Dragon Clan: Taoist Priest Descends the Mountain

Personally, I think this Dragon Clan fan book adds Taoist elements, and the setting of the sinister protagonist is very good.

The writing is very good, and it is considered to be first-rate among many fans, but it does not have the loneliness that was inadvertently revealed in the original work, and the lack of description of the supporting characters leads to a lack of fullness in the characters, making it difficult to bring into the emotions. You can try to write some short dramas about some characters who will appear repeatedly or have breakthroughs in the plot to strengthen empathy.

This is the first Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever read, and it indeed captures the unforgettable emotions that we have never been able to erase. Speaking of which, I really thought that the style in the middle and late stages was created by the old gangster from Jiangnan [shy]

There are two different styles from the one with no money (just speaking objectively) Brother Shui, who has no money, wants to write something of his own, basically just using the framework of the Dragon Clan. This one is a dream come true. The combination of the plot and the original work is unexpectedly good, because this kind of fan fiction is generally more likely to collapse in these places. Secondly, because it is a dream come true, it does not have the style of youthful and sentimental literature like Jiangnan. This is a matter of personal taste. At present, it is a bit short. More than 300 is not enough.

A very good Dragon Clan fanfic, written very delicately, just like an if-line extra written by the original author. It's still a pity that the protagonist is not with Eriki, but as the author said, the concubine in this article did not miss any battle. The protagonist's senior sister, the heroine is suspected to be coming soon, I'm still looking forward to it, five-star praise~

This dragon fan novel is, for me, the best dragon fan novel I have found on Tomato. The overall style is very similar to the original book, but for me there is still something missing, and there is no sense of sadness. When I first read the original book, I felt that the sky was gray, as if it was drizzling all the time, and lifeless, but I did not feel this way after reading many fan novels. I can only say Carrots and greens, everyone has their own preference: It's my problem that I didn't give five stars, because I can't find the feeling myself, but what is undeniable is that the author's writing is excellent, the writing is good, and the plot is well matched, and this book is the most outstanding one among the many dragon fan fictions I have read. Of course, this is like this for me, so I say, cheers to the author! ! !

Don't be fooled by this rating! ! ! This is already a very good dragon fanfic in Tomato, don't miss it if you pass by. The author has greatly updated! [Adoration]

One of the most interesting Dragon Clan novels, adding Taoist culture is very interesting.

It's rare to see a dragon clan article on Tomato, so I give it five stars.

The most recognized book of Dragon Clan fan fiction

One of the few dragon fandoms, the writing is very good, the setting is not obtrusive, it feels like I am reading the original work [full] Keep up the good work, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

In my opinion, this book is very similar to Jiangnan's writing style. I can't find any faults in either the plot or the setting. However, it is precisely because the world view written in the original book is too big, and the old thief wrote too little, leaving many holes unfilled. Therefore, the Dragon Clan is different in the eyes of people like us. There is no way around the hasty ending due to some reasons. Dragon The story of Dragon Clan should require more pen and ink, but the more you write, the harder it is to control. Therefore, I think this book is the best among all Dragon Clan fans. If possible, I hope the author can rewrite or expand it. Some details are still not shown, but I think there is generally no problem. If I write a book in the future, I hope I can communicate with the author. Thank you for letting me see such a good novel and making up for my childhood regrets.

It's very well written, and I personally think it's the ceiling for Tomato Dragon fandom.

This is the best dragon fanfic I have ever read. It has no shortcomings except that the ending feels a bit sudden.

This book is very good. Chu Zihang and Xia Mi, Lu Mingfei and Uesugi Eri are two couples that I had a lot of trouble with when I was playing dragon fantasy, and they are all fulfilled to a certain extent. I have to say that this ending is really off the mark. Fortunately, the author is still updating it in the group

I think it's good, but it feels almost completely different from the original work. As for the world view, it seems that the protagonist is fighting against the dragons alone, and everyone else has become a supporting role. It's a pity that you don't see that there is a kind of loneliness in the dragon family called Chu Zihang, a kind of pride called Caesar, a kind of persistence called Jörmungandr, a kind of fatherly love called Pompeii Gattuso, and a stupid girl named Eri Yi! A wilted child named Lu Mingfei! A touching story called "Tokyo Love Story"! I can't forget the promise made by the crabapple tree. The cherry blossoms fall and tears fall from the corners of my eyes! There is a kind of drag called Jiangnan! The red cherry blossoms have all fallen, but you can't see me. The pear blossoms are lightly painted with tears on my clothes. Even though the autumn leaves are thousands of miles red, I don't know it's cold in the desert in the north.

Although there are many typos, I have to say that it is very exciting and has solved a lot of regrets. Speaking of which, I once thought about saving all the little dragons... Thank you for the author's hard work and struggle! Just want to see the full version of the ending? ! [Think]

This book is in harmony with the plot of the Dragon Clan without losing the author's own ideas.

Come on, the writing is very good, but it's a little bit short and not enough to read (ง •̀_•́)ง

The novel is really good, but it's a bit short. The content is very dragon-like, and it satisfies my fantasy about Eastern dragons.

Awesome! ! ! Waiting for the next book to create greater glory! The plot is very exciting Lu Mingfei really worked hard, much better than the old thief

To be honest, the writing is quite good, and the portrayal is also very delicate. If Long Wu hadn't come out, I would have thought it was a trumpet opened by Jiang Nan. I'm a little dissatisfied because it lacks a little bit of my own stuff, but I still like it very much.

One of the few Dragon Clan fics is relatively good-looking, and unlike other fics, the heroine is not Eri Yiri, and Lu Mingfei is no longer a loser. The content is good-looking, but copyright reasons are a bit annoying, so support requires five stars.

The content and plot are very good. Rare. Come on, author? Suddenly something occurred to me. What kind of hybrid can be born from the combination of the humanoid dragon king Xia Mi and Chu Zihang? Or a pure blood dragon? Inexplicably looking forward to it

It's beautiful. The writing is really great. I was introduced to it by someone who said that this book was maliciously de-rated. This fanfic is really beyond my imagination. The writing style is sophisticated and the language style feels very similar to the original work (personal feeling). Now I am extremely glad that someone else has read this book. All I can say now is that those who give low scores have no heart.

This is a very good fanfic. The author has integrated his own ideas and style on the basis of respecting the original work, and expanded the plot of the novel. What is even more rare is that he is good at seeing the subtleties, and can make the characters he depicts vividly on the paper in the small plots. Coupled with the humor of the character dialogue, it finally achieves the effect of 1+1>2. Hope the author can keep it up! ! ! [Laughs] But the final ending is a bit abrupt, so keep up the good work

Everything that should be there will be there, and every hole that needs to be fixed will be fixed. The author's outline is complete, let's wait and see.

Although there are some parts that I didn't quite understand, I think this is definitely a good book worth reading. I think the most exciting thing is the author's detailed description of the character's psychology, without going into too much detail about the appearance, leaving readers with a rough outline of the character. As for the more detailed parts, I think everyone will have different senses. Thank you to the author for describing such a wonderful story for us~

This is the most like the original novel I have ever read.

The writing is quite good, it has the flavor of the original work, but it also has [admiration] and [blowing kisses] that the original work does not have.