Conquest: From the Start, I Summon Zhao Zilong

It's quite good to see such a novel in Tomato. The plot of the novel is quite rigorously connected, but there are some flaws in the conception (there are details, but the details are not handled well enough). It took me some time to read more than 300 chapters in one go. From the perspective of an old reader and an author with some writing experience, the author's handling of the protagonist's psychological and ideological transformation from when he first time traveled lacked flavor (if the protagonist's inner monologue was used to transform, this way of handling, the novel's blunt plot would become Much richer); after reading more than 200 chapters, the sense of substitution in the novel is average (to be honest, most authors are imagining the protagonist's strategy, but the characterization of the character is too simple. As a protagonist who only has strategies, it would be a bit stiff to read. If the inner thoughts of the protagonist can be added, the inner decision-making process when thinking The content of the novel will be much richer (physical activities, decisive psychological activities when indecisive, etc.); After reading more than 300 chapters, I found that the author has re-conceived the image and status of Princess Ning in the novel. From a reader's point of view, there are many characterizations of Princess Ning, and the author also draws from some events and The details are dealt with to portray the image of the princess, but it still does not have the feeling that it will jump out in the mind when reading. If the author adds some descriptions of Princess Ning's psychological activities when the protagonist changes and grows, the author's description of the connection between the two swings will be more rigorous, and the portrayal of Princess Ning's image will be more specific. Generally speaking, the author has a certain level of writing skills, but his understanding of the elements of the novel is a bit lacking. I hope that if the author works hard, his level will be greatly improved. ——A message from a reader

The writing is very good, but there are fewer generals and counselors, but it also has more sense. At least it won't feel too messy. You should be able to read it for a long time. If you can't write it, take your time and organize your thoughts.

The writing is very good. If it is made into a series, the ratings will be very high. It is not just about time travel. The characters in the book have distinct characteristics, are interlocked, are full of suspense, and are very exciting.

This is the first time I have seen such a good system battle article. I hope the author will write it slowly so that it does not collapse. I hope that each military unit has its own space to play and don't let the generals decide everything. I can see more troop formations and the role of small people. I hope to see more generals in the battlefield and see more tragic things on the battlefield. The fighting, the passionate bloody battle, the tenacious resistance of the hostile forces, the desperate defense, and the overall view are all very good. However, I feel that there is a little less blood when writing about the battlefield. What I see is mainly the fighting of the generals. I hope to write about the blood, tragedy, and cruelty on the battlefield. Overall, the writing is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

I always feel that this novel was not written by one person, but by a team, otherwise it would not have been so resourceful and thoughtful. If it is really the work of the author alone, he is really a genius. Regardless, it was really enjoyable to watch. Is such a masterpiece paving the way for upcoming games? I'm already looking forward to it. Ha ha!

This book was delayed by the title. I originally thought it was a cool article about the invincible system. But as I read it, I felt that I might be the kind of person who could go back in time and not survive an episode. Strategies, plots, intrigues, good guys, and each twist is more exciting than the last.

It's really good, a high-quality novel. I think this kind of literary talent has surpassed most novel writers by a long way. The ideas and context of the whole novel can only be said to be amazing.

The rhythm of the book is very good. Not only the Virgin, but also the decent and villains have online IQs and very high IQs. This is one of the few novels that I dare not skip reading in so many years. I hope the author will update 100/200 chapters every day, otherwise I heard that there is an author next door who is late in updating and is admitted to the hospital.

Look at the title of the book: Damn, it's just a piece of writing. After watching it for a while: Damn, it's so fucking brain-burning. I've been watching it for a long time: Oh my god, Mission: Impossible

Awesome, the most enjoyable historical systematic text I have read in more than 10 years. The plots are interlocking and the characters are clear and distinct, especially Ji Ping'an. At this level, in my opinion, Ji Wuming's son has a greater chance! I hope the author will continue to work hard. I want to see where my Han dragon flag will be planted.