Pirates: Defeat Akainu at the Beginning and Take over as Marshal

It's a very good book, and I could have written many, many chapters in the future, but it ended at chapter seventy-nine, which is a bit of a pity. Well

It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit cliche. If I write more about it, to be honest, it should be the best one in the Pirates series. It doesn't have a brainless or a holy mother. It's an interesting idea. Oh, why is it the end of this book? Isn't it better to write more?

The beginning is okay. If it weren't for the bad ending, the rating would be higher. It's not easy for the author. I'll give it four stars.

The only pirate fanfic to give five stars. But it ended badly. Uncomfortable

Although the ending is a bit too hasty, overall this book is still very good. I hope the author can work hard! Work hard on your writing!

The writing is obviously good, so why not write it again? @Author, keep writing, keep shining🔆🌞🌡

Simply come to the comment area to see how book friends criticize the author, learn from the experience, and use it next time

It's wonderful, but the ending is too fast

The main reason is that I don't know. I can obviously write so many pieces, but why do I have to squeeze them into one place?

Very good. How about resurrecting the white-bearded Esrox to beat Im?

Four stars, oh, the author is a bit short, please reply when you receive it, thank you!

It's good to gather love, but I don't want to say anything about it...

No matter if he sucks or not? This book gave me a lot of joy during the period. Even at the end, I felt very abrupt and abrupt, but I still think this is a masterpiece, because the joyful entertainment it caused was completely out of proportion to the confusion at the end, so it fully deserves five stars.

I hope the author can publish a second season or a book similar to this one. 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Otherwise 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈 😈😈😈💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪Here you go👼👼👼

Why don't you write it later?

Isn't this deceiving? So few?

Alas, can't you write more? Even so, it's still pretty good

The book was not bad, but it ended too quickly.

The book is very beautiful I thought I would watch it for a long time and think about it Finally something to watch The finale? ! ! I finished reading it at noon (ಥ_ಥ)

I have been reading One Piece novels for so long, and this novel is the most perfect

Well, she is my sister

Very good but too short

Has the author been sent a razor blade [Petrochemical] to end so soon [Start]

Very good, but the words are a bit short

It's okay except for being a little boring.

The only downside is that it's a bit short

Very good, he is just a eunuch

I hope the author will continue writing.

A very good book, but it's a pity that the author didn't have time to write it. It's such a pity

The previous writing is very good, but the finale is not good, I look confused, so fast? Snap, my happiness is gone (*◑㉨◑)☞☜(◐㉨◐*)