All Disciples, Stand: Pay Your Respects to the Celestial Master

I originally felt that I was very good at resisting poisoning, and I have been in a bit of a book shortage recently, and there are not many such books, so I thought about reading it reluctantly. It turns out that your protagonist is too weak and too holy, and the villain is too strong, and there are some problems in your writing. You said that the worst of your apprentices is also a well-known figure. In the end, I feel that except Ma Daba. It's not miserable, and the kid who follows the protagonist is not so miserable. The others are so miserable that they have been suppressed by others, and they are also called a boss. And the tea guy is called a boss? I can tolerate it. After all, fantasy novels can be written like this, but you actually wrote him to death! (We read novels to relax and relieve the stress of life, but everything you wrote was depressing.) My biggest opinion is that the tea seller is although I know he is a supporting character in your setting, but if you look at others, I can understand that others will also write apprentices as supporting characters. After all, a master has too many hundreds of apprentices and it is impossible to introduce them all in detail, so it is normal to mention them in one brushstroke, but they will never write this supporting character to death. After all, he is the protagonist. Disciple? Although some people can write about death, they will be resurrected, but you will be burned directly to ashes and prepared to be buried. I will directly call you 666. I admire you so much that I have nothing to say [Maybe some of what you said are not very clear and I didn't read it carefully, so there may be some mistakes and it's a bit long-winded. After all, I only typed it for ten minutes and I'm too lazy to introduce it.] Finally, let me say my review of this book: It is very poisonous.

It poisoned me to death. Goodbye👋🏻

Poison, too poisonous

Author!!! What are you writing? It's so uncomfortable. I've never seen such a poisonous novel. The protagonist is too virginal. She speaks without thinking and behaves like a child!!!

Our Lady is so cowardly even if she has a system to the extreme, what do you want from this system? I really don't think this kind of saint is worthy of the system.

Five-star praise, if I don't cheat you fools, who will?

This protagonist is too much of a virgin, can she be made more hateful?

In one sentence, poison me to death

If you don't know how to write, don't write. If you do, it won't look good.

Rubbish