Fantasy************

It's pretty. Why isn't it rated highly?

I originally came here for your profile, but this is what happened? What about Gou, as promised, you are still a noob, but you have stopped going around and started wandering around. The key point is that you, the enemy, haven't dealt with it clearly yet you go out and wander around. What will happen to your family? I'm convinced.

1: Use modern words. Such as toilet. Battle. 2: Character without clothes. Basic description of appearance. Not at all. There is only one name. I saw that in the 20 or so chapters, no one had a basic image, it was all a mess. 3: When fighting, you shout out the name of the martial arts, and then it disappears. It can be said that there is no fighting content in this book. They are all martial arts names. Anyway. There are no appearance descriptions or action descriptions of anything.

No one cleans up the loot

Am I not good at aesthetics?

Very nice work

As an assassin. It is recommended not to write the assassin as if he has as many lives as the villain.