One Piece: Eternal Flame

It's a very good novel, with two male protagonists, strong and emotional in writing. Gray's character is also very likable, and it can also foreshadow the original One Piece. Overall, it's very good. I found it and really saved it during the book shortage.

It's a very interesting plot and a very novel setting. Ace travels to the past and meets the protagonist. I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.

Personal opinion: I only read the first 14 chapters and this book is a must-have! As long as it doesn't crash later, this will definitely be one of the best pirate fanfics I've ever read!

This theme is really new. I have read many Pirates fanfics, but there is a common problem, that is, the protagonist has traveled through time, or is an important character who will greatly affect the original work. 996 Is also very good. It allowed me to see what happened before Luffy. Your book is even better. Isn't reading a book just to see what you don't know? I have finished reading it in one go, and suddenly I don't know what to read. You have to make it up to me. Please update it quickly. I will give you a gift.

The setting of the two male protagonists in this book is more novel than most other books. Neither of the male protagonists are time travellers, but the setting of traveling to the past as native pirates is also more attractive than other fan fictions. It also gave Ace, who died in the war, a new life. There are several shortcomings: There is too much emphasis on the shaping of the two male protagonists and a little less shaping of the supporting roles. The author may not be very good at describing large-scale battle scenes, so there aren't many more subtle battle scenes. Another thing is that there is slightly less development of fruit abilities. Most of the Black Fire Pirates are fruit ability users, but they seem to only use the most basic use of fruit abilities. That is to say, Gray has some superb control power such as setting fire, which can turn two flames into swords, but it feels very short-sighted. But the characters of the two protagonists are very to my liking, and I also like the atmosphere of the pirate group very much, like a class or a dormitory. They are usually noisy and hurt each other, but at critical moments they are extremely united. I look forward to every update of this book. It has the feeling I long for in One Piece. This book has great potential. Please work hard to make this book shine even brighter.

I saw the scene between Gray and Cyborg when he was a kid, and it really blew my mind. The portrayal of emotions is quite delicate, and every character has flesh and blood.

The protagonist's image is really contagious and has strong personal charm. It is definitely a book that can confer godhood.

It's really a masterpiece, the theme design is very novel, and the character's personality is very well grasped (especially the part about Gray and Cyborg is very touching). The reviews are all very positive, and it's a five-star rating👊👊👊

It feels like Gray knows what's going to happen in the future. This is the first time I've seen such a heart-warming pirate novel. Come on, the author, don't stop updating. I also hope that Alfred can be saved by Gray and have a good ending. Please. 🙏🙏🙏

The setting is very interesting, I really like Gray's character, I'm a fan of it Hahaha, but when I saw the black and white flames, my inner chubby personality started to burn🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Come on٩(๑^o^๑)۶ (If it is correct to say that there is Ace's history, then will the protagonists in the future be si (tears))

February 2, 2023 16:54:40. Goodbye, eternal flame. Some people regard this as faith, and some people regard it as new work. I think it is indeed very commendable. I don't like this ending very much. Maybe the author also did it for various reasons. But it's really hard to calm down. Otherwise the rating really wouldn't be 9.0.

This novel is the best pirate novel I have read so far! I really like the feeling of the two male protagonists. The big cute and the little cute are eye-catching. It is the only novel that makes me want to follow it to the end. The story is very novel, the novel is very good, it will be popular🔥yo! Ps: To read this novel, you don't have to leave your brain at home, you can read it with your brain! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Five-star review

Not bad, not bad. The protagonist's personality should be similar to Roger's, and he is a strong thief. There are a lot of foreshadowings. It's quite interesting. It's a rare good pirate novel on Tomato.

To be honest, when I first watched it, I wanted to complain about who is the protagonist, why Ace's appearance rate is so high, and Gray and Ace are so gay. But when I saw Gray telling his own story, I really felt that the author was awesome and his ideas were novel. As a slow-burning book, it should be considered quite niche. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

The book begins with the "Emperor of the Sea" of Locks' era - the Black Fireworks Pirates and Captain Gray - from the perspective of Ace who has traveled through the War at the Top. With a rigorous structure and appropriate foreshadowing, the book reveals step by step the truth about the disappearance of the Black Fireworks Pirates and the World Government in that era. It reads vividly and interestingly, attracting the reader's attention, and making people unable to resist giving it a five-star rating. It is really a fresh stream of pirate fan fiction, just like a hidden treasure waiting for us to discover. As long as you don't watch it, it will become popular! Come on, author! ! !

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The characters are all in line with what they should be in the world of pirates, and there are no modern jokes that suddenly pop up to make people feel uncomfortable. It is a novel that can make people immersed! Ace's character is also very consistent with the original image and has not been changed randomly! Why is such a good novel so poorly rated! I see that the comment section is basically full of five stars!

To be honest, the characters are well-drawn and vivid, and it can be seen that Sitting has really put in the effort, although it was disappointing in the end. But it is also understandable that the result of your hard work is unsatisfactory and no one can bear it. I understand. But I still want to ask, author, when you started writing, did you really do it for money and other people's evaluations? Is it really for good reviews and good grades? Isn't it because I want to portray a different pirate? When you look back at this novel as a reader, do you really not want to give it the ending it deserves? Please also ask the author to seriously consider it, consider the legend of Grey, and consider the future of Black Fireworks, please

I finished reading this book yesterday, and I just remembered to rate it. I personally think this book is very well written, and the author's writing style is even better. Among the Pirates fandoms I read, there is another book that I followed together. Apart from the fact that there are too few updates, this book actually has nothing to say, oh, except that there are some There may be some details, but I don't really remember them because I've read too many One Piece fanfics, and I haven't read One Piece for almost a year, so maybe some of its parts will be blurred in my memory, causing some problems, but these are minor problems, but this book is really worth recommending.

This novel is very heartwarming. Many of the characters in the story are quite likable. It is always full of relaxation, joy and warmth. It makes me feel the various characters come alive from the bottom of my heart. Come on, author, I want to read this book to the end. Don't give up on the article.

I'm really satisfied with the beginning. I wish the characters' emotions could be drawn more carefully and with richer emotions. It can be called the masterpiece of the One Piece series. I also hope the update will be faster Raise it up first and then talk about it

The book written by the author can really be said to be the most attractive in One Piece that I have read. Although it cannot be too passionate, the leisurely feeling is also very comfortable. It comes from the encouragement of a bookworm with almost 2000+ people. As long as it is not unfinished, the book you wrote is great.

I really like this book. I came to read it because Ace came to read it at first, but after reading it, I suddenly felt emotional. It was really well written. I particularly like Gray, I really like him. I really like everyone in the Black Fireworks Pirates, but it's a pity that I won't see updates in the future. This is the first time I have said so many words. I am not lying. I think it is beautiful. Many of the stories in it and the emotions between them are well expressed. Well, I won't say any more, you'd better go and see it yourself, hehe

It's interesting. The character of Gray has been successfully created. The author can focus on the other crew members. As for Ace Oden and others, they can be put first. The images of the other crew members are too vague. The author needs to work hard. The heroine should be considered to appear as soon as possible. . Want to see Little Grey!

A very good book, some plots are very rich, it can even open a few extra chapters, and the setting is also very good. The most important thing is that it can bring out emotions. Later, it looked very sad and sad from Rafdru. All in all, this is a very good book, at least it ranks among the top three pirate fics I have read. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Although I haven't read much yet, I think this book is very interesting. I have read a lot of pirate fan fiction before. Either I like to invite Robin, Nami, Shirahoshi and the others on the ship, or the plot is very inexplicable and involves intercepting various things about Hu Yuan's protagonist group everywhere. I feel quite speechless. I like Ace very much. I cried for a long time when he died. After that, I looked for many fanfics about saving Ace. Although this novel doesn't talk about rescuing Ace, I think it's still very interesting and I like it. I have finished reading the novel, and the ending is quite surprising. Although it is just a game, I think it is still very exciting. I thank the author for letting Ace live a wonderful life and allowing him to meet such a good captain. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

Needless to say, it's great. Just read it. If you think this is an ordinary pirate adventure novel, then you probably haven't seen Captain Gray. He has the boldness of Shanks, the childishness of Luffy, and a little crazy flavoring. He is an uncontrollable free soul. In the Black Flame Pirates, everyone is a prodigal who was teased by fate, but they all willingly gathered around Gray and vowed to "live for him." Why? Because this man not only dares to bare his neck and let Ace chop him, but he can also shout "Let's have a party!" When life and death are at stake - you have no idea how his brain circuit is, but you just can't help but be attracted to him. The greatest charm of this book is Gray's personality. It is not like telling the growth history of a hero, but showing how a group of madmen live out their own colors in this cruel world. So, if you are tired of the stereotyped protagonist, you might as well get on the ship and see this captain who is "crazy, but everyone is willing to die for it". On his ship, no one is alone, no one is a tool, and everyone is a free madman. As Gray himself said: "I fell in love with you at first sight." Look, there's often nothing else

Very good, the sense of immersion is too strong, I really like it, I hope the author will work hard

I chased you from a certain river! ! My wife is really good at writing, and she really brought Ace's whole person to life, as if the enthusiastic and wanton little sun was still alive and continuing his adventures. My wife had a good grasp of Ace's psychology, narrating the story interspersed and completing it step by step! I love you, madam. It's been a long, long time since I've written such a satisfying article. My madam has controlled every character so well! ! ! Not obtrusive at all! Ace, this awkward little boy, has been warmed up ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It makes up for the regrets. It feels so soft inside and I want to cry. Madam, your writing is really good! Please open a new book! What was very shocking was the scene about Anne fighting at the auction, and her men were killed. The wife painted Anne's character in just a few strokes! Make her more perfect! ! ! There's also the fight between Captain Sword and Gray, the interaction between Fred and Ray, and the Navy's woo-woo. Madam, your writing makes up for so many regrets and makes the characters in One Piece, which don't have much plot, become more and more vivid and real! I already feel that this is a world full of thunder, and there are also Rocks, ah, ah, madam, you are really great, your writing is beyond reproach, and it captures my heart as a reader one after another! I love you, madam! Madam, what you wrote is completely different from other books. It's very logical. I'm not very good at describing it, but what you wrote is really good! Everyone who trolls you is jealous of you. I am willing to be your shield! I love you, madam! Never give up. Woohoo, I love you. It's great to have you in the One Piece fandom! If I like Ace, I can only rely on the books written by the author to get through the difficult and boring time one after another. Madam, I really like your books. Your articles give me strength. After I saw the three stars you gave to your book, I was very scared. I was afraid that I would not be able to read this book in the next second. I hate that those trolls are really crazy. Wow, don't be disappointed, madam. Everyone likes the articles written by my wife! ! The writing is truly the best in the universe! Madam, don't give up on this circle! !