An earthquake destroyed Liao Feng's ancestral old house. When he was packing up the remaining materials, he discovered a super treasure. From then on, he began a wonderful life of practicing cultivation and farming.
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The author is a bit lazy. He read Chapter 12 and then ended it. The plot is okay, but I can't understand the plot written by Aaron and Ahu! As an urban cultivator farming article, you can write a few capable men through a chapter of plot, such as: (I saw my high school friend, how good he was in high school at that time, and now I happened to meet him in the county when he went out to work, and then forged his body... Etc.)
Just remove the evil-doing Aaron and Ahu from the chapter. At least you can add some drama in the middle! Such as; affectionate and righteous! (Along Ahu is to repay the kindness of Zheng Shao's father and so-and-so! Now Zheng Shao asks Aaron Ahu to kneel down! Self-mutilation and other methods to let Zheng Zheng himself go, and then cut off all ties, etc.)
I've read more than a dozen chapters, and I feel a bit overwhelmed. During the legal period, you dare to say murder without any panic. Is it funny? →_→
It's better to change it to all cultivating immortals. . .
The author is a bit lazy. He read Chapter 12 and then ended it. The plot is okay, but I can't understand the plot written by Aaron and Ahu! As an urban cultivator farming article, you can write a few capable men through a chapter of plot, such as: (I saw my high school friend, how good he was in high school at that time, and now I happened to meet him in the county when he went out to work, and then forged his body... Etc.) Just remove the evil-doing Aaron and Ahu from the chapter. At least you can add some drama in the middle! Such as; affectionate and righteous! (Along Ahu is to repay the kindness of Zheng Shao's father and so-and-so! Now Zheng Shao asks Aaron Ahu to kneel down! Self-mutilation and other methods to let Zheng Zheng himself go, and then cut off all ties, etc.)
I've read more than a dozen chapters, and I feel a bit overwhelmed. During the legal period, you dare to say murder without any panic. Is it funny? →_→
It's better to change it to all cultivating immortals. . .