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Wouldn't it be better if the author described the characters' movements and appearance in more detail? ? This is one of the best books I have ever read. Very well written. Support you! ! ! Work hard!

Actually, it looks pretty good to me. This is the second best-looking One Piece I've ever seen.

For now, it's the best pirate novel I've ever read (I'm really annoyed by those novels that are invincible from the beginning. I don't like novels of all genres as long as they have that tendency)

It looks good, the missions are detailed and the story of the cave is brought into it.

This book is really good, because the protagonist is the eldest prince of Alabasta, his father is the king and his mother is the queen. He is also the brother of Princess Vivi. Later, due to his father's disapproval, the protagonist secretly went to sea, but was plotted to sell him to the holy land of Mariejoia, where he was a slave to the dragon people for six years. Later, with the help of Tiger and the housekeeper, he escaped from death by eating the fruit of the phantom beast species. He also obtained the sword in the hand of the five old stars, the first-generation ghost Tetsu. Under the guidance of his savior Koushiro, he began to embark on the road to becoming a strong man. This novel is really good, almost better than other pirate fan novels.

It's rare to see a well-written One Piece novel, good luck to the author

There is no system, no harem, rich plot lines, real experiences and links, the characters are well described, the author's writing is good, it is recommended to publish a book directly (dog head)

Very pretty. I hope the author will update it soon and wait online. I'm very anxious.

It feels relatively good-looking. Unlike other pirates who have no brain system when they first come out and then invincible, I really have no desire to read it. This book made my eyes light up.

1. There is no systematic writing. Only those who practice on their own are interesting. 2. No harem 3. The heroine Hancock 4. Ace and Whitebeard are not dead 5. Momonosuke died I really can't justify not giving this 5 stars. Even though it robbed Luffy of some opportunities, I really recommend it. It's the best one I've ever seen among Pirates fics. I like to read unsystematic fics.

It's very interesting and has a lot of emotional lines. Unlike other novels where the emotional lines are very rushed, this novel is just too short! ! !

The author's writing style is very good, and every character is well drawn. And the heroine didn't give it for free, this is the real story.

The writing is good, and it has a passionate and inspirational feel similar to One Piece. ٩( 'ω' )و

This book is really beautiful, and each character is vividly described. It is a very good book besides systematic novels that I have read.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will update it soon (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑

It's much better than the adaptation I've seen. Come on! Five stars are indispensable

Author, this book is the best one I have read so far. I think there are very few unsystematic novels. But the beauty of this book is far beyond my imagination. I think this book will be rated at least 9.5 In the future.

It's so exciting. I highly recommend this book. It's very beautiful. It's much better than those sand sculptures.

The content of this book is extremely high-quality. In addition, can the author change the protagonist's later appearance to look like the white-toothed white tiger in Ninja 3? I've seen it look like the protagonist, and it matches very well. (Please comment)

It's really good. I just need to update it more. It's a new book that must be included. The Great Swordsman can be released first (personal thoughts)

Well written, looking forward to extraordinary performance

Can! Quite like it. Give it five-star support and hope the author will update it soon! Not enough.

I have only read One Piece once. I personally feel that this one is much better than other manga adaptations I have read. Many character settings are in line with the original work and my preferences. I just hope that the author will continue to work hard! ~\(≧▽≦)/~

See this! All I can say is, this is so fucking beautiful! I can't help myself. The emotions are well written here. It's very good and worth watching.

Good story, good plot, I quite like it, the main character's abilities are very clear

Very interesting, relatively few, the main character is the white tiger of the cat fruit phantom beast, very exciting

Recommended to read a good book. I have only read Chapter 8 of this book. The description of the Celestial Dragons is really real. It really makes me feel sick. I used to read other fics about how stupid the Celestial Dragons are but not how cruel they are. The emotional line is also very good, and the characterization is also good. In Jiang Wen's words: It's really damn good. It's really a masterpiece. As long as it doesn't end badly, it's a masterpiece of fan fiction.

Although he is a new author, he writes better than most authors.

It's not invincible but has unlimited potential. It feels like there are too many harems (but I like it (◦˙▽˙◦)). It's a very good novel. I personally like it very much. I hope the author will work hard and persevere.

One of the few starts in the Celestial Dragon dungeon, a good start, but a slow start. Like other pirates, they are all invincible and mixed with the abilities of other anime, which is a bit vomiting. One Piece is like the Pirate King, and there is no need for Naruto or the like to get involved! Great Five stars presented. . .