Hey, Your Senior Brother Has Convulsions Again!

The things sent by the sign-in system are very thoughtful, and the writing style is also very brisk. However, it may be the first time for the author to write a fairy tale, so the strength level is not very obvious, and the world view construction is not deep enough. Most of the stories currently only take place inside Shushan. It is okay. After Shushan, the world building may need to be worked harder. Also, the time interval of large-scale activities inside the mountain gate feels a bit short. The treasure appraisal soon after the enrollment seems very rushed. Take your time. Don't rush.

Judging from the title and content of the book, it should be similar to "Big Brother", but it is not difficult to see that the author has thought about the plot, characters and props, unlike some books

It's good. This is the first time I've seen this kind of thing on Tomato. It's very funny, but there are too few and it's not enough to watch.

Sigh๑•́₃•̀๑I thought it was the first brother and second brother meeting~ Tsk~ It turned out to be a harem story, which made me angry! Finally finished reading it~ Alas~~~

I don't know why, I always think of that comic

It's well written. Although I've only read a few chapters, it's very similar to another comic I've read. If you haven't read that comic, you'll think this book is pretty good. But having read that comic, I can't accept it. How can I put it, it's very similar to that one, but with more private settings…

It's interesting. I've always wanted to read a novel about the fantasy power of immortals and the use of modern weapons and technology. This one is okay, and it has such a funny and eccentric protagonist. It's perfect. It would be better if it has one or two thousand chapters. The author is awesome. How about reading it by the way? ?

It's wonderfully written, but I don't know why so few people participated in the discussion! Can't be buried anymore, get on top!

I hope the protagonist can be made less cowardly.

I almost gave up on it at first, but after about ten chapters, the highlights are highlighted, the writing is good, the logic is rigorous, and there is no loss of humor.

Time travel + system + villain appearance. It's quite interesting, and the overall plot is very interesting. I finished it before I knew it.

It's pretty good. I'm tired of seeing many routines. The author's ideas are pretty good.

I used to really want to read the comic book adaptation of that comic book. I don't know if you copied it or if the setting is similar 😂. I hope you don't... Support you [laughing and crying] [love]

It's very interesting. I don't know how the author handles the relationship between the protagonist and him.

It's very interesting and funny, but the rating is a bit low. Come on, the author is awesome.

It seems very relaxed and pleasant, not a traditional fairy tale

Five stars, this is the only fairy tale I've read

By the way, does this book have a female protagonist? (I personally prefer no heroine or two male protagonists) So, all book friends, please tell me if there is a heroine [sending my heart]

Nice! (If there are not five characters, add a few more)

Dare I ask if this book is about gay men? [Laughing evilly](>ω<)

I thought they were gay when I looked at the front, but it wasn't me who was sad. I thought senior brother and second junior brother were a couple. Now I have to calm down😩...

I thought it was okay at the beginning, but it became more and more exciting at the end. I felt that the male protagonist and Ye Wuque were okay. The author continued to write. I haven't watched it like this for a long time. . . Hehe😁The overall feeling is still very good🤗

It's not bad, but it suddenly disappeared and I'm a bit at a loss. . .

Although this book seems to be about cultivating immortals on the surface, it is actually the daily play with my second junior brother (manual dog head), and then the combat power of cultivating immortals feels a bit jumpy, and the realm setting could be a little more, but I like this book very much. If you want to write a second book, you can lay out the foreshadowing. Come on, author! ! ! Ollie, do it

It's good to read. I thought it was a gay novel at first, but then it turned out to be quite interesting.

I like the content very much, full marks, what a pity.

The content is good, Chapter 11. How infuriating is that 95 comment section? Come on, I give you the pen and you write it.

It's well written, it's a refreshing piece of writing, but it's not exactly a refreshing piece of writing.

Very well written. . Like it very much. . This is the most serious book I have ever read. . Come on.

It's well written, but not many people like it