Mortal***

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Well written, okay.

Updates are too slow. Other authors have basically completed their works or 60-70% of them before publishing them together. You have just written so much and published them. Let everyone wait for your updates slowly. The previous plot has long been forgotten. Who has the patience to wait for you every day?

The writing is okay, but the fighting is a bit shaky. It would be nice to be decisive and fast. Just win the fight. Run away if you can't beat it. It would be wonderful if it was written by Lao Wu.

It's quite good to read. It doesn't have as many slap-in-the-face plots as other books. He is ruthless when he should be ruthless, and he is tolerant when he should be patient. He has the qualities of a hero. I hope I won't write too much about it later. It's really a very good book about how mortals (ordinary people) can cultivate immortality.

Looks good so far

Although the start is old-fashioned, the thinking is still clear

A nice book

Well written, keep it up.

It's really good, the description is detailed and moving, it's worth reading!

A great book, better than 99.9% Of the fantasy novels I have read!

Well written, worth reading, five stars

It's well written, you can read it.

It's okay to watch now

Good book recommended. Savor...

In a life-and-death showdown with senior brother Guo An, you don't need a spiritual pet to help you? Is there a bug?

Excellent, you can see that the author put his heart into writing.

How much does this author like 🐍? All the monsters that appear are 🐍

Very good. I'm watching it.

Shuhuang looks pretty good,

Mortals shed my love

Well written, I feel comfortable reading it

Just now Haha solve

Good, good, good, good

It's okay, come on, come on

Sure! Something to see

It's for sale... Several times

I think it's very good, farm flow

Nice! The plot is compact.

I'm so happy too 🙂