Succubus************

It's really good, I haven't seen a high-quality harem story in a long time. But it's really short and weak (I almost missed it because of the small number of chapters). It's finished in just over 500 chapters, but condensation is the essence.

Super super pretty! The writing is very good! There is nothing wrong with the logic! This is my first serious comment The protagonist also fits my aesthetic! … Just finished, very sad to leave. However, I think the reluctance to end it is an endorsement of the book. The ending of every good book is worth cherishing. And this one is a great book. But I have a small suggestion. I found that the author's plot at the end was a bit rushed. There are no details or finesse like the previous arrangements. This is a mistake I also make when writing essays. (Also often said) Well, that's what I think. Of course this is just my humble opinion. (Hopefully I won't be criticized) Also, this is the first time I've written such a long comment~ It's my first time ( ૢ⁼̴̤̆ ꇴ ⁼̴̤̆ ૢ)~

A very good fantasy novel, First of all, let me state that there is no lsp here, there are no cars in this book, and there are no great netizens... Well, then... Hiss~ ouch~ my waist and waist hurt very much. Hiss~ Oops, I've been a little tired of reading lately. Ahem, cough, tsk, anyway, it's a serious book and that's it. Believe it or not, just read it and that's it!

I love all harem novels, and this one is much better than those that are recommended without thinking. Compared with those HS novels, I prefer the blend of love and desire, no virginity, no regrets, brainy, and charming. It can bring readers into it perfectly. Thank you very much to the author.

I like the character of the protagonist very much. He has aristocratic accomplishments, is gentle and just, but can also be decisive when necessary. Already started transcribing quotes (from Aquaman). At the same time, the system author's style is great, and the other characters are also portrayed very delicately. I hope they won't disappoint me.

A very excellent book, worth reading carefully!

Highly recommended, don't be fooled by this silly title. The psychological activities, plot settings, and characters are all described in great detail, and the author's writing is very good. Especially during the "Canary" period, the various battles of wits and courage, as well as the acquaintance with the half-elf queen and princess, and the emotional bond are very vividly depicted. What I don't like is: I can't accept the three pirate sisters joining the harem! ! (This is my personal emotion. Books are good books. Just because I don't like them doesn't mean the book is bad.) The highlight of this book is the early and middle stages (the plot and details are described brilliantly), and the later stages are a bit confusing (I skipped chapters to read the later stages). All in all, highly recommended recommended.

The mythology system here is very good, and it has a sense of grandeur and grandeur, which is relatively rare in Tomato.

It can be said that the real novel is one of the few novels that I have read in full in Tomato. I personally think that the world view of this novel is quite large. Although it is difficult to remember the names because of too many names, it can still bring people a sense of fun. Secondly, this harem novel really writes the word harem to the extreme. To be honest, I admire the author very much. The last point is that I really like reading this kind of novel. It really touched my heart. I still feel a little unfinished after reading it. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][smiling]

When I first read the title, I thought it was an ordinary cool article, but I have to say it is really cool. Maybe it's been a long time since I read a novel like this, but when I read it today, I felt like I was back to reading novels using the 3G portal of my smartphone. By the way, this cool article gave me the feeling of reading a novel called Wolf God in another place. It's almost the same complaint and has the same plot, except that the former had an overly violent (bad) ending, while this one is relatively coincidentally satisfying and comfortable. The extra story also continues the sequel that was not mentioned in the original, which is really good. Of course, it may be that I haven't seen much and haven't had the time to participate in these changes. Old-fashioned thinking is inevitable. It took me a while to read the whole book, and I found it really good.

It's been a long time since I've read a novel that's so confusing. Because the feelings in the story are too pure and beautiful, the ending is too perfect and happy, no people or things are forgotten, the lives passed away have to say goodbye, the feelings given have not been let down, the villain is still waiting for an opportunity to lurk in the shadow, and there are many beautiful things to look forward to in the future. However, at this point in my writing career, I have to say goodbye to them no matter how reluctant I am. I thought it was a vulgar time travel system article, but the author described the DND Western fantasy world, and they all have souls and live in the unknown crystal wall universe. Chinese people used Niku-style writing to create countless lovely female characters in this game, which made my heart melt. The one who was most upset was Chelsea. Unexpectedly, her life experience was not revealed in the end, nor was her existence made known to the world. Maybe as she said, maybe the truth is not that important? In the end, I still want to shout that sentence: I haven't seen enough! ! ! … Thank you, the author, Shelley, Nadia, Lydia and others for presenting beautiful stories like mine. Grateful!

The happy ending is the most important reason for the five stars! I like harems, and I also like pure love, but I don't like harems in the name of pure love, and I don't like the so-called pure love that involves ambiguous relationships and only chooses one person in the end. This book is very interesting, but the Riddler is really damned, his combat power is a bit broken, and the back-and-forth reversal of the narrative is a headache. I want to give everyone a good ending, but it is a little bit inconsistent. The development of the story is a bit far-fetched. This is a shortcoming, but it is not entirely wrong! Overall, the reading experience is great, five stars for you, keep it up! [Sinister smile]

This is the most coherent plot among the books I have read. Although I didn't buy gifts from the author, I do think his book is good. It's not at all like the cliche plot of a villain beating someone's face, pretending to be a pig, and eating a tiger. Although it's a bit average at the beginning, it gets better and better as I read later. I hope the author will update it soon.

This is the first novel I have read on Tomato that does not have a bad ending. The ending is also very balanced. Evil has not been eliminated, but has reached a balance with justice. "Eradicating evil will only create new evil." It's really good! Secondly, in the true sense of Long Aotian and Shuangwen, there are almost no setbacks and the feeling that everything is under control! Finally, the characters in the harem have distinct characteristics, and each character has his or her own story, breaking away from the definition of "vase". It is truly a rare work among harem novels! Very nice!

The ending of "Spreading Flowers"🌸It's so good that I can't stop reading it. It's the first time I read this kind of Western fantasy novel, but sometimes I can't remember people's names... The car is going very fast, I can't read... I won't say more about the succubus🐮, see you in the next book

I give it five stars. This book is so comfortable to read. People like me who are tired of Western fantasy genres will also be fascinated by it. The background setting is also very attractive and the plot is not bloody or embarrassing.

Not much to say, this is one of the few harem stories I have read that has been reviewed every day and has a perfect ending. I can't see any pitfalls, and the continuity is very good (in my understanding, continuity means that readers will not give up on the book midway. I have a low level of education, so don't criticize if you don't like it.) Without further ado, here comes the five-star review. 11 Read the comments at 9:04 pm on September 18, 2021

There's nothing to say, it's perfect. Pig's Knuckle has a very good character and is not annoying at all. I couldn't find a single bad point in the whole book. I was immediately addicted when I read it for the first time. There is nothing unreasonable in every character or plot. The heroine basically has her own soul. It's not just a vase like other books. The most important thing is that they all love the male protagonist and will not betray. I have been reading the book since 2016 and now, this book can be ranked T0. It is a rare good book. Although the score may not be good, the content is absolutely wonderful.

This book completely fits my yearning for another world. The protagonist is romantic yet elegant, and his attitude towards others and himself has a lot to learn from. The final ending is quite satisfying. He lived the life he really wanted. Unlike other novels that forcefully start a new plot, he never hesitates when it comes to the end. It is considered one of the more classic novels I have ever read.

Families! Eat with confidence! I was almost obsessed with watching it. I listened to it while I was washing dishes and mopping the floor, and even taking a shower. It was so awesome, and it was full of little foreshadowings that kept you busy! !

It's really shocking, especially when the gods fight for justice later! ! Sacrifice! ! ! There is a happy ending in the end. Originally, I just read the harem to enjoy the novel. Later in Ragnarok, it felt like it suddenly exploded after being suppressed for a long time. It was really good.

I've seen the finale and I don't dare to watch anymore (because it's about to end😭) So pretty! ! ! Satisfies my fantasy of another world It was a bit abrupt and awkward in the early stages, but I kept reading and accepted it. After understanding this world view, it was so cool... The male protagonist is really charming, both good and evil, it's so cool The heroines also have their own styles (Crystal Dragon is really... Really... The wife is so cute) The portrayal of some small characters is also very good (you can feel that they are flesh and blood) The author's writing is also great One drawback is that the names are a bit complicated. Sometimes you have to stop and sort out the characters (Crystal Dragon is called Catherine, hahaha), especially when new characters appear. In short, there are so many advantages that I can't mention them all at the moment. This is a really great book for me. Thanks to the author (may I ask if the author has any other books?)

Western fantasy, based on the setting of dnd, the story of a half-succubus who becomes a god. This book is a harem novel. Although some of the emotions expressed are a bit awkward, it is generally very good. There are many harems and the roles are clear, so that they are not stereotyped. The combination of succubi, hybrids, paladins, and time travelers is very interesting, and the world the author unfolds brings great tension to the picture. The speed is also fast (cross out) Plot: 5⭐dnd's masterpiece in fan fiction Characters: 5⭐On the one hand, the dnd setting provides sufficient templates, and on the other hand, the author's writing skills also make the characters very vivid Writing style: 5⭐Some places are overly emotional, but it's innocuous Overall: 5⭐Good!

This is a good book, absolutely beautiful. Although the identity of the half-succubus and some situations at the beginning may not be popular, but if you really read it, you will appreciate the charm of the book. The story plot is not conventional, there is a happy author complaining, there are funny words and pictures, and the female characters are also unique in their own way. Qiu, the plot is also very angular in the opposition between the good and the bad. The fall of the hero and the guardianship of the kingdom also make people feel sad. The overall background of swords and magic in the Western century, the colorful world, and the stories of multiple races are getting more and more exciting. I really hope I can stick to it. It is a rare and good book! Come on

The writing is very good and novel, breaking the convention, but it is written in Western culture. It may be a bit unfamiliar at first, but once you get used to it, it is overall very good. I give it 6 stars, and it is also quite sweet in the end (I love it). The heroine has her own children.

It's a good book. Except for some places that may be a little awkward (maybe because I'm single, Wo Ri), the overall pace is pretty good. If I say it, the novel itself should be compressed. Well, it's just too short and not enough to read [facepalm]. The pace has sped up since The Two Knights. Of course, it may be because I've read too many elongated novels, and the number of harems may be a little too much. Too many words about "one person" are taken away. Generally speaking, it seems quite comfortable from beginning to end.

The male protagonist doesn't procrastinate, he does what he needs to do, and it's still very enjoyable to watch. Although the specific plot is not described and can only be imagined, it is indeed a good LSP must-read system harem novel [Adoration]

It is an excellent work, and it is a top-notch work. If the online article is graded by SABCD, it should be "accurate S/A~B". There are no poisonous points or uncomfortable areas, and the pitfalls have been filled in. The writing is not bad, the characters and emotional development are logical and not abnormal. Although it only has more than 500 chapters, the plot is rich and rigorous, harem style, Western fantasy style, DND world system, in short, it is a very good online article. [OK]

Personally, I feel generally good. The pace in the early stage is slow, and most things pave the way for the later stage. In the later stage, many people say that the pace is too fast, but I think it is okay. In fact, in the early stage, it was mentioned that the Saint Catastrophe is an opportunity, weak gods can become strong, mortals can become gods, and Shelley killed more than ten or twenty gods, accounting for more than half of the dead gods. It is reasonable to develop quickly. Although the names of some gods were confusing to me and I only remembered them after reading the commentary, but overall they are acceptable. The protagonist is philanthropic but not a scumbag. He doesn't start a mess but ends up giving up. Everyone has a good ending. Of course, if there are people who think the harem is bad, I personally recommend not to participate in this book. After all, the introduction says it is a harem.

The ending is complete, not messy, and really makes me happy. The overall plot is smooth, but the code words in the middle may be a bit rushed, and there will be minor problems where some sentences are not smooth. Overall very good [like][like]