He was killed by the eighth-level mutant beast, but he never thought that he would be able to come to the doomsday again. After an inexplicable man injured him, he swallowed a pill and obtained the Tianxuan System. However, it was later discovered that this system was still a broken thing. Let's see how he completes the tasks of the Tianxuan system step by step and embarks on the war of three thousand worlds.
Reader comments
Why. It was just average at first, I was expecting it to get better, but then it got worse and worse. Inexplicably, there are Hashirama cells, the kaleidoscope becomes blurry without being used twice, and there are various ninjutsus such as kaleidoscope wood escape Hashirama cells and flying thunder gods. Even a second- or third-level monster can be seriously injured. In the imperial capital, he looks more like a Ninja Turtle. Isn't that the Great Buddha of Susanata, where one man fights against one country? And Dr. Wang hasn't been killed yet. Always on the road. I didn't say where I was going. I really don't want to complain anymore
It's so bad. I wrote better essays in elementary school than you. There's no logic at all. You're so good.
Author, after you finish writing the novel, can you please see for yourself that the character design is a mess and the level setting is a mess. The whole text feels like Shuiwen inexplicably saves people at the beginning but then ignores them, and then gets beaten up by the unknown organization. The good guy has developed several times faster than the protagonist. The reborn person has zero combat experience. And if you dig a hole and don't bury it, not a single chapter is fun to read. After writing it myself, read it again without any logic.
Why. It was just average at first, I was expecting it to get better, but then it got worse and worse. Inexplicably, there are Hashirama cells, the kaleidoscope becomes blurry without being used twice, and there are various ninjutsus such as kaleidoscope wood escape Hashirama cells and flying thunder gods. Even a second- or third-level monster can be seriously injured. In the imperial capital, he looks more like a Ninja Turtle. Isn't that the Great Buddha of Susanata, where one man fights against one country? And Dr. Wang hasn't been killed yet. Always on the road. I didn't say where I was going. I really don't want to complain anymore
It's so bad. I wrote better essays in elementary school than you. There's no logic at all. You're so good.
Author, after you finish writing the novel, can you please see for yourself that the character design is a mess and the level setting is a mess. The whole text feels like Shuiwen inexplicably saves people at the beginning but then ignores them, and then gets beaten up by the unknown organization. The good guy has developed several times faster than the protagonist. The reborn person has zero combat experience. And if you dig a hole and don't bury it, not a single chapter is fun to read. After writing it myself, read it again without any logic.