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Thank you to everyone who has been supporting this book. Let me reiterate again. This book is more about daily life, not a traditional passionate novel, and the behavior of the protagonist's avatar has nothing to do with the protagonist. It can be said that the avatar and the protagonist can actually be understood as separate individuals. Lin Mo is a straight man, a straight man, a straight man! Say important things three times~

Damn, a lot of people said that the male protagonist in this book is withdrawn and doesn't kill much. I think this is the best-looking Pirates fanfic I've ever read. The crew is gentle and the male protagonist gradually comes out of the shadows. The whole book made me feel relaxed. The good and bad aspects of each character are reflected. There is a lot to praise. I highly recommend it.

My first book review, this should be one of the top five One Piece fanfics on any platform. The characters are almost exactly the same as those in One Piece. This shows that the author has researched the characters, rather than just writing whatever he wants. From this novel, I can I can see that the growth of the protagonist is logical, not mindless. From being withdrawn and arrogant in the early stage to gradually becoming talkative, he does not have too many active contacts with famous pirate figures, and does not directly interfere too much with the main plot, but the butterfly effect is going on in this world. Now that I have talked about the advantages, let's talk about the shortcomings. There are many character profiles for each character, usually two pages. The story is relatively simple but has some ups and downs. It is more of a daily novel. There is not much blood and fighting. There is not enough continuity between locations. I don't understand why it starts from From here to there, every route given by the system is very purposeful and inconsistent with the nature of Lin Mo's own voyage. For example, the time when Kaku returned to Pigeon Island (not the system location) was good, and the trip to Judiciary Island (which can be understood as Kaku) was also OK. These are also slightly logical. Overall, the novel is currently a good one. After reading several Boring Pirates fanfics, I found it very eye-catching. I can recommend it and add it to my collection.

This is a very personal novel, and the character settings are also very reasonable. I have read dozens of them carefully, and to be honest, it is very attractive. I have been reading One Piece for five or six years. The plot of this book also portrays the characters very well, and it is very thoughtful. People who rate it should not be so casual. Book reviews and ratings should still be very important to the author.

This is the first Pirates fanfic I read. I started reading because Akainu died. I fell in love with this book unknowingly. I have read more than 400 chapters now. Facts have proved that I was not wrong. The protagonist's character did not have a sense of belonging to the Pirates world in the early stage. Later, because of the funny character of Eniro, Kaku, and the super-powerful Xiaobai, he did. The person I want to protect gradually becomes more humane. This really touched me. One Piece is really passionate and I like to read it. But fandom is fanfic, and it doesn't have to be the same type if it is different from the original work. People nowadays are too impetuous. Calm down and read it. This book is really good. Thank you to the author💪! ! !

I can only say that it is good. The writing about fighting is not good enough and lacks a little writing skills, but there is still a lot of room for growth. Come on!

What attracts me to this book is that the characters' personalities slowly change after they unknowingly make various partners. It feels so natural that if you don't read it from the beginning, you may even think that the character's personality is like this. It gives me a feeling that the protagonist and his companions are actually affecting each other. . . If you can slowly read it after two or three hundred chapters, you will be deeply attracted. . .

To be honest, this is the best novel I have ever read, bar none. The author is awesome! But I always feel that it is not long. After all, it is almost as fast as I can write at this speed. I am so worried! Thumbs up if you agree, thank you.

The writing is very good. I read the comment section and some people said that the novel is too bland, but in my opinion, this is a very normal and warm novel. Isn't it delicious for everyday life? Does it have to be so intense and tense to be called a novel? There is no need for novel authors to cater to you. You can write whatever you like. Some people are willing to read it. If you don't want to read it, you can just stay aside. There is no need to say such hurtful words.

I don't know why, but I really want to see the scene where the protagonist meets Luffy and the others! It must be really fun! ! ! Please work hard to update the article, the author is great! Come on Ollie! ! ! Ye Qinghui₍ᐢ⸝⸝› ̫ ‹⸝⸝ᐢ₎

It may be a bit slow in the early stage, which may lead to dissuasion, but after reading it patiently, I gradually became interested. I still like this kind of story that is half main line and half daily characters. The character of the protagonist has changed a lot from the first chapter to the present. The interaction plot with companions when the personality changes is also vivid. The words and deeds of each character are rich and colorful. A little growth story like this is still very gratifying no matter how many times I read it. Of course, the traveler's journey cannot be smooth sailing. If the next plot requires knives, just like the prophecy when I occupied the shop in Windmill Village, I will have as many knives as I can. (Ahem, I am ready to stock up for several days.) Just relying on the side effects of a cell regeneration skill, I can imagine the plot of Lin Mo after losing his memory for a month (although it is a bit cruel, it is still necessary). After all, I am not an evil ghost. All in all, if you have the patience to read this book, it is still very good. It is a slow-paced and heartwarming daily novel (the growth of the protagonist and the slowly getting involved with the people around him). The dialogues between the characters are sometimes very exciting. It is not recommended to be read as a refreshing novel. The protagonist is not a murderous person.

The characterization is very good, each person's personality characteristics are very distinct, and personal interests and hobbies are written in great detail. The writing style is also good. It can be said to be a good literary work. I hope the author can keep writing.

I have to say it's pretty good. It's my type. But the protagonist shouldn't be so cold. It's just that the people in the comment area seem to be very uneasy and quarreling at every turn. 😤😤

I started reading this book last year. It has been a long time since I wrote this book. My intuitive feeling is that it is quite good to change from indifference to a little bit of improvement. The characters are also well drawn.

This novel is very nice and comfortable to read. It doesn't feel like the plot is too brainless either. The protagonist is not the Virgin either. Very exciting It's been a long time since I've read it, and I'm still very touched by this novel. I think the protagonist has really changed a lot from a cold person who is not interested in anything to a person who can joke around and take his partners seriously. I started chasing this book a long time ago. I really like his style and plot. And it still remains among the more than 300 novels in my bookshelf until now. I don't read it for at most two days in a row, and I read it basically once a day. He didn't know what was going on, but suddenly so many people were so malicious towards him. Many people criticized him and labeled my previous objective and sincere comments as trolls. I think the plot is still interesting and lively. What is it that doesn't meet your expectations? I hope the author will not be affected by these comments and I will always support them.

I have watched the anime One Piece, but I only understand some of the content. When I read this book, I thought it was very interesting. The series of things the author wrote about the protagonist signing in were very interesting and interesting. I am looking forward to Lin Mo meeting Luffy and the others when he grows up. It is great, this book (づ￣³￣)づ❤️

This book is great, although I didn't really like Lin Mo's character in the early stages and felt that his character might miss a lot of interesting plot points. But after seeing Lin Mo's character gradually develop feelings for his partners over time, I was even happier than Lin Mo himself. The content of the plot in the middle is very unique, and the author's imagination is very big, allowing us to see many interesting plots besides the main plot. The other thing that shocked me the most was the war on top. It made me feel that powerless feeling for the second time, and the war was written with brilliance. In the end, Kaku's death made me feel the same sad and incredible feeling as the death of Ace and Whitebeard. When Lin Mo was possessed and saw Kaku's death, he collapsed like Luffy and self-destructed. Until he lost his memory, his mood could not be calm for a long time. It was like seeing the second war on the top, killing the world. Overall, this is the best One Piece novel I have read (so far). (Also, I hope Enelu can strengthen it and add back his ultimate move 2 - Lei Ying. This move is quite shocking). Well, the above are my comments and personal opinions on this book. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Thank you.

I have been following this book for a long time. The author has always written wonderfully and it is very to my liking. Good luck to the author. Strive to reach a higher level⊙▽⊙ Come on, come on, come on! ! ! ! ^ω^

I've read a lot of One Piece fan fiction, but this is the only one I've been following from beginning to end. I hope the author can keep updating it. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author is great, very good. He was a bit cold in the early stage. When I saw the 65-year-old, the protagonist became gentle and easy-going, which is very good. Although there is not much passion, there is a lot of gentle beauty, which is very good. I hope that the protagonist will be a gentle, easy-going and humorous person in the future.

A very good book, and the character description is also deeply rooted in people's hearts. I would like to make another suggestion, that is, there are too many skills. You can change some rewards appropriately. There are basically no major problems in the whole book, but the update is a bit slow_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. [/ Awesome] Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up and don't get lost, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer. I am the audience who appreciates the film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. [/Poor] I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel aimlessly, with no intention of finishing it, but you succeeded and let me finish reading it in "two days". [/Sweat] Now, I can only express my emotions! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours.

Although I have only read more than 100 chapters, I already feel that this is one of the top three Pirates fan books I have read. I think it is very good about the encounter and collision between the protagonist and the original characters during the trip, the control of the characters of the original characters, and the guesses and changes before the original plot. Especially the one I just saw, bringing Enel back to Qinghai, is a dream come true for fans of Hainan. Awesome! Come on, author!

A very good book [like] but I always have a weird feeling. I want to have a female protagonist but I don't want to have a female protagonist... I'm very confused [I'm about to cry] (although I don't know what I'm struggling with) but I will still insist on pursuing it. Big support for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Great, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Don't care about what those people say, I like your writing very much (≧ω≦), I think the score of 9.1 Is low, it should be higher, don't be unfinished, I will keep reading, it's wonderful. I am a Haimi. I personally think you have written the personality of each character very well. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The protagonist's personality is not contradictory, his IQ is online, and his way of dealing with people has not changed much from the early stage to now. This is a good point. I hope that the protagonist can also grow during the journey.

Well written. The characters are distinct, the scenes are compact, and full of fun. The sea journey is not boring at all. The character of the original pirates is well captured. I like it and recommend it. I am also looking forward to the follow-up. I wonder if it will be written a few years later and will I meet Luffy? Looking forward to what will happen at that time? Although the protagonist does not want to interfere too much with the trajectory of the original One Piece, it still has a slight impact. What will happen next? How will the fate of some of the aboriginal people we are familiar with change relatively? Looking forward to... Yi Duoxiang, hahahaha

It's a very good book. I think it's my favorite No. 1 Middle school book. I like the character who has nothing to do with himself. After all, it's a bit nosy to help others when there's nothing to do. I really like this kind of character. This is also my first time to review a novel. Don't suggest it if it's not good.

Five stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Highly recommended😍😍This book is really great! ! I've already made up a series in my head! ! ! Super pretty! 😍😍 Also, those who don't like to read please stop polluting the air in the comment area, okay? ! The good mood of reading has been ruined😡😡

The male protagonist is not a mother, is a bit arrogant, decisive in killing, and has a clear distinction between good and evil. This book is absolutely great. It is the best of all the pirate novels I have read. I guarantee with my twenty years of single life that this book will be a hit! 👍👍👍