For example, the protagonist has to kowtow constantly, and the etiquette mentality of higher-level cultivators, etc. However, in order to highlight the protagonist's arrogance, many other online novels will use various reasons to avoid the protagonist from kneeling and kowtow when meeting the boss or elders, even if he is an undercover agent. Thirdly, the characters echo back and forth, and the overall plot is tactfully convoluted and fascinating. Of course, there are also shortcomings, such as too many retrospective and repetitive descriptions, and some illustrative descriptions that are sometimes repetitive and procrastinating, but these do not have an essential impact on the book, and the flaws cannot be concealed. Overall, this book can be regarded as a masterpiece so far. If it had been published 10 years earlier, the author would have become a master of online literature with this book.

Having read so many novels, as far as I am concerned, this one is pretty good. Cultivation of immortality is cruel, killing all living beings at every turn, but there is also iron-blooded tenderness, instead of cultivating immortality and becoming a murderous demon without blinking an eye. There are also highlights in the plot, and many characters can be remembered after reading them. This is really rare. Many novels can be read from beginning to end, except for the male protagonist or the female protagonist, and they don't understand anything else! Just like a woman's foot-binding, one copy has more than a hundred chapters and it's not over yet. The plot is very dragging and difficult to follow.

This is the most comfortable book I have read this year. Some of the fireworks in the world are real and the plot is quite good in some places. I hope it will keep up.

Very interesting, good luck to the author! Optimistic about you

The routines of Mortal Style have been written for a long time. The author's success lies in the slow pace, delicate writing style and online IQ. It has the shadow of Jin Yong Gulong. I think this book is definitely the number one Tomato Mortal Style novel about cultivating immortals. As for the next-door "Mortal Flying Immortal", although the plot is grand and somewhat in-depth, the writing is poor, the protagonist upgrades too quickly, and there are many female characters, so it is still slightly inferior. Writing and wit are the two most important and most difficult elements to achieve in online articles today. Come on, author, give me five stars for your support.

As a long-time reader, I think this book gives me the feeling of novelty: it is not as boring as a system novel that is invincible at the beginning, it is not as insulting to IQ as a harem novel, and it is not as brainless as a novice novel. Although the writing is mediocre at the beginning, the subsequent story is really exciting. I hope the author can give us more and more surprises and let us see a very exciting novel.

The logic is rigorous and the protagonist is well portrayed. Only those who are wise, courageous and virtuous can be favored by God and achieve greatness!

"A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" is well written. Compared with "A Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", it has a delicate plot, grand scenes, many characters, richer character descriptions, relatively independent language expressions, more plot logic design and foreshadowing, and the author has a deeper literary foundation. It's just that there are many chapters. Because most readers only read for the sake of reading, many readers feel unhappy because they can't get a glimpse of the subsequent ending. Therefore, I hope the author can make the overall chapter planning of the entire book more concise to facilitate dissemination. As for the far-reaching portrayal of characters and scenes, there are "Dream of Red Mansions", while those with closer portrayal of characters include "White Deer Plain" and "Yongzheng Dynasty". It may be wrong, just for reference.

The storyline is okay, a bit nostalgic, and the character of the protagonist is also good. The best thing is that there is no ridicule, but the plot progress is too slow, and the number of words is relatively small. It is okay to keep the book, but it is definitely boring to chase the book! Overall, it is not bad!

It's very interesting. Cultivation of immortality is not all about skills and magical powers. There are other interesting things. Although it seems tedious, it is actually very interesting. Listening to the story is interesting, the fighting is also exciting, each battle scene is lifelike, and foundation building and elixir formation are not fixed items like the mortals' legends of cultivating immortality! This is very good. There are so many spiritual materials in the world, so why do we have to have those few, so I said it is very good. I counted the categories of weapons and magic weapons in detail. It is really wonderful. In addition, the plot is really like a Sherlock Holmes story. It is very interesting. I am willing to say that he is the best after the legend of cultivating immortals for mortals! It's okay in the early stage, but later I feel like I've become a martial artist. There are so many awesome things that it's hard to defeat monks of the same level 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦 You will know when you see it later... A group of golden elixirs take advantage of the night to sneak attack, and they need light at night, so they can sneak attack in places where they can't see it, golden elixir!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!