The Master Who Cultivated Immortality Turned Black

The writing is very good, but the master is a bit possessive. The apprentice wants to go out with the brothers to do something. After coming back, the master always whips the apprentice, or beats the apprentice with his hands, but overall it is quite sweet [Like]

It's good-looking, the storyline is particularly funny, and the relationship between the protagonists is sweet, sweet, and funny. Little cuties can experience the feeling of dog food hitting their faces😁😁

The master is so domineering and the little disciple is so cute. Shizuo is so powerful in turning his disciple into a Taoist companion that no one can match! ! !

I quite like this book, but I don't know why so few people have read it (Hey, the literary talent is not good╮( •́ω•̀ )╭)

! Although Master's behavior often makes people feel ambiguous, I still feel that even if Ruirui figures it out, it will not be so easy for them to get together. I always feel that Master has too many unknown thoughts and past.

The more I listened, the more annoyed I became, but the more I wanted to listen. The protagonist has a lot of complaints. It feels like the main character is complaining most of the time in this book.

This is my first time reading a male-male novel. It's so interesting that I couldn't stop reading it.

I thought it was going to be a sweet ride, but I didn't expect it to be a ruarua with a knife! ! ! (A pocket knife counts as a knife, I feel aggrieved)

It's good to read. The master couldn't see his disciple being nice to others at first. It's scary to be jealous, but I'm good at it [Adoration][Adoration] I read this book before I logged in. I'll give it a good review after logging in😊

I really like this plot, and also the character design of Sirui. There is rich inner drama, and the master is extremely possessive. It's very interesting to watch.

Ahhhh, love it so much! ! ! ! ! I feel like this is the best novel I've ever read on Tomato\(//∇//)\ Love this so much! ! !

This book is so good, why is it rated so low? I really want to read the extras from Master's perspective. Give me a dozen of these books. I can't stop reading them. It's my favorite type. Master is a yandere, while the disciple is a straight man. I like to see this kind of yandere loving sisters rush into each other. I finished reading it a long time ago, but I forgot to write a review

A book that is sweet throughout.

The newspaper is good to read. How should I put it? There are some imperfections and some attractive ones. I can still understand the book. The last point is my Qiao Yi, my dear Xiangxiang wife Qiao Yi. It's a little sloppy [shy] [grieved]

Finished reading, very good, Happy New Year

I think it looks good. Why do so many people look at it? There are so few comments.

I don't understand the apprentice's past life, what the black vortex is, and what happened between his father and why his father's attitude changed in the world. If you don't pay much attention to the plot, it's an okay sweet story.

♡You are mine today, tomorrow and every day thereafter. Breaking up is the norm in the world and no one is an exception.

This book is very interesting. Why are there so few people reading it? Although it's a bit unfinished, it's overall good. There is no one in the comment area, and there don't seem to be many people reading it first. I gave it four stars because the ending was not very good, but the extra chapter was still good.

I like it, it looks good, it looks good. Say important things three times

Awesome! Master's contrasting personalities are so awesome, and Zhao Sirui's mature but not rigid temperament is so fragrant.

I think it's still 🉑

Come on author ⸝⸝ ᷇࿀ ᷆⸝⸝

Most of them are good, but some of them are a bit impatient to read.

Can the author write less suspense next time? Can you write it down clearly for me about your feelings? But I have to say, it's really pretty. But what worries me the most is Lu Youyou. Who is she paired with? It seems like she has no CP

I was a little confused when I watched it, and some holes haven't been filled in yet, but overall it's pretty good.

It's good to read, but I have to read this book with three perspectives in mind, 😂

It looks great. Master is too possessive. I wonder if Xiao Ruirui can bear it. The more I write, the more confused I become. I can't understand it. It's inexplicable.

It's so beautiful, the corner of my mouth is as big as the sun, and I'm flying into space [laughing evilly]

Super super pretty! ! !