A humble young man walked out of the wilderness, picked up the stars and embraced the bright moon, and rose up in this chaotic apocalyptic world. He slaughtered countless living beings in a fit of anger, and his blood flowed into a river. It doesn't matter if I am one person, and I am an enemy of the world. I have become a demon, and God can't help me.
Reader comments
Generally speaking, it's okay. The plot is good, but many words are repetitive and wordy. What about the strength of the protagonist, how powerful the Chu family is and how unpredictable it is, why they came to the Devil's Triangle, etc. You stressed that you should not keep repeating it. If you can't write it, just find a job in a factory. I'm convinced.
Generally speaking, it's okay. The plot is good, but many words are repetitive and wordy. What about the strength of the protagonist, how powerful the Chu family is and how unpredictable it is, why they came to the Devil's Triangle, etc. You stressed that you should not keep repeating it. If you can't write it, just find a job in a factory. I'm convinced.