[Easy+Shenhao+Shuangwen]
"Congratulations to the host for successfully mastering elementary singing skills and being rewarded with a company worth hundreds of billions!"
"Congratulations to the host for successfully mastering elementary acting skills, and will be rewarded with ten buildings worth tens of billions!"
Lin Luo: "..."
It's obviously a powerful system, but it just wants me to be a big star?
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Chapters 23, 24, 31, 35, and 39 have been preliminarily revised regarding the character plot of Xia Chuyun. If there are any bugs, please give us feedback.
Ahem, here comes the long review!
① The opening chapter does not have the cliché of being dumped by a gold-digger girl. Instead, the heroine gets leukemia and is forced to break up. This is a good outline of the relationship between the heroine and the protagonist's predecessor. Although this is very familiar, it is not as disgusting as those plots of being dumped by a gold-digger girl, let alone bloody. I don't understand the book friends who complained about this. Maybe they also vomited that kind of plot, but in my opinion, this kind of plot will not detract from the book.
② The protagonist continues to be with his former girlfriend. I think the author made this point very obvious. In layman's terms, the original person is exactly the same person in the protagonist's parallel space. There is almost no difference in origin. What's more, the protagonist has inherited the emotions of the predecessor. The protagonist can already say that he is not exactly the protagonist before time travel. He already has the emotions of the original person and can be said to be an evolved version of the original person. So is it difficult to understand that accepting the original girlfriend? It's really hard for me to understand the point in the comments that the protagonist is a taker.
③There is also a criticism in the comment area that the protagonist goes to the company without being neatly dressed and disrespects others. First of all, it didn't mention how much the protagonist was ridiculed. Just pretend you don't care. The author didn't even mention it. Why don't you find something to do? Secondly, he didn't go to the company to work. He went to clean up the scum. Do you need to wear formal clothes to clean up the scum? He also didn't show off in front of the collective employees. The plot of disrespecting others is not reflected in the book. What are they talking about?
④Well, I saw the corrected version of this ambiguous issue. It's obviously the author's fault here. The author's details are not in place, so I feel that this kind of love is very inexplicable. I feel that this kind of plot is unnecessary, but the author still cuts it very quickly. This woman only appeared in a few chapters, so it is not a negative plot.
⑤ There are no other problems with the rest. This book can be considered top-notch in terms of entertainment, but the plot has not yet unfolded. Let's look at the follow-up. There are no commendable problems with Shenhao. It is just average, but it will not deduct points. As for the system, it is very good. It's spiritual, and it's quite interesting. Book lovers who are entangled in the problem of the system need not do it. The rules of the system are artificially stipulated, and they can be strong or weak. I have seen overbearing systems, and it's a change of taste. Not to mention that there is a fierce man next door who turns the system into his wife~(￣▽￣~)~
⑥The overall evaluation of this book is very good in the entertainment category of Tomato. At least based on the current 100 chapters, the score of Tomato's entertainment books is generally very low. I think this book can at least pass a 9. Well, one final word, for the book friend who said that he has read the book for 10,000 hours on three mobile phones, I just want to say that the first five chapters of this book are quite satisfactory and there is no bad plot. Why is it too bad! One star? Could it be that the entertainment score of Tomato is generally low because... Hiss... It's so scary!
Goodbye! Retreat!
If you don't have a harem, don't write about so many women. It's so uncomfortable. I support the author and don't follow the theory of a harem. Come on, come on, come on! ! ! !
I originally wanted to review it after reading a hundred chapters, but currently there are only sixty chapters. The sixty chapters are a bit short, so I can't find any faults. As an online novel, the emphasis is on entertainment. It's enough that we can understand it. Having said so much, let me think about some of the advantages of this book: 1. It is not like a white text. 2. Most of the works selected for publication are very classic. 3. There is no such trick as pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters, and some people may cause trouble when I go to the United States. I don't know if the author can handle it well. Looking forward to
The book written by the author may not satisfy everyone's taste, but for me, this book is really good. Come on, author.
It feels very good to read, and the thinking is quite clear, just like the kind of old author's clear thinking without water characters. When I read it, I felt familiar, as if I had seen it somewhere before. I don't know why I had this idea. It is also worth recommending. The rating is low at the moment. The author hopes to work hard and hope that it will not be unfinished or eunuch. The most afraid thing is that the front part is very good and the back part is good, but you guys understand anyway.
It's pretty good. It's better to watch this in one day, but I want to ask, is it a single heroine or not? Not better (ಡωಡ)(ಡωಡ)(ಡωಡ)
Hahaha, what a great work! This system and the male protagonist are so fun, especially when the two of them are quarreling. I couldn't help but give it five stars after seeing a few pictures. It suits my taste. Big boost for the author! Update update
I originally thought it was a pretentious article, but I didn't expect that the power of words is so great and touching.
The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. One chapter may not be updated every two or three weeks😓
The overall feeling is quite good and pretty!
The plot is not bad, the writing is remarkable, and the feeling of immersion is quite strong while reading. Especially when I know the news about the heroine, the feeling comes instantly. I encourage the author to keep up the good work, don't be lazy, come on! The three views are also correct, but the protagonist must not be a virgin and hesitant. He must be decisive and sharp. This is the protagonist.
You definitely don't want a harem. Isn't it good to be with your childhood sweetheart?
Personally I think it's pretty good, the author keeps up the good work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's good, but updates are too slow. It's not enough. I'm going to start reading books. I'll read them again when I've gained enough weight.
That's right, just don't mess around with love, reject what should be refused, and dote on your wife, that's perfect. There's also family, and the single heroine is just a doting character.
It's pretty good. There's no pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, and there's no bloody plot. It seems that the author has put his heart into it. Keep up the good work.
Author, don't be too tired and don't become bald at a young age😂😂
The author's book is not a eunuch, woo woo woo
Very nice. Very nice. I like it.
Interesting. The characters are full-bodied.
If the needle doesn't poke, come on, author!
Great author, please give it a try
Mr. Lin is so handsome, I love him.
I wrote your name on the planet, and if the stars were shining, that star would shine brightest.
You can chase it and add it to your bookshelf.
I hope Sick is the female protagonist and I like her character very much. The author said it has a single heroine, so I gave it five stars because of her. I hope she is the heroine, and I hope her illness will be cured soon. Also, can you please stop the heroine from forgiving her adoptive parents? They are so powerful that they don't care at all when the heroine is sick. It would be nice if the male protagonist traveled through time when they first met seven years ago. This will prevent some people from feeling isolated. But this is also good, author, come on.
I usually only read fantasy novels. It was my first time reading this kind of novel and it felt pretty good.
I feel very good now. But if you don't have a harem, don't write so many emotional scenes. Anyway, the harem will be withdrawn. It's just a personal feeling. The author should work hard.
Not bad, not bad. It smelled a little like a harem at first, but then it was okay.
Chapters 23, 24, 31, 35, and 39 have been preliminarily revised regarding the character plot of Xia Chuyun. If there are any bugs, please give us feedback.
Ahem, here comes the long review! ① The opening chapter does not have the cliché of being dumped by a gold-digger girl. Instead, the heroine gets leukemia and is forced to break up. This is a good outline of the relationship between the heroine and the protagonist's predecessor. Although this is very familiar, it is not as disgusting as those plots of being dumped by a gold-digger girl, let alone bloody. I don't understand the book friends who complained about this. Maybe they also vomited that kind of plot, but in my opinion, this kind of plot will not detract from the book. ② The protagonist continues to be with his former girlfriend. I think the author made this point very obvious. In layman's terms, the original person is exactly the same person in the protagonist's parallel space. There is almost no difference in origin. What's more, the protagonist has inherited the emotions of the predecessor. The protagonist can already say that he is not exactly the protagonist before time travel. He already has the emotions of the original person and can be said to be an evolved version of the original person. So is it difficult to understand that accepting the original girlfriend? It's really hard for me to understand the point in the comments that the protagonist is a taker. ③There is also a criticism in the comment area that the protagonist goes to the company without being neatly dressed and disrespects others. First of all, it didn't mention how much the protagonist was ridiculed. Just pretend you don't care. The author didn't even mention it. Why don't you find something to do? Secondly, he didn't go to the company to work. He went to clean up the scum. Do you need to wear formal clothes to clean up the scum? He also didn't show off in front of the collective employees. The plot of disrespecting others is not reflected in the book. What are they talking about? ④Well, I saw the corrected version of this ambiguous issue. It's obviously the author's fault here. The author's details are not in place, so I feel that this kind of love is very inexplicable. I feel that this kind of plot is unnecessary, but the author still cuts it very quickly. This woman only appeared in a few chapters, so it is not a negative plot. ⑤ There are no other problems with the rest. This book can be considered top-notch in terms of entertainment, but the plot has not yet unfolded. Let's look at the follow-up. There are no commendable problems with Shenhao. It is just average, but it will not deduct points. As for the system, it is very good. It's spiritual, and it's quite interesting. Book lovers who are entangled in the problem of the system need not do it. The rules of the system are artificially stipulated, and they can be strong or weak. I have seen overbearing systems, and it's a change of taste. Not to mention that there is a fierce man next door who turns the system into his wife~(￣▽￣~)~ ⑥The overall evaluation of this book is very good in the entertainment category of Tomato. At least based on the current 100 chapters, the score of Tomato's entertainment books is generally very low. I think this book can at least pass a 9. Well, one final word, for the book friend who said that he has read the book for 10,000 hours on three mobile phones, I just want to say that the first five chapters of this book are quite satisfactory and there is no bad plot. Why is it too bad! One star? Could it be that the entertainment score of Tomato is generally low because... Hiss... It's so scary! Goodbye! Retreat!
If you don't have a harem, don't write about so many women. It's so uncomfortable. I support the author and don't follow the theory of a harem. Come on, come on, come on! ! ! !
I originally wanted to review it after reading a hundred chapters, but currently there are only sixty chapters. The sixty chapters are a bit short, so I can't find any faults. As an online novel, the emphasis is on entertainment. It's enough that we can understand it. Having said so much, let me think about some of the advantages of this book: 1. It is not like a white text. 2. Most of the works selected for publication are very classic. 3. There is no such trick as pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters, and some people may cause trouble when I go to the United States. I don't know if the author can handle it well. Looking forward to
The book written by the author may not satisfy everyone's taste, but for me, this book is really good. Come on, author.
It feels very good to read, and the thinking is quite clear, just like the kind of old author's clear thinking without water characters. When I read it, I felt familiar, as if I had seen it somewhere before. I don't know why I had this idea. It is also worth recommending. The rating is low at the moment. The author hopes to work hard and hope that it will not be unfinished or eunuch. The most afraid thing is that the front part is very good and the back part is good, but you guys understand anyway.
It's pretty good. It's better to watch this in one day, but I want to ask, is it a single heroine or not? Not better (ಡωಡ)(ಡωಡ)(ಡωಡ)
Hahaha, what a great work! This system and the male protagonist are so fun, especially when the two of them are quarreling. I couldn't help but give it five stars after seeing a few pictures. It suits my taste. Big boost for the author! Update update
I originally thought it was a pretentious article, but I didn't expect that the power of words is so great and touching.
The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. One chapter may not be updated every two or three weeks😓
The overall feeling is quite good and pretty!
The plot is not bad, the writing is remarkable, and the feeling of immersion is quite strong while reading. Especially when I know the news about the heroine, the feeling comes instantly. I encourage the author to keep up the good work, don't be lazy, come on! The three views are also correct, but the protagonist must not be a virgin and hesitant. He must be decisive and sharp. This is the protagonist.
You definitely don't want a harem. Isn't it good to be with your childhood sweetheart?
Personally I think it's pretty good, the author keeps up the good work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's good, but updates are too slow. It's not enough. I'm going to start reading books. I'll read them again when I've gained enough weight.
That's right, just don't mess around with love, reject what should be refused, and dote on your wife, that's perfect. There's also family, and the single heroine is just a doting character.
It's pretty good. There's no pretending to be a pig to eat a tiger, and there's no bloody plot. It seems that the author has put his heart into it. Keep up the good work.
Author, don't be too tired and don't become bald at a young age😂😂
The author's book is not a eunuch, woo woo woo
Very nice. Very nice. I like it.
Interesting. The characters are full-bodied.
If the needle doesn't poke, come on, author!
Great author, please give it a try
Mr. Lin is so handsome, I love him.
I wrote your name on the planet, and if the stars were shining, that star would shine brightest.
You can chase it and add it to your bookshelf.
I hope Sick is the female protagonist and I like her character very much. The author said it has a single heroine, so I gave it five stars because of her. I hope she is the heroine, and I hope her illness will be cured soon. Also, can you please stop the heroine from forgiving her adoptive parents? They are so powerful that they don't care at all when the heroine is sick. It would be nice if the male protagonist traveled through time when they first met seven years ago. This will prevent some people from feeling isolated. But this is also good, author, come on.
I usually only read fantasy novels. It was my first time reading this kind of novel and it felt pretty good.
I feel very good now. But if you don't have a harem, don't write so many emotional scenes. Anyway, the harem will be withdrawn. It's just a personal feeling. The author should work hard.
Not bad, not bad. It smelled a little like a harem at first, but then it was okay.