Hegemony: Summon Zhao Zilong at the Beginning

It's quite good to see such a novel in Tomato. The plot of the novel is quite rigorously connected, but there are some flaws in the conception (there are details, but the details are not handled well enough). It took me some time to read more than 300 chapters in one go. From the perspective of an old reader and an author with some writing experience, the author's handling of the protagonist's psychological and ideological transformation from when he first time traveled lacked flavor (if the protagonist's inner monologue was used to transform, this way of handling, the novel's blunt plot would become Much richer); after reading more than 200 chapters, the sense of substitution in the novel is average (to be honest, most authors are imagining the protagonist's strategy, but the characterization of the character is too simple. As a protagonist who only has strategies, it would be a bit stiff to read. If the inner thoughts of the protagonist can be added, the inner decision-making process when thinking The content of the novel will be much richer (physical activities, decisive psychological activities when indecisive, etc.); After reading more than 300 chapters, I found that the author has re-conceived the image and status of Princess Ning in the novel. From a reader's point of view, there are many characterizations of Princess Ning, and the author also draws from some events and The details are dealt with to portray the image of the princess, but it still does not have the feeling that it will jump out in the mind when reading. If the author adds some descriptions of Princess Ning's psychological activities when the protagonist changes and grows, the author's description of the connection between the two swings will be more rigorous, and the portrayal of Princess Ning's image will be more specific. Generally speaking, the author has a certain level of writing skills, but his understanding of the elements of the novel is a bit lacking. I hope that if the author works hard, his level will be greatly improved. ——A message from a reader

The writing is very good, but there are fewer generals and counselors, but it also has more sense. At least it won't feel too messy. You should be able to read it for a long time. If you can't write it, take your time and organize your thoughts.

The writing is very good. If it is made into a series, the ratings will be very high. It is not just about time travel. The characters in the book have distinct characteristics, are interlocked, are full of suspense, and are very exciting.

This is the first time I have seen such a good system battle article. I hope the author will write it slowly so that it does not collapse. I hope that each military unit has its own space to play and don't let the generals decide everything. I can see more troop formations and the role of small people. I hope to see more generals in the battlefield and see more tragic things on the battlefield. The fighting, the passionate bloody battle, the tenacious resistance of the hostile forces, the desperate defense, and the overall view are all very good. However, I feel that there is a little less blood when writing about the battlefield. What I see is mainly the fighting of the generals. I hope to write about the blood, tragedy, and cruelty on the battlefield. Overall, the writing is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

I always feel that this novel was not written by one person, but by a team, otherwise it would not have been so resourceful and thoughtful. If it is really the work of the author alone, he is really a genius. Regardless, it was really enjoyable to watch. Is such a masterpiece paving the way for upcoming games? I'm already looking forward to it. Ha ha!

This book was delayed by the title. I originally thought it was a cool article about the invincible system. But as I read it, I felt that I might be the kind of person who could go back in time and not survive an episode. Strategies, plots, intrigues, good guys, and each twist is more exciting than the last.

It's really good, a high-quality novel. I think this kind of literary talent has surpassed most novel writers by a long way. The ideas and context of the whole novel can only be said to be amazing.

The rhythm of the book is very good. Not only the Virgin, but also the decent and villains have online IQs and very high IQs. This is one of the few novels that I dare not skip reading in so many years. I hope the author will update 100/200 chapters every day, otherwise I heard that there is an author next door who is late in updating and is admitted to the hospital.

Look at the title of the book: Damn, it's just a piece of writing. After watching it for a while: Damn, it's so fucking brain-burning. I've been watching it for a long time: Oh my god, Mission: Impossible

Awesome, the most enjoyable historical systematic text I have read in more than 10 years. The plots are interlocking and the characters are clear and distinct, especially Ji Ping'an. At this level, in my opinion, Ji Wuming's son has a greater chance! I hope the author will continue to work hard. I want to see where my Han dragon flag will be planted.

I was really put off by the name. The first ten or so pictures may not be very attractive, but! ! The back part is really super interesting. I love to burn my brains with my book friends. There are many completely unexpected endings! Good-looking, good-looking, Amway

This book is well written, and for the first time I feel like I can think about the characters together with the book. There is an immersive feeling. Very good, I like it very much. I hope the author can work hard! At the same time, I hope the author can arrange a role. I am not a smart person in reality, so I hope the author can arrange a smart character in the book. Nickname: Xuanyuan Yun

The author's writing style is mellow. Clear mind. Hope to keep up the good work and update more. Don't be like some novels that stop writing after they've been written.

It's really good to read. This book is the kind of book that makes you travel through time and survive only three episodes. None of you are stupid, you are all thousand-year-old foxes😳😳😳

The first two hundred chapters are really excellent. The author has rigorous thinking, exquisite layout, quick and neat events, and the use of golden fingers is appropriate and reasonable. It is a rare and good article. After 200 chapters, he should have accumulated a lot of readers. Coupled with the immediate benefits of chasing more and more explosive updates, the author has also entered the stage of harvesting leeks. The logic of the writing is obviously insufficient, and there are always some unknown reversals. The content is also lagging. An event between Party A and Party B is first described from Party A's perspective, then guessed by Party B, and then reviewed again from a third party's perspective. There are more chapters, but the pace is much slower, and it seems very watery. But I still gave it five stars. It makes money and is not embarrassing. I always give a like to Qiafan's videos when I see them. However, it is still recommended that the author restrain himself. After all, long-term hydrology is very unpopular with readers, and money must be earned in a steady stream to be more stable.

This is the first novel I have read to rate and comment on. I once felt that the author's brains are really awesome, he is passionate and strategic, and all the good and bad guys are smart. After reading the novel for so many years, this book is really awesome. The plot is compact, and not a chapter is nonsense. If you read it with your brains, you will have thoughts that you don't have a brain. I hope the ending is not bad, and I will keep an eye on the author for a new book.

A very good historical novel. The previous one was really exciting and worth reading. I am very picky about reading novels. I usually stop reading a novel if I can't read more than a few. I really finished this one.

This is the best summoning novel I have ever read. The more I read it, the more attractive it becomes.

The backend is so mind-numbing! Very exciting! It's just that for a non-brainer like me, it's a bit overwhelming! I was also a little confused! But I still like it very much

This is high IQ, and this is the kind of political struggle that should be. Killing people without blood, burning brains, and not lowering the enemy's IQ. Everyone has distinctive characteristics. I hope the author will work hard ^0＾~

I've been reading it for half a month, and it's quite exciting. As a bookworm of ten years, the plot of this book has ups and downs, and is relatively reasonable. It leaves a lot of foreshadowing. I hope the author doesn't finish it 😱.

It's a very good system article, the cheats are not obtrusive, the layout is wonderful, and the protagonist's IQ is online. It's worth a read!

This book can be said to be the best among historical and time-travel novels. I hope the author can keep writing like this without ending.

This book is really good. Friends who are short of books can read it with confidence. The Marist Party and the brainless party can turn right.

It's pretty good. It can be regarded as a good book to read with your brain. The plots in the book are intertwined and very real. Unlike other novels of this kind, a few peerless advisers are invincible. The enemies fall into the trap like fools. The characters of both our own and the enemy are well portrayed. The best part is the growth of the protagonist, from the self-righteousness and benevolence of a woman at the beginning to the watertightness now, and the ambition to dominate the world. Some people say that you shouldn't have a system, but do you think that without a system, how can you, a little prince-in-law, recruit talents? Is it possible to portray the emperor and the prime minister as fools who don't know how to develop their own power? Isn't that a brainless and cool article? Nowadays, people look down on mindless cool novels. They feel useless when they see the protagonist being bullied. The mindless ones don't like it, and the useless ones don't like it. So isn't this kind of clever and cool novel what everyone wants to read?

The narrative content is progressive and very good

It's quite interesting. The storyline is ups and downs, interlocking, gripping, thrilling and fascinating!

A good book that is delayed by the title is not an invincible novel. This is a real palace intrigue novel. Everyone's comments later are that they feel that their brains are not enough. It is a rare good book, but it is not suitable for beginners to read. If you read it, it is not suitable for beginners. If the foreshadowing of the previous plot is uncomfortable. It is recommended not to spray it at first, and you will know the author's deep meaning after reading it later.

This is definitely a masterpiece. I have read a lot of novels about this type of novel, but this one attracted me. The wonderful content and the connected storylines deeply pulled my heart. I read it to the end in one breath, and I really look forward to the stories that follow. This can also highlight the author's inner conception and serious attitude towards the novel. Support the author!

As an old bookworm, in fact, this platform is just my seasoning. After all, this platform is full of interesting questions. I clicked in for no reason and saw the latest update. The plot is rigorous and there are many small pits for readers to burn their own brains. Except for the summons, other plots are normal and have constant climaxes and ups and downs. The description of the human heart is a major feature. Generally speaking, it is easier for us readers to get involved, with brain-burning, passion, and ups and downs. The plot of "Fu" is worth reading. I haven't read a book for a long time, but I have read your book and will recommend it to some friends for them to taste it. Come on, author. I feel like you still have a long time to write this book and give it a perfect ending. I hope that the call will be downplayed in the middle and later stages and the protagonist will continue to be highlighted. This will make us feel more exciting and brain-burning, making us suffer and be happy. Personal opinions are for reference only.