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I only read the first part, and I think the content is good, but it must not be a harem! (I don't like Ran Xiaoyue and Li Minmin very much, and the word "flexible" appears several times) But this is my personal opinion. The author's writing style is quite good. I would like to support it by giving it five stars!

I feel pretty good about this novel now. I give it my five heart support.

It's very beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, the author's writing is very good, and of course the writing skills are also top-notch.

Personally, I feel that this book is good in all aspects. I don't really like reading this kind of subject. I read one before and gave up after half a day. But I don't know why this book made me have the urge to continue reading.

What I want to read is the invincible article. A systematic bird can eat several people's lions before even one can level up quickly.

This Laojiumen fanfic written by the author is the best one I have ever read. The protagonist is not the Holy Mother but is very decisive and cruel. Anyway, I can't explain it, but it looks good. Keep up the good work, author＾0＾~

I think it looks good, but I hope the protagonist won't be too kind or too nice to humans, otherwise the protagonist will feel like a coward. With strong strength, he should be more arrogant and domineering^ω^

The book is of good quality and has great potential, but the author's coding speed is a bit slow, and some plot connections are not detailed enough, leaving many poisonous points. I think the biggest poisonous point in the book is the two girls. The protagonist is no longer a human being, but he still has no relationship with those two girls. If the author continues to write about the two girls having multiple contacts with the protagonist, more readers will abandon the book. Of course, the plot of this book is full of ups and downs, quite exciting, and highly readable. I hope the author will speed up the coding speed and achieve five updates a day as soon as possible! ! !

The novel is very good, no need for eunuchs! ! ! No eunuchs! ! ! No eunuchs! ! ! Say important things three times

Personally, I think it's really okay. This book is still readable. Although there are many poisonous points and the ending is too hasty, this novel is still readable. It's the kind of book that's quite comfortable to read. Finally, support me. Come on, the author!

It looks good, but it ends too quickly. Ahem, a lot of foreshadowing has not been filled in. I just thought about it, it's almost time to fill in the holes, and then it's over? ? ! [Almost crying] [Almost crying] [Crying] [Crying] (Silence here is better than sound) But come on, I'm waiting for the new book [Sending Hearts]

The author's writing is super exciting. It's a pity that this book has been completed, but I can't say anything except that it's a pity. I really love this book and the author. I have read every paragraph the author has written. I hope that the author will write more wonderful books and make more money in the future. Finally, I want to confess to the author: I love you😘😘

Normally, those who can see the end are all Poison Gods. The general themes are good \(//∇//)\ but there are many that almost made me quit. But if you encounter something you don't like, just step back a little and you can get through it. Trust me, that's how I am.

Inspirational film "Update" I hope the author will write down Ji Ji and those two women. The pig's feet are almost developed. I hope they won't just keep going and fight back!

This is the first novel I have read from beginning to end! It's really beautiful! Other novels need to be updated continuously, otherwise I won't like it and won't want to read it after reading a few chapters! This is the first book I've read! I love so much! Come on, great author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I feel that this is the most beautiful evolution of Tomato. The plot is very exciting. Good luck to the author. Five stars for you

This book written by the author is particularly in line with my thoughts. I will give it five stars and that's it. Cheers, author! ! ! Don't delay the update, otherwise I will be at your door with the mortar (´-ω-`)

Hold on, your writing is amazing, you will be discovered only if you persist, come on😊

Come on, the author, it's very beautiful. Give me five stars to encourage you.

It's beautiful~✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*. The author must continue to update~

It's very beautiful. Don't write off those two women. I think it's good to have a female protagonist. By the way, let's write the IQs of those two women higher.

It's a good evolution story. The protagonist has known that his identity is opposed to humans since he became a sparrow, and he has been working hard to survive and become stronger! This is very good, better than those novels in which people turn into animals and still yearn for human life and cannot see themselves clearly (✪▽✪)! Great support from the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

It looks pretty good, at least it suits me. It's just that there are too few chapters, and I feel like there's a lot to write about, and there's no need to rush to the end. However, there are also some settings that are not rigorous enough. For example, the protagonist has a system but it is difficult to upgrade, while some other species are upgraded casually. I hope the author will pay more attention to it in the future. As a first novel, it's pretty good.

From the beginning to now, it is generally good. The relationships and personalities around the protagonist are very vivid. I see that there is no such mindless plot as the body is no longer a human and the soul is, but you still have to run back to human society. This alone can be a bonus. I hope the author can write better in the future! ! ! ! ! Ps: It would be nice if it could be faster (chasing is more painful) However, if it is because you want to maintain the current quality, you can take your time, just don't be eunuch, thank you very much! ! ! !

This book is the best novel about exotic beasts that I have read on Tomato. It has some minor flaws, but is basically very exciting. The protagonist is relatively stable.

I like it very much. It is different from other evolution types. It is worth giving it 5 points. I personally think it can go up to 9.3 Or even 9.5. This is my personal opinion.

[Thinking] It's suitable for those who love to watch the invincible dog until the end, and then go out to see it @ professional households @ plus velvet @ fatale a sniper @ a fate sniper @ Meng Guoyu @ My name is Cheng Dapao [Cool] This is very good😊

The author's writing is very good and has great potential. I hope that there will be less entanglement with the two women. Moreover, the protagonist at the beginning of the article is directly exposed to understand human speech and can easily persuade people to retreat. I believe that more people will like the protagonist to fly away quietly, and when he becomes stronger, he will come to help the two women when they are in danger.

To be honest, the setting of this book is quite good, and the imagination is very big. However, the author's writing style is not enough, and he is a bit unsure. He dug a hole but failed to fill it, and it was also a bit watery, resulting in a rushed ending. If I could write them all, I believe it would be a good book~

Oh, the writing is very good. I recommend you to read it. Well, the author will give you a master certification when you write 200,000 words.