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Overall, it's good, but the timeline is a bit off. If Kaido wasn't that strong at this time, he should be climbing up at this time when he was at his peak in his 40s. The candidate general should be about the same [Thinking] Support the author [like]

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The setting is indeed a bit unconsidered, but the author's writing style is good. Putting aside various factors such as the timeline in the original work, I will try to treat this book as a fantasy novel and see what happens next.

The world view is pretty good, and the writing is pretty good, but some settings lack consideration. Overall, it's okay! At least reading this novel doesn't insult your IQ. It's not the brainless and childish Wudi novel. There are some interesting Wudi novels, but once you're brainless, it's not interesting!

I think it's okay. If you're tired of reading invincible articles, you can read this. It feels a little bit entitled, but the timeline is a bit messy. If you don't read it carefully, it feels good. I've read Chapter 30 so far.

Will there be a female protagonist? Author

The author needs to modify some places⊙∀⊙! Come on, come on＾0＾~

Regardless of the original work, the writing is very good.

Super exciting, keep writing✍

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

One word, good, good

It's not bad to read this novel as a fantasy

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I originally gave it five stars, but I deducted four stars because of TJ.

Pretty good! The author's writing is very good!

Big cheers for the author!

Read it if you like. Why should writing a book be the same as the original version? Isn't it okay to create a new version?