Becoming an Immortal: Starting from the Hehuan Sect

The plot content is good, the logic is quite reasonable, and occasionally it is very funny, very funny, and makes people laugh. Sometimes, they will drive by silently, it depends on whether you can get on or not, haha! Looking forward to the follow-up, Xiaochuan, please keep writing!

How can I put it this way? This book is a breath of fresh air. It is more realistic (but the front part is indeed a bit sadistic) and the writing is good.

The next book is related to the individual characters in this book🤫

I really like this book, it's very good. The plot is so engaging and in-depth that I can't put it down. Hahaha, I stayed up all night to read it all. I felt like I didn't have enough brain power in some places. In short, I hope the author will update it soon, and will send five stars and a gift reminder charm. Please don't dislike it. Finally, I wish the author great success in life and work. Thank you for writing such a good novel for us. 😉

What should I say? I also told the author that I would rate it after writing the long review. I have read a lot of books, both physical and online. This book is good, and the plot has ups and downs. This is good, but it is only good, because many articles can do that. Nowadays, articles are blindly refreshing, fast, and mindless. This is not good. It only makes people stay at the direct neurophysiological stimulation, and cannot really let people feel the deep meaning behind an article. For example, although this book may have some controversy, it uses suspense novels as a reference to set up the plot, making the plot ups and downs and arousing people's discussion. Goudong won't say any more. The clues are confusing. Regarding the content, there is still relatively little content. It is mainly about the plot of Nanhua Prefecture. There are two lines, Wei Lingyue, the Ancient God Clan or Mingshan, extending to higher places. It is better to deal with the current content now. The characterization is very good. Correspondingly, I like the role of the protagonist's mother the most in the book. It is very touching. You can use short bursts of vigorous writing to portray characters, but this can only be used for supporting roles. The protagonist needs to have a personality and also needs to It has the ability to grow and change with the development of the plot. Write the characters in a variety of ways, so that everyone can see the shadow of the people around them or themselves, so that they will have a sense of substitution and be more attractive. Regarding the plot, it is recommended to set up a plot and refer to some detective novels. The characters and plot need to match, and interstitial narratives are more recommended. Write a little more, don't describe it too hard This is the last time I write a review. This book is already very good. Regarding the supporting characters, you can add more supporting characters to the main plot. For example, when the protagonist is sleeping, you can add the reactions of the major leaders, instead of just love and love, so that the plot will progress more naturally.

I finally found this kind of erotic and spiritual book. This is my favorite.

This is a different kind of article, clear but not boring, funny, sometimes high-speed, it doesn't matter if it's not finished, the author has worked very hard

Come on, do your best, I will keep waiting, just because of your character, even if I read the advertisement, I will give you a gift, and I will give you a gift for every book of yours in the future.

Good book, great original ideas, but it's not popular, leaving sad tears for the author🤣

It's very interesting, but I don't know why it's not popular. The author hastily followed up

The writing is very good, but it is not popular, and then the pace is a bit slow, and because it is not popular, the author is cultivating the book. So this is not a question of whether the writing is good or not, it's just that the time is running out. I hope the author can update it.

Challenging the limits, extremely exciting, the characterization is very good, starting from getting married right away, it's really exciting, it's really exciting

Not bad, it tastes great! The pig's feet were dug out of the Dantian by the father-in-law and given to his daughter in the hope of becoming a god 😂😂😂 The plot is extremely fierce and the language is witty and humorous 😏 Dear fellow Taoists, come with me, you will find all the necessary equipment for cultivating immortals, including the Dharma and Earth Technique for Wealthy Couples! Don't miss it if you pass by 😂😂😂😂

A good book, you can sit quietly and read it when the sun and moon are not shining. People will rise and fall in the book, ignoring the noise of the world. This is the most peaceful happiness in the world.

The plot has ups and downs, the protagonist's performance is outstanding, the description of the characters is vivid, and the human nature and human heart are vividly expressed. The outline of the novel is clear, the ideas are unconventional, and it is original. In short, in a word, it is good, but the update is too slow.

There is no free lunch in the world. This book is well-written and well-founded, but why do I always feel that it would be more attractive if I stayed with the sect leader and did not harm him🌝🌝 Maybe it's because I read too many brain-burning novels in Shuhuang some time ago and now I want to read daily life.

A good book, the plot is reasonable, the male and female protagonists have likable characters, and I personally feel very good about it

If you think this book is good, I can also recommend you to read The Rebellious Demon King. They are both original novels. The characters, emotions and content of this book are very well written, come on, the author [laughs]

The plot is very new, and I enjoyed reading it. The author knows whether this novel will have a single heroine or multiple heroines. Come on, author, don't be like other authors who torture people by writing something that is not written!

It's true. According to the author's way of writing, some emotions and plot descriptions can be more vivid, because when I read a book, I actually like to bring the protagonist into experiencing this kind of mood. It is recommended to learn from the characterizations of Chen Dong, Zhu Zi, Xiao Langjun and others. Their understanding of the characters is too thorough. The author is expected to become a great master, but now it seems that he lacks experience. I think it will be better if he writes more, but he still has to feed the characters. Come on, come on, I hope the author will grow, and you will be dualang (๑ºั╰╯ºั๑)

The first book is really well written like this. Overall, the outline is quite messy, and I don't have my own style. I have seen too many other people's things, and I lack very little of my own. Although there are a lot of articles in the world, a good book still needs the author's own things in it. This is the meaning of a real book.

A rather suspenseful novel that likes to dig holes. It's quite brain-burning, but it's made with conscience. . Why don't you find a hen for the Iron Rooster?

Read it in one go! This book is really good, but unfortunately the rating is a bit low. Fortunately, the name of the book attracted me, and the poster also said it was very good, so I came here. But I am also very happy to read this good book. This book is finished, and I will come to support the next book. Cheers, author!

I first saw this book in Shuhuang Plaza. I clicked on it and found that the data was not good, but I heard they said it was not bad, so I read it patiently. I also felt that only through investigation can I have a say, so I gave it a five-star review. First of all, the plot is very original. It is different from the fixed routines of many other novels. The various reversals and layouts were also somewhat unexpected. Secondly, the characters are relatively full-bodied. Among them, the most unforgettable one is Ren Xiaoyao. On the one hand, he loves his daughter to the core, but on the other hand, he is ruthless and kills innocent people. On the other hand, he has a pattern and cunning. Characters with a mixture of good and evil are flesh and blood characters. Moreover, the male and female protagonists also enjoy grudges and grudges as they please, but I personally feel that there is still a long way to go in order to create a complete image of the male and female protagonists. Now let's talk about the shortcomings. In fact, I think the male protagonist's character is not very suitable for the identity of a time traveler. After all, he has been born in two lives. The pattern cannot be too small, and experience and wisdom are also essential. Another point is about the emotions of the characters. I don't know if it's my problem. The emotional changes of the characters in the book are not natural and lack a sense of smoothness. I suggest that the author can add some detailed descriptions in the later text. In short, I believe that the author will accept the readers' opinions or suggestions, view them dialectically, and make choices. I also hope that the author can write better and better, and depict a vast and magnificent world of immortality with thousands of people and faces! Come on! ! !

It's very interesting. I really hope that the author's book can be recommended. It's okay. There was a big guy in Tomato who didn't become popular even after finishing the first book. However, when he wrote the second book, it became popular. By the way, the first one also became popular, so keep it up, and I'll give you gifts and good reviews.

Five stars. Good-looking. It is different from the bad immortality novels nowadays. I feel like I have regained the feeling I had when I first read the novel.

I think this book is a bit novel in terms of topic. The author's writing is also good, the plot is smooth, the content is vivid, and the characters are flesh and blood. It would be better if there was only one female protagonist. After all, Ziyi has paid a lot for the male protagonist. If there is more, it will not be so good. So the author, please do your best (ง •̀_•́)ง don't give up and urge you to update it at the end, it's not enough! ! !

Good book, come on author, stick to yourself and keep at it

I have a deep feeling. In the world of immortality where the weak eat the strong, just like our real life, it is difficult for the weak to survive.

Seeing what Ziyi is doing for Wang Chuan now, I am a little touched... My heart clenched together when I watched it.