One Piece: Starting by Rejecting Red-Hair' Invitation

Thank you to everyone who has been supporting this book. Let me reiterate again. This book is more about daily life, not a traditional passionate novel, and the behavior of the protagonist's avatar has nothing to do with the protagonist. It can be said that the avatar and the protagonist can actually be understood as separate individuals. Lin Mo is a straight man, a straight man, a straight man! Say important things three times~

I think the process of gradually becoming cheerful from a cold boy is pretty good, especially the group favorite novel. But I hope there is no female protagonist ಥ_ಥ, because I think he should not be the kind of person who gives love, but the kind who is loved, To be precise, it means being liked by others, such as Kaku's concern for Ma Zui, Thunder God Niu Tou Bu Ma Zui's protection, Xiao Bai's loyal guardianship, and the eternal loyalty of the third body (although Muse doesn't know whether she will be with him in the end, but Muse is also very cool ~ crimin. վ) Please don't complain, because I am a person who loves to knock people and just love CP. Lin Mo may not like girls too much because he has also been hurt. (Hope so) Kaku is dead... The sunshine, one of the warmth, is gone... That's really close to the collapse of sanity I'm not crying, I'm laughing It's also about not being perseverant and facing reality.

Damn, a lot of people said that the male protagonist in this book is withdrawn and doesn't kill much. I think this is the best-looking Pirates fanfic I've ever read. The crew is gentle and the male protagonist gradually comes out of the shadows. The whole book made me feel relaxed. The good and bad aspects of each character are reflected. There is a lot to praise. I highly recommend it.

My first book review, this should be one of the top five One Piece fanfics on any platform. The characters are almost exactly the same as those in One Piece. This shows that the author has researched the characters, rather than just writing whatever he wants. From this novel, I can I can see that the growth of the protagonist is logical, not mindless. From being withdrawn and arrogant in the early stage to gradually becoming talkative, he does not have too many active contacts with famous pirate figures, and does not directly interfere too much with the main plot, but the butterfly effect is going on in this world. Now that I have talked about the advantages, let's talk about the shortcomings. There are many character profiles for each character, usually two pages. The story is relatively simple but has some ups and downs. It is more of a daily novel. There is not much blood and fighting. There is not enough continuity between locations. I don't understand why it starts from From here to there, every route given by the system is very purposeful and inconsistent with the nature of Lin Mo's own voyage. For example, the time when Kaku returned to Pigeon Island (not the system location) was good, and the trip to Judiciary Island (which can be understood as Kaku) was also OK. These are also slightly logical. Overall, the novel is currently a good one. After reading several Boring Pirates fanfics, I found it very eye-catching. I can recommend it and add it to my collection.

This is a very personal novel, and the character settings are also very reasonable. I have read dozens of them carefully, and to be honest, it is very attractive. I have been reading One Piece for five or six years. The plot of this book also portrays the characters very well, and it is very thoughtful. People who rate it should not be so casual. Book reviews and ratings should still be very important to the author.

This is the first Pirates fanfic I read. I started reading because Akainu died. I fell in love with this book unknowingly. I have read more than 400 chapters now. Facts have proved that I was not wrong. The protagonist's character did not have a sense of belonging to the Pirates world in the early stage. Later, because of the funny character of Eniro, Kaku, and the super-powerful Xiaobai, he did. The person I want to protect gradually becomes more humane. This really touched me. One Piece is really passionate and I like to read it. But fandom is fanfic, and it doesn't have to be the same type if it is different from the original work. People nowadays are too impetuous. Calm down and read it. This book is really good. Thank you to the author💪!!!

I can only say that it is good. The writing about fighting is not good enough and lacks a little writing skills, but there is still a lot of room for growth. Come on!

What attracts me to this book is that the characters' personalities slowly change after they unknowingly make various partners. It feels so natural that if you don't read it from the beginning, you may even think that the character's personality is like this. It gives me a feeling that the protagonist and his companions are actually affecting each other. . . If you can slowly read it after two or three hundred chapters, you will be deeply attracted. . .

To be honest, this is the best novel I have ever read, bar none. The author is awesome! But I always feel that it is not long. After all, it is almost as fast as I can write at this speed. I am so worried! Thumbs up if you agree, thank you.

The writing is very good. I read the comment section and some people said that the novel is too bland, but in my opinion, this is a very normal and warm novel. Isn't it delicious for everyday life? Does it have to be so intense and tense to be called a novel? There is no need for novel authors to cater to you. You can write whatever you like. Some people are willing to read it. If you don't want to read it, you can just stay aside. There is no need to say such hurtful words.