Honghuang: I Actually Became Hong Yun’s Disciple

This book is okay, but if the author makes the rewards too good, the book will easily get stuck. Although it is enjoyable, I don't want it to end too soon (don't comment if you don't like it, thank you!)

Have you considered refining the land in Zhongzhou into a small world and using it as a dojo in the future?

There are originally Taoist ancestors, heavenly saints, etc. Who are bound, and they also arrange masters, uncles, eldest sisters, eldest brothers, daughters-in-law, etc. To drag and restrain the protagonist. Cultivation is to break the bondage and practice detachment! Therefore, prehistoric times should be about becoming stronger and attaining enlightenment at any cost and by any means necessary! Bonds, friends, subordinates, mounts, treasures, and territory should all be the means for you to become stronger! After eternal life, everything will be available. A woman can just inspire a few to serve her. She can have territory, bonds, friends, mounts, and subordinates to create as many small and medium-sized worlds as she wants!

66666666, There are so many treasures, and I don't know how to record them all, because they are directly selling Feng Fengyan, and they have captured so many treasures but they still don't have them. How can I tell you specifically? Because it's really hard to make up a name

It's very interesting, the plot is clear, but it's a bit short, and the writing behind it is a bit rushed.

It seems good now, but there are a few points. The author may have his own ideas, but the author still needs to consider it. First, the Three Immortals Islands should all be in the East China Sea, except for Penglai. Fourth, Zhen Yuanzi was regarded as the ancestor of the earth immortals, and he became a saint by possessing the earth book and the mountains and rivers. Fifth, I hope the author will slow down the pace and write in more detail. In some places, Hong Yun joins the Tao, and prevents the battle with the lich, etc. He is not careful. He should write slowly and write the book in a hurry without rushing to finish the book. If you write too anxiously, it will be difficult to write later, and the result may be that the story falls apart or even ends unfinished. Personal feelings, don't comment if you don't like it! Thanks!

It's so pretty, so cool. The author rushed to update it, but it's not enough. . . .

Well written and wonderfully imaginative. Five-star praise! ! ! 👍👍👍

Not bad, very cool, it's better to have more harems [laughing]

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