The Beginning of the Prehistoric Era, Killing the Time-Travelers

The logic is clear and the content is interesting. It's a good book. I hope I can keep writing.

The boy who was chained all over in the endless abyss slowly opened his scarlet eyes, as if he could break the void, and opened his thin lips lightly: "Interesting, I can see through everything in the world,

Suitable for beginners to watch anyway. . . Slipping away

Well, how should I put it, those who often read Honghuang novels will be very annoyed, because some plots are very uncomfortable to watch. For example, I think the author of Sun Wukong's piercing eyes and golden eyes has not even finished reading Journey to the West. Sun Wukong's piercing eyes and golden eyes have become natural. They should have been developed by Laojun in the Eight Diagrams Furnace for seven or seventy-nine days after he made a big fuss in the Heavenly Palace. Here he is born. However, if you don't want those things, it's okay to take it slow, and it's suitable for people who haven't read much Honghuang literature.

Not bad, I think it would be interesting to have a harem

Lao Tie, I think the novel you wrote is quite interesting. All I can say is that I am really drunk.

Although it is unclear who the protagonist is, the novel ideas of the author are still worth a look. It is a pure and refreshing article. Don't take it too seriously. Moreover, it is originally a revised version of the prehistoric world, which is definitely different from the traditional prehistoric myth. However, what is worth reading is that it is different from the traditional prehistoric myth.

The gods have a system and who else has the memory of the time traveler, so I'm asking you if you're afraid,

I have mixed reviews about this novel. What is the protagonist's personality like? After all, the leader of Tongtian. On the contrary, a true love person is very proud. He can know future events in advance. He is powerful enough in his own right. He does not need the external things brought by the system. I hope he can figure it out on his own. Become Hunyuan step by stepDa Luo Saint  

This book is very good, but some people who have no brains to give negative reviews gave this book negative reviews, which resulted in this book not being rated 8.0. I see a lot of people are making a fuss about the issue of realm in this book, but it is normal for the book to say that Hunyuan Daluo is slightly stronger than the Heavenly Dao Saint. Hunyuan Daluo is not as powerful as you think, and he will be beaten to death. Hunyuan Wuji above Hunyuan Daluo, Daluo is the real Taoist saint, and Hunyuan Daluo is at best a spokesperson

When I saw Chapter 404, how should I put it? Originally, Tongtian was a straight protector, and he was not afraid of being beaten to death. This version is a bit smarter, and it's not that bad. To be honest, if you feel that you can't stand other creations or innovations after reading a few books of Ancient Times, then why don't you write an original version? After all, now It's hard to find the original version. If you write it a little differently, guess whether I'll criticize you or not. It was originally written in The Great Desolate World. Isn't the Beast God Shen Ni also a second creation of The Great Desolate World? The part about conferring gods is well written. The Queen Mother's writing is too narrow. But think about it, Guanyin has been driven out, and it's too late to come. How could someone who is not popular have the ability to obtain information and plot against a navy marshal who is in the mid-Sage period? Although the official history of Journey to the West is not in this position, it is not a big problem. As long as the novel is well written, why should I write it if it is exactly the same? What is good about it? This version of Tongtian is very proud. I am a copy of Hongjun, Yuanshi is stingy and narrow-minded, not worthy of being a saint, Western dog thief, destined every day, Nuwa is frustrated, inaction in the early stage and useless in the later stage, Tongtian reckless man, swallowing the meteorite holy pill, forbidden purple sky, Tongtian can finally breathe a sigh of relief, the writing is not bad, much better than some of the ones on the top of Tomato list

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The overall feeling is okay! Every author writes differently. You can't read this book based on other references. I think this author's writing is very interesting. I don't understand why there are so many bad reviews (＿;). The novels must be different. If they are all written similarly, look at Hammer! (But I can hope that the author can write in his own style) (´｡✪ω✪｡｀)

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Decisive Killing is a very good article.

Come on, come on, come on

First, I really like that there is no harem. Second, I have been waiting to kill the traitor Dingguangxian since Chapter 1, but I didn't kill him until Chapter 17. Then I looked at the table of contents...

Although the plot setting is not very good, the creativity is great, and don't read the novel with your brain in mind, otherwise it will be unpleasant. At the same time, I also want to say, those who don't like this kind of novel, please don't scold the author below, okay? It's good to be able to write novels for you, but it's not good for you to scold others.

The more I read it, the more it resembles a novel I read before. I don't know if the title has been changed. Many of the plots are very similar. It's possible that I read it confusingly.

Okay, I want to ask

Okay, please support me

You managed to put together mythical stories from ancient times to the present, and you acted like you were part of the underworld. I admire your courage.

Many people like Jiejiao because there are many difficult opinions in it. Just like in reality, when two children are fighting, an adult has to intervene.

I was thinking about the three realms of heaven, earth and man, and it is said that there are sixteen saints. Is it true that there are six heavenly realms, three human realms and three earth realms, and the remaining four are saints other than the three realms of heaven, earth and man? However, Hongjun suppressed the holy positions except for the six saints of Tiandao, just for the sake of Tiandao's dominance?

It's cool, the writing is good, and the language is fluent. The whole article revolves around the theme. Vividly expresses the character he wants to portray. Gives people a deep feeling.

It's kind of interesting. But isn't this special system very powerful? It should be possible to obliterate Tongtian. This guy got fucked right after he appeared. . And there is the hereafter. For Tongtian, it is the future. This section can be said to be very exciting. . What a pity. If you can write it well, it will definitely cause a big virus outbreak.

Beautiful and different prehistoric times

Well written, keep up the good work

@Shu @ tiegen commentary

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