In the City, My Whole Family Has a System

It's still very interesting, but should we give the other protagonists a chance to appear? Also, it's a bit short

I plan to continue writing. Do you have any good suggestions?

Can't you afford it?

You scum, playing with my feelings

It's okay but too short!

The storyline is very short, a family of four travels through time in a car accident. I was also drunk when I saw the ending. It turned out to be a dream.

It's just that I feel like the author, you dug a hole but didn't fill it. It's a bit of a dig.

It looks good, but it's too short.

We don't play with people like this. It's a really good book and it's finished so quickly.