Tomb Robbery: You Can Seize Spirits and Dispatch Generals at the Beginning

Hello Guava, I would like to give you some advice. 1. I hope the author can clearly write down the emotional lines of each harem, and at least have a reason why he likes the protagonist. (Otherwise it would be a bit nonsensical, alas😔The harem is not easy to write about) 2. Although Wu Xie is not the evil emperor of Shahai yet, he is not far behind. He can write a growth line and gradually become stronger. (Don't be too stupid, you blind man. After all, you have lived for such a long time. Otherwise, you will be criticized by caring people🤥) 3. Scene transition to the article ———————— (It will look much more comfortable. I also taught the water character method, tsk tsk tsk) 4. The story line has a purpose. After all, the protagonist needs a reason to go to the grave. (Whether it's signing in or accepting a harem, at least it has a purpose. Otherwise, if the protagonist eats and drinks well and the system doesn't punish him, why would he go to the grave?) Ps: I can only think of so much for the moment. If the author sees it and feels it, just adopt it if it feels good. It doesn't matter if you don't agree. I really like this kind of subject matter. I hope the author will get better and better, and I will continue to follow it. Come on Guava!

The car is flying ᵋ₍⚬ɷ⚬₎ᵌ

Gradually entering the climax, kicking off the prelude to that era.

I really like Ye Ling's cleverness, but I don't know how he can hold on to so many good sisters?

Hello, author. I am your loyal fan. I hope you can update it faster and have more chapters. I really like reading it. I love you, okay😘😘😘

Five-star praise, recommended

Don't say anything and just move forward! Get up

I give you five stars because I like many female leads.

Damn it, why are you reviewing it?

I don't understand why the tomb robbers fanatics insist on making Wu Xie and his brother full of sexual feelings. . . . .

Some places need to be changed, but I personally think it's pretty good.

I like this style very much. This is a novel. There is no need to change the words and names. Sometimes I can't understand it. I hope the author can give it a try. I support you. Come on.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

This novel book is okay. Why can't I sometimes read the next chapter?

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The car is fast and looks good

I have nothing to say, but one word is beautiful

Keep up the good work, author⊙▽⊙

Come on 😊 Great author!

Come on, work for every household

I stumbled in to take a look...

A five-star backhand⭐

Good books deserve attention

Very nice, I like it very much

Awesome, come on!

Don't say much, just rush straight to it

Hey hey hey hey hey

I didn't look carefully, but I felt like none of these girls were hooked. Is it my imagination or is it true that none of them were hooked?

Attack this Pangu bloodline and the power of a punch! !

It looks more innovative and much better than others.