One Piece: My Spirit

What makes One Piece attractive is not only the level of devil fruits, battles, and bounties, but also the complex and romantic world intertwined with the bonds and values ​​of each character.

It's pretty good-looking, but from the introduction, I thought it was a cultivation stream for cultivating elves. . . The result is swordsmanship. This elf is a diplomat. .

Although this book is a slow-burning one, the plot is still good. I like it very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

How can I put it this way? It's pretty good to read, but I couldn't stand it until I reached Chapter 200. It's not because of how good the novel is, but I don't really like this kind of world-changing theme. I prefer killing monsters and leveling up, and leveling up with peace of mind. Like this, I have to analyze it before every action. Bo, I started writing the fighting scenes after almost one or two chapters, and they were still very short. They were basically pig's feet analyzing this and that. I personally don't like it very much, but it is indeed a good novel for those who like this kind of subject matter. This is my feeling after reading this novel. If you don't like it, don't criticize it! ! !

It is much better than the previous system articles. The kind that makes you invincible as soon as there is a system is very confusing. This kind of system has a system, but it only provides skill training and relies on the protagonist to go online step by step. This is very good to read. The author works hard and hopes it won't collapse later.

I have read more than a dozen books. This is the first time that modern people's wisdom has begun to invade and influence the world of pirates.

This is the most beautiful one I have ever seen, a One Piece fanfic

The quality of this book is excellent. Eat with confidence. Give the author great praise.

As a reader who has never read One Piece, the content of this book is much better than the fanfics I have read before. What attracts me most is the world view of the protagonist.

Yes, the strength of the protagonist in this fanfic is rising step by step. Compared with some people who reach the sky in one step and are directly invincible, it is more real. Although exaggerated, it can be explained by talent. This book is not mindless, and the protagonist's image is more prominent, making it more comfortable to read. Very good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. But then, why did the protagonist become more and more saintly? This contrast is a bit hard for me to accept.

Overall, it's good. I've been short of books for a while. I usually give up after reading more than 100 chapters. This is the first one I've read in a while. The first part is quite exciting, but there are a few problems at the end. I feel that the protagonist is two or three years ahead of Luffy in terms of combat power. In the end, his strength is inexplicably close to catching up. Also, Gu Lina is usually busy with the East China Sea economy and has no time to practice, so she can defeat Big Mom with her fruit ability and domineering. The character description of the protagonist is quite distinctive, and she sometimes likes to talk to others. In the early stage, his strength was not particularly strong, so he could ignore Kaido. When chasing Caesar, I felt that the male protagonist was very ink, and he was not decisive at all. He knew that Doflamingo was connected to Kaido. Pay attention here, and there was a suspected perfect man-made phantom devil fruit in the laboratory, but he was not in a hurry. The special ink caused him to be caught up by Kaido's men in the end and the phantom fruit was taken away. If he had been captured and taken action earlier, so many things would not have happened at all.

Overall, it's okay. There are no poisonous points, but there is one extremely poisonous point. The author is like the empress's licking dog, giving her unlimited enhancements... Apart from this point, it's good. The empress can skip it and it won't affect the viewing.

It is still a pretty good pirate fan novel (in my opinion), but there are still some loopholes. Emmmm, the development of the protagonist obviously lacks the intervention of the five old stars of the World Government and the king behind it, Im. The overall look and feel is indeed good, the existence of the system is downplayed, the protagonist's own efforts and changes are obvious, and the writing is also good, especially the description of "kendo". I would give it a 4.7 Out of five points. In addition to the lack of intervention from Wulaoxing and others in terms of personal senses, the ending also felt quite rushed. However, there are still a lot of expanded imaginations after the ending. Emmmm The above is just my personal opinion, I refuse to make excuses.

The author has his own thoughts on pirates. The article is logical and self-consistent. It is also more respectful and consistent with the original work. The writing style is good, and it does not feel like a fast and invincible casual perfunctory. Although there are some minor flaws, overall the protagonist's IQ is above average and the character design is relatively good. As a One Piece fanfic, it is of excellent quality and ranks among the top three among the Pirates fanfics I have read. I have finished reading the entire book. Although I feel that the ending is not very satisfactory, it is still a good book overall. I support the author. It is rare for a fan to give me such a bright feeling. Don't give up. Keep up the good work.

Yes, the protagonist's thoughts are very mature, and the overall pace is not sluggish. It's a very good fan novel.

It's okay, I'm good at describing it, but the plot is messy, the battles are more exciting, and the length of the Empress is more vicious. It's still worth watching, but I suggest you skip it and the ending is too rushed.

Although the male protagonist's Pokémon rarely appears, overall the plot is okay.

It's what a pirate book looks like in my mind!

The protagonist of this book gave me a feeling of being an audience, as if I were immersed in it. He had the same ideas, interfered but not too much, and made up for many regrets. It was much better than the common killing and killing, and he would not be overly entangled with the ability of the Devil Fruit. So what if there is no Devil Fruit?

Not bad, I quite like it. The protagonist's strength is slowly accumulated by himself. He won't suddenly gain a lot of power and become invincible. It's a very interesting novel.

This book is very good. It is not the kind of book where the protagonist is invincible for three days and is a five- or six-year-old general. It is the kind of book that slowly develops and upgrades like the original book. The protagonist of this book is a swordsman who suddenly feels inspired. In the original book, it is clearly stated that Mr. 1 Who cuts the fruit is said to be in the first half of the Great Channel. There is no swordsman in this chapter who can break his steel body, which means that there are basically no iron-cutting swordsmen in the first half. It was also said in the later period that swordsmen mainly gather in the New World and belong to the backbone of combat power. The Great Swordsman at the top is the top combat power. In the Wano Country Chapter, most of them belong to swordsmen and have not reached the level of Great Swordsman. Chapters 1 and 200 look good, but by chapter 400 it doesn't work. I don't know what the protagonist is doing, and I don't kill those who should be killed. I want to imitate the protagonist's persuasion. He is obviously preaching and providing psychological education, and he also looks like the Riddler, "You stupid woman, think about it yourself, as if you think about what is wrong." If the original character can figure it out on his own, he still has to wait for you to say it.

After reading it, I personally feel: the overall content is complete, and it's good to end this way. (After all, if I, an ordinary person, would be like the protagonist after traveling through time, I would give priority to what I care about) Author, come on

I haven't read many episodes of One Piece, but this book is very interesting.

Author: Will Marylou learn domineering? Is there a female protagonist? When will Ciel go to the New World?

There are not many novels like this that can be read without getting bored.

The novel is good, I like it very much. Please update it more. Stop entering the palace and consider teaching domineering to the elves.

It's so well written, I hope you can update it more often so that it doesn't end unfinished and doesn't make mistakes! ! !

The writing is really good, and the emotions and logic are reasonable. It's just that there are too few Pokémon scenes.

It tells the story from a very novel angle, but it is completely manageable, logical and self-consistent, and it is very interesting to watch. However, the open ending at the end is a bit sudden, and to me it feels hollow and lacks a good ending.

This is the best one among the many One Piece fanfics I have read [like]. He doesn't have the same feeling as others, but you can see the growth of the protagonist. At the same time, he is closer to the original work. Compared with other fans, the details in it are well written. It's worth watching if you like One Piece fanfiction. Here you can see the regrets left in the original work, such as Ace not dying [laughing] [laughing]. The most important thing is that he is not brainless [learned] [learned]