Quick Travel: the Host Does Not Play According to the Routine

This book [female strong, cool writing, no cp] is my first time writing a book. The writing is immature and the plot control is not very good, but I will work hard to write it well. Those who are used to reading veteran novels can leave it out. Please do not make malicious comments. It is not easy for the author to write words. Let's understand each other. I am also a reader-turned-writer. I never evaluate the books I don't like. I just abandon the books. I only evaluate the ones I like to read.

The first story has a lot of typos and omissions, making it difficult to read in many places. I'm just reading the beginning of the second story. It seems like no typos were found. There is progress. In addition, this boss is very powerful. For example, he can slap all the bandits into the ground, integrate the memories in his brain into a video to slap the scum in the face, and bring the heroine of the underworld back to the present world at will. . But I don't know why, I just don't feel that comfortable feeling after being tortured. Is the process too simple? It feels like there is a lack of routines and excitement. . .

Good writing, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on, keep an eye on you

Very, very, very, very good. I love it so much. Come on, author. I always support it.

It's super good-looking. I like the non-CP novels the best. It's my favorite. The plot is very attractive to readers. I look forward to another novel with a strong heroine and no CP. I need to update it more. I can't get enough.

It's good-looking, the heroine is at the level of a boss, and the system is also afraid of it and depends on the boss's face to act, haha. So handsome and sassy, ​​the author will update it a lot

Overall, it's pretty good. When the heroine is strong and abuses the scum, she won't do it. Those scum can't understand human speech anyway 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

It's so pretty, I like this kind of heroine.

Big cheers to the author.

A pretty good article

I like the heroine's character, please support the author!

The female protagonist has a good outlook on life and is as powerful as the male protagonist. I like her character and the way she handles things. The plot is also very good.

Good looking! The boss is so handsome! So cute! The story doesn't drag on, and the details don't get frustrating! Love it!

Really pretty

Big cheers for the author!

This is the type of novel I like, it's awesome! !

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, why are the following chapters repetitive? I hope they can be changed a lot.

The author's writing is really beautiful, I like it very much😍\^O^/

I like it, especially the story about being a queen!

It's so exciting. Come on, author!

Except for the first world, the rest of it is pretty good-looking. The heroine has a good outlook on life and is pretty good-looking. The author gives me a lot of encouragement.

The writing of this book is really in line with my taste. Although it only scores 9 points, based on my reading experience, this book should be rated around 9.3 Points.

The story is exciting, the characters are vivid, and it is a good work worth looking forward to.

It's beautiful, I like this kind of heroine who is beautiful alone

Overall, it's good, but the writing is a bit immature and the plot is a bit generic. I hope the author will get better and better.

I like this kind of steely straight girl, I like her unique beauty, I like her very much.

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It's wonderful, it's a cool article! Like! Big cheers for the author＾0＾~

The heroine is so domineering