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I'll give it five stars first after seeing the cover. I haven't finished reading it yet. The first-person writing is quite solid and the writing is very delicate. However, some descriptions need to be simplified, otherwise it will seem a bit cumbersome. According to experience, the discovery of the identity at the beginning is actually a poisonous point. The rhythm needs to be reconsidered. The first-person is not very easy to write and it is easy to write as plain water. The sense of story is very strong. I will leave it here. I have been busy recently and thought of adding a few sentences when I have time.

I haven't seen such a good yuri show in a long time! Still looking at it from a first-person perspective. Come on, author! I'm wondering if the main character in the back has a single wife or multiple wives? (ºº )

Yes, a bookworm who has been reading novels for eight years said that this is the second time he has seen a transformation novel from a first-person perspective. Very few indeed

This novel is different from other transfiguration series. Every sentence is very dry, and there are not a few nonsense sentences in one chapter. I hope the author can stick to this writing style! ! !

At the beginning, I accidentally saw a book with good ratings and clicked on it. I was pleasantly surprised when I read this book. The characters are well drawn and basically easy to remember. It is written from a first-person perspective. I am tired of mindless and cool writing during this period. This kind of slow-paced book will be added to my bookshelf. Five stars.

It is difficult to find an author with extremely upright views. But there are no flaws in the general direction of the three views. It must be logical and logical, humane and humane, and it must be fascinating and sinister enough, which is very good. The focus of the transformation article is naturally not to write about transformation, but to transcend reality and derive from all the ups and downs that occur in reality. I like this book, I like this author, I have to give it five stars, and I won't go into details about this praise. The protagonist is decisive in his words and deeds, and can be ruthless with ease. He looks like me.

Finally, it is no longer a cool novel. The nature of the harem novel has changed. The protagonist of this book is very sensible! Very sensible! Very sensible! The sequelae of the first sexual transition and nightmares are scary. After the protagonist accepts it, it is not the system binding sound of "pudding pudding", but the parents and the protagonist themselves who have to save themselves. The covetousness about one's appearance is expressed in a very tactful way (sultry). Of course, this is real life, and there are very few people who will ignore the law when they see you. The descriptions of ordinary daily life and extremely rare environments are really rare! Let me say it again, if you are tired of reading books about male-to-female slapping, helplessness, and great pleasure, then please come here. This is a recommendation from a book friend

I think this novel is very interesting. From the current point of view, I think the life and experience of the female protagonist (original male protagonist) may be the same as those experienced by most students (of course, many of them are dramatic exaggerations). I personally like it more. I look forward to the development below. Come on, author

The author is really a great guy😂 I have read more than forty chapters now, and the writing and plot design are both great. That's it. . . Cure(×) Causes depression (√)

Cheers to the author, the writing is very good, station B is also pushing it, I believe the popularity will heat up ^O^

The writing style of this book is superb, and the content has not been flawless so far. It uses various techniques. Unlike most online novels, this book seems to reflect the psychology of a boy who suddenly turns into a girl. The plot is also ordinary, not so ups and downs and exciting, but plain and true...

I personally think it is very good, and the writing is very poignant to me. As for those who say that the author's writing is bad, I can only say that it is your own problem. It is simply because they can't calm down and read it. If you calm down and read it, it is very poignant.

I feel that the writing is pretty good. If anyone likes reading slow-paced novels, you can read this. The author will continue to work hard (ง•̀_•́)ง

The first person is very novel, and the narration of the story is slow-burning and will not be very intense right away. Overall, it's a good novel.

I think this is the most interesting article about the transformation. The author has really designed a very coherent and exciting plot, rather than a long and drawn-out plot where the protagonist has no brain to work on every day. I sincerely hope that the author can continue to update it.

This article made my eyes light up. Maybe it is the first time I read this type of novel. The subject matter is novel, the logic is clear, the plot is not cliché, and the article has laid a lot of foreshadowing, which I can't forget for a long time after reading it. It's like there is always a greedy insect trying to hook my heart. It's a pity that the author has too little information, and it is not enough to read.

He said that the writing is very good. Don't read those trolls. I really like reading this kind of writing without plug-ins. I like it very much. I hope to continue writing.

This kind of casual and daily-oriented is very beautiful and I give it 5 stars. I hope it won't be like some daily books, which become more and more toxic the more you write...

Goose goose goose, thank you to the author. I really enjoyed reading it. I will read a few more chapters and read it all in one go.

It's similar to me personally and it's easy to get into the feeling. Although it's slow, you can take a look at it when you're free.

The subject matter is good, the content is very plain, and very fulfilling. The psychological description of the female (male) protagonist is also very accurate and deeply touching. Urgent update! ! !

It has a wild imagination, a fast-paced plot, and several characters with distinct personality traits. The quality is currently good. The cheerful rhythm drives the compact plot, thumbs up.

The writing is good. When will I get a heroine girlfriend?

After reading Chapter 24, I feel like the story is quite good so far. It feels a bit narrated. It is better than novels of the same type. However, it still has the same tacky performance. For example, the setting of the male-to-female transformation must be a beautiful woman, and she must be a school beauty. However, I quite like the author's description of the protagonist's character.

Okay, okay, I feel good. This is the first book that I am interested in after reading the book of Shili Sword God. I used to feel that those books were boring and boring, but this time I feel novel for the first time.

Most of these books are written in the third person. Now that I finally see one written in the first person, I have to say it's really cool. It would be even more fun if I could write a second person book in the future.

Although it's almost a break since the author started a new book, I quite like this subject and I'm looking forward to the end.

Although it is not very comfortable to read in the first person, it is well written.

Good looking, better than other Tomato transformation stories

I really like this kind of book, it can make people relax. Just like the author's comment, the protagonist of the novel is like an independent character who will solve the main plot according to his own values ​​​​and thoughts. This kind of book looks like being in nature, very relaxing, come on~