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The writing style of this 2016 article is still as amazing as it is now. The author did a good job of portraying His Highness' youthful energy and strategy. I particularly like this kind of character. Yan is a kind of puppy. I personally feel that he is a bit similar to Zhafan. Let me spoil it I think the following plot is very interesting. I was deceived and saw through the secret of the small system. This point is really touching. Personally, I prefer this kind of ancient novel, because it is really a combination of two strengths, and the whole text has a funny quality, which is actually quite effective. . . And he couldn't stop after reading it, unlike some books nowadays that make him want to give up after reading half of it. Very, very recommended

Beautiful, highly recommended! The plot is compact and does not drag on. The author has written many endings, whichever one you like depends on it! (I'm very satisfied with it!) I have a car, but it just brakes when I'm driving halfway. The protagonist's IQ is monstrous but not that of a saint. He may be very unlikable in the early stage, but he becomes very good in the later stage! Just think of the emperor! 😂He never has any brains when it comes to the protagonist's affairs😂Maybe he just trusts the brainless pet! The protagonist faces the attack and always calls himself dad in his heart. I find this very interesting! Although the ending is a bit rushed and many places are not explained clearly! But it's not bad (I don't think those things are very important anyway) In some places, the abuse will make your eyes turn into walnuts, and in other places, the laughter will make you have a stomach attack. The writing style is remarkable! The books recommended by the author are okay, but I haven't read them yet (the author gave me a preview chapter, which I think is pretty good). Can you give it a try when you get tired of reading the bookshelf?

Ji Dian is really in line with my ideal male god. At first, I thought that Ji Dian was really the kind of person who would be willing to die for the characters he wrote. I was still a little bit disappointed and didn't want him to die. I didn't expect it, I didn't expect it. Alas, the only regret is the ending. Ji Dian should be smiling openly in front of others, but he was put under house arrest(?). I don't think it should be like this, but he is happy with it and he is willing. It can only be said that it is a bit regretful, but it is best if he is happy.

One thing I have to say is that this article is really great, and it feels like a relatively old male video article, but on one side is the layout of the proud man, and on the other is the counterattack of the loser boy. The integration of the two lines is great! Regarding the two protagonists, Brother Dian is an absolute first-class male protagonist. He is so smart. He knows everything, dominates everything, and bears everything. As an author, he also has a strong obsession with the story line he hopes for, and from the beginning of the article He doesn't hide his bad side, whether it's teasing others, his attitude towards some cannon fodder who are looking for trouble, or his innate control over the protagonist and heroine. He is also true-hearted in many cases. In Yanzi's eyes, he is just a tsundere cat. Secret kisses and so on are very torturous. Wow. I really didn't expect Xiao Yanzi. I personally feel that he has a strong character that fights from below and refuses to give in. I originally wrote the plot of Yanzi learning bad things and taking advantage of people's superficial kindness behind their backs. I thought he would have a black and white character, but in the end, this guy can't stop the car at all. Hahaha, he is really just a kid. He can't help being angry. This is actually more true. At the same time, Yanzi never hides it. I have played off my own ambition and evil, and towards Brother Dian at the beginning, I think this kind of character is indeed more like a villain than Brother Dian. He is too ambitious. Many people think that Yanzi is not worthy of Brother Dian, but there is no way to say whether this thing is worthy or not. Yanzi is getting stronger and loves Brother Dian. In the later stage, he also thinks of Brother Dian. At least Yanzi can't bully Brother Dian in the early stage. Everyone should be open-minded. Yanzi is also a child with a temper. In addition, although the article is not particularly long, it provides too much preparation for the early stage. In the early stage, I mainly wrote about the mighty brother, and in the later stage, I wrote about the mighty brother, and then Yanzi grew up from a good-for-nothing to a big shot. But halfway through the plot, the affection between the two people also increased. Yanzi is a really fierce man, and he kissed her hard, so I clicked The brothers Aijiu and Qingjiang are a very comfortable couple who don't have much drama. The other thing is time, I read it twice, and the second time I was brought in by this cover with a sense of age. I clicked on the comment all 2021. I really found an old antique. I finally compressed the time to read it just to leave a comment. I like it very much. Thank you for the treat! ! ! Yandian 99

Nice! Highly recommended! If I hadn't remembered that this was a pure love story for a female character, I would have thought it was a male villain novel. This book satisfied my need to not want a female protagonist, but also wanted the protagonist to have a cp situation. I loved it, but unfortunately the meat was gone halfway through. However, I still want to say that this book is worth it!

The plot is so powerful that I really can't understand it without thinking about it. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the first half is almost all about strategy. The emotional drama only starts to increase halfway through the text, which makes me a little uncomfortable (I rarely read Xiang Danmei's novels). Overall, the novel is very interesting.

It's a good book, especially Ji Dian, I like it very much. I'm not good at language expression, and I don't know how to express this book, but it's really good to read, the plot is compact, and every link is linked. In my opinion, this book is very good. Anyway, I like it very much, and I will protect it!

It's a very good article. It's well laid out and full of ingenuity. It didn't make me look like a fool. The character of the protagonist Ji Dian is indeed very charming. It is really enjoyable to read this book. The twists are very good and unexpected. The predictable routines also have a unique flavor because of the author's cute and cute thoughts. Reading Duan Ping, many people don't like Yan, at least Yan in the early stage, but I still understand it. After all, Ji Dian drove away the guy who taught Yan truth, goodness and beauty! This kid is actually destined to go astray at this time. But Yanzi, your early second-level speeches and your confidence were really impressive!ヘ(_ _ヘ) There are also those who question Ji Dian's feelings. Although Ji Dian does have fatherly love for Yan Feichang, the author has actually made it clear many times that Yan is the creation of Ji Dian's condensed love! And that kind of complicated feelings cannot be explained by a simple "father's love". Otherwise, when Yanzi confessed his love, Ji Dian's reply would not have been "I don't believe you" but a direct rejection! It's been a long time since I've watched it so heartily, I'm so excited!

I really like this kind of villain, his IQ is so high, it gives me a feeling of strategizing, just like other books where the villain is either lying flat on his back or hugging his thighs. Now I really hate seeing this type of villain. Generally speaking, if I could give him 100 points for his IQ, I would give it 150 points! Fifty-one is not afraid of the author's pride!

It's super good-looking. I really like the character of Ji Dian. Ahhhhhhhhhh I really like it. I'm watching it for the second time.

This book is so good. I cried at the end. Fortunately, Yan Xingchen returned to his Ji Palace in the end. Also, this book has so many foreshadowings that you can't even notice it even if you have a brain. To be honest, when I saw the plot of Aunt Wan, I really wanted to cry. The author did not give enough sugar in the later period. Fortunately, he is a he. Just like the old Bodhisattva in the book said, we are old and can no longer see tragedies. In the end, I feel very happy. It is very complicated. It is a very good book. Good luck, author (•̀ᴗ•́)و ̑̑

This book is really good, I rarely like this book At first, I went there because of the relationship between the brothers and sisters, but later I felt that the content inside was more attractive to me. The protagonist Ji Dian is really powerful and scheming. I admire many things he does, and I like the aura he exudes. Later, the author revealed the mysteries one by one, which really gave me goosebumps. Everyone is a chess piece, but everyone is also a planner. Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! !

I love this book so much. It's so great. I can't express my love for this book in words. The male protagonist is simply amazing. Ji Dian is the best male protagonist I've ever seen. I thought there would be only one ending, but I didn't expect there to be multiple endings. This book is perfect. I recommend reading Ji Dian. It's perfect. Naturally, I skipped the book while reading it. This is the only book I didn't skip reading.

It's nice to read, and there's a lot of foreshadowing in the text. It seemed to me a useless word, but I didn't expect it to be a foreshadowing. Author, your logical thinking skills are great. Some parts are particularly interesting, especially when the villain treats the hero as his son. Highly recommended 👍.

After reading the ending, I felt a little disappointed... This book is really beautiful, but there is a feeling that you can't tell how beautiful it is, but you just can't help but want to read on. Very plain, very simple, but very beautiful! Super recommended! ٩(*´◒`*)۶

The emotional line is slow, but very reasonable. Later, the male protagonist's sudden emotional rise makes people feel a bit urgent 😂😂. As an author, Ji Dian's insistence on his characters and his plans for the future actually touched me😝 (he is a qualified "villain"😂) after entering the book. While I was reading it, I was always worried that the emotional line was too obscure and too slow (mainly because there were no wheels in the middle and early stages 😂😂), but the calculations and plans of the villain in the book are also quite interesting. Come on ✊😂😂

Very nice! It's really beautiful, both the description of the characters and the foreshadowing of the plot are handled very well! The author's writing style is really nothing to say, at least it ranks second among all the ones I've seen on Rotten Tomatoes. (The first one to be forced to review by Rotten Tomatoes was Bai Yueguang, who collapsed) The author and the male protagonist are a perfect match [face covering] Who knows! Your various fates are just words written by me, and I really love the hero and villain's arrogant feeling of using the world as a chess piece! Although the male protagonist is not very likable, there is really nothing to say about self-development hahaha. It's strange that not many people have read such a good-looking book. Some people say it's because of the cover, but I think the cover is very charming, very much like the cover of an ancient novel! It was the introduction of other books in the first three chapters that made me confused. . . . [Facepalm] The author can promote his novel in the book circle of the first or last chapter so that it will not affect the reading experience. Finally, I hope that more and more people will discover and like this book [Blow a kiss]

The author writes so well. The characters are well-drawn, and both Yan Xingchen and Ji Dian are very three-dimensional. The one that impressed me most deeply during the second episode was Yan Xingchen. Some readers may find Yan Xingchen's character unpleasant at first, but as the story goes on, Yan Xingchen also grows up. I think what the author writes best is the relationship between the two. Many of Yan Xingchen's emotions were related to Ji Dian, whether it was jealousy, envy or liking. So he felt that Ji Dian was a person who had such a strong color in his life that after Ji Dian died, he was like a walking corpse. Especially in Conglong Secret Realm, he was afraid of forgetting that Ji Dian had been engraving the process of getting to know him and Ji Dian on the ground. He was really moved at that time. He really loves [face covering] and understands the gap between himself and Ji Dian and works hard to practice. Even if his life is very difficult, he should leave good resources to others. If he doesn't have much money, he will buy other people's portraits and the same style of clothes. The author's writing style is very good, and he writes the emotional changes between the two people very carefully. A long and steady flow will take its course. It was only after watching it that I realized that they really matched each other.

It's good-looking, and the ending is not sloppy or rushed. It just ends with an alternative ending, but it still leaves more to be desired. There are not many good-looking articles with hundreds of pictures! Is the author's writing good? At least we have to figure out how not to take it off? And the design is not bad either! All right. I hope the author will publish more works on Tomato

The relationship between Yan Xingchen and Ji Dian is slow at the beginning, but heats up quickly at the end. The author's writing style is very ancient, and the emotional drama is written very delicately without being sloppy. [Blows a kiss] Looks good. [Like] It just felt like the ending was a little rushed. Later in the article, the focus of the article becomes the layout and struggle of the immortals, and the protagonist's role is a bit less. [Thinking] The ending is very happy and satisfying, but there are only a few sentences in the double cultivation ceremony between the two [I almost cried] I want to see the detailed happy ending. [Cry][love]

It took me two days to finish it. In my opinion, this article has many flaws, but it is still worth reading. The shortcoming is that some words are used too much, such as "evil" to describe Ji Dian, and Xiaoyan is not lovable in the early stage (I don't care about this). The writing style is average but very fluent. It may embarrass me a little sometimes, but basically it's okay. The advantage is that the world view of this article is very complete, Ji Dian's character design is very good, and I was really shocked when the later plan was revealed. This part is logically consistent and unexpected. I really like the resourceful part. Jin Huang's part about Ji Dian is really too villainous and terrifying☝🏻️ I've never seen a protagonist with this kind of character, and the author's description is very good! The supporting characters also have distinct personalities, but it's a pity that the old friends weren't given more descriptions in the end!

I really like it! ! The plot is very exciting! From the foreshadowing at the beginning to the series of reversals later, it was all done in one go. The plot is compact and full of ups and downs! The world view of the story really allowed me to see a cruel world of cultivation. It was not the typical book-traveling villain novel that only made people feel ordinary after reading it. The cruelty of the world of cultivation has been foreshadowed, but it is hardly reflected in the full text. Most of the villains try their best to hug the male protagonist's thigh when walking through the book. The villain of this book puts himself in the villain's position, which makes me feel very fresh and makes me want to read more. The most amazing thing in the book is the Yongdong City murder case created by Ji Dian. Although I think the ending is a bit rushed, this article is indeed a rare masterpiece. The character design of Shou is almost perfect and caught my cuteness point, and as a controlled person, this book made me very happy to read it. The attack in the early stage may be a bit unpopular, but it has the mentality to attack in that situation. I think the best description is the part where Gong is howling in the Ten Thousand Beasts Mountain Range. It shows that Gong is unwilling to submit to others, or that the psychology of those low-level disciples speaks volumes, but others do not have the courage and perseverance to attack. Maybe some people can't understand how hatred turns into love. But probably when you hate someone very much, and the gap between you and the other person is very big, and coupled with the few words that Shou says to others that are inconsistent with him, the young man's temperament is easily shaken. And Shou himself is also an extremely charming person. To be honest, if I were just blown away by Su. I really like this book! I have been in a state of book shortage. It is rare to see a book that can make my eyes shine. I give it a five-star rating! ! ! Finally, I felt that there were actually some details in the book that were not handled very well. For example, the Aijiu line, I personally felt that the handling was vague. Of course, it may be that I didn't read carefully enough. (Don't argue, you are right.)

Very nice! ! ! Although I prefer the emotional line between Ji Dian and his junior brother, the plots in the book are very interesting! Like it so much. What a pity~~ The author was very bold in his writing when the junior brother was thinking about the senior brother, but when it comes to actual combat with real swords and guns later, he just brushed it off. It's not very kind! Dear author, you can't do this. If you want a bowl of water to be balanced, be bold! (ฅ>ω<*ฅ) Come on, come on, come on! Take good care of you! Great author! ! !

How to say it? As far as the previous section is concerned, even if you regard him as a kind of male protagonist, it is not excessive at all. Because the first half is mainly about the plot, which is rare. This is the first time I have seen such a brainy male protagonist in a fairy tale. The love line is a little behind, but it is very fragrant as soon as it comes out. If you can't stand it at the beginning, you can start with more than 170 pictures, and then start to recycle the foreshadowing and the love line later. It's so sweet for me, Swallow baby, you are a cute love brain [smirking] Xiaodian baby, you are a little tsundere~ Anyway, it's not a loss to get into the trap!

Sky! It's a good read, I'll find this novel somewhere at first several times. But as soon as I saw the cover, I was dissuaded by the cover and the name. My first impression after seeing the name and cover: Lying on the recommendation, there is a faint sweet smell of dog blood. I didn't dare to click on it several times, but finally looked at it out of curiosity and was pleasantly surprised. The plot has ups and downs, many foreshadowings, and the last one is linked to each other. The main reason is that the charm of the protagonist is really great, his villain temperament is really handsome, and his IQ is really high and he is always online. The first part is really deceiving. What you see is a blank look, and you only think that the protagonist is truly selfless. He gives everything, is willing, and is a little uncomfortable. Later, when it is revealed, it makes people suddenly realize. He is a cool and enterprising protagonist with a great charisma. As for the "male protagonist", he appeared too late. He was a bit annoying in the early stage, but he has his age and experience, and he is also very good in the later stage. God, the handwriting input method is really... So tiring, bye bye

It's a very long book. I read it for about a week, but I still skipped through it. The characters in the article are full of character, the protagonist's IQ is online throughout the story, the deputy CP is also very good, the plot is rich and interesting, and the plot is full of ups and downs. The author's writing style is also very good. When I read it, I was immersed in the scene. I felt like I was a bystander in the story, witnessing the process of the protagonists going through various difficulties and finally getting together. I have watched every ending, and they are all very satisfying, sweet yet sadistic, sad yet sweet, and the sweetness and sadism are well balanced, neither too sweet to be unreal, nor too sad to make you cry to death. It's a pity that the quality is not popular. I want to watch it again when I have time to watch the plot.

It's quite nice. As other comments said, I was almost persuaded to leave by the cover [Thoughts] First of all, I just read this book out of a burp literature book, and I really can't stand the crying male protagonists. I can't stand it at all. Secondly, it's not like other books where you have to please the protagonist. Although some parts are not easy to understand (I am not very good at literature), I still like this kind of story that takes the plot seriously and has both sides of business online. Halfway through the article, the emotional line is not clear, but after reading it, I suddenly realized that feelings are not necessarily like other articles, life-and-death, vigorous. The protagonist's love for his senior brother in the article is gradually accumulated bit by bit. It may not be as fierce as some forced articles, but the aftertaste is long. Ji Dian's love for the protagonist is conniving. If he started with fatherly love + affection for the protagonist, then it slowly changed after the protagonist confessed his love. In addition, I have read a lot of novels, and the protagonists are rarely as intelligent as this one. It's so difficult [face covering]

(It's so good. If you like it, please read more! Where on earth did you write the article!!) Ahem, back to the topic, I really like this book! From the mobile phone to the computer, from three weeks ago to now! The student party persists ✊Why! Because the author has really done a good job in portraying Ji Dian, each character is very distinctive, and every plot is selling foreshadowing. It is so powerful, and the writing is very good. I feel that I can really cultivate immortality. Although everyone thinks that there are too many words in the water, I don't think this is just creating an atmosphere? And some people may think that some sentences in the article spoil the scene, but you will understand it by the end. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Let's talk about the male protagonist, Ji Dian is really perfectly portrayed (he has already fallen in love with him) and then there is Yanzi. Yanzi is actually quite controversial. When I clicked on the comments, I saw that everyone has a hard time criticizing Yanzi because I myself understand that Yanzi is too complex. It's complicated, but I don't hate Yanzi that much, because I know that many reasons why Yanzi became what he is now is His Highness's fault (he does bad things with good intentions). People think that Yanzi overestimates his own abilities and wants to defeat His Highness and reach the top despite not having the strength. But I think this is exactly what a teenager should think. Everyone has pretentiousness, but it doesn't matter. You look awkward because he has great ambitions but has been frustrated repeatedly. His ambition is empty, he has been hit hard, he has been enduring adversity, until Ji Dian appears, he has a goal, and Ji Dian is his directional sign. After reading the story, you may feel that Yan Zi is a very lively person, alive because of Ji Dian, like a dead tree that springs back to life.

I couldn't stand it for a while. Due to the setting of the original book, the male protagonist's thoughts are a lot weird, which makes people feel inexplicable. There are many comments that don't like him. However, as a native, he was bullied by his "family" from the beginning, his talent was suppressed by his mother and turned into a waste, and he was robbed by his unscrupulous brothers. It was really miserable. Even so, the male protagonist did not become evil. Alas, pity. In the second half of the plot, the author has given explanations for many of the abruptness, and it has come full circle. The twists are wonderful. It is different from ordinary routine stories. This is the unique thing that makes people think about it after reading it. As the incarnation of heaven, the male protagonist is naturally attracted to the author who created him. It is inevitable that the male protagonist will fall in love with the author, and the author who created the male protagonist must love the male protagonist he created, so it is inevitable that the two of them will be together. Oh, how sweet.

It's quite good. The emotional line is relatively late. In the early stage, Ji Dian's male protagonist is interspersed with the love-hate relationship with Yanzi. The two of them pulled each other haha. I just feel that Yanzi is too frustrated hahaha, she has never been as powerful as Ji Dian [laughing]