A murder occurred in City D. The deceased Zhong Hai was a shareholder of multiple companies. Wang Qiang, an entrepreneur in this city, was involved. Through his intelligence and unremitting efforts, public security officer Feng Hong not only solved this case, but also solved a robbery and murder case that had been dormant for more than 20 years.
Reader comments
It's a bit procrastinating. If I didn't want to see the outcome of the case, I wouldn't have the motivation to read it. There are too many descriptions that have nothing to do with the case, and it's lengthy. Some things that can be mentioned in one sentence are too heavy to write. Personally, I feel that the number of words can be reduced.
It's a bit procrastinating. If I didn't want to see the outcome of the case, I wouldn't have the motivation to read it. There are too many descriptions that have nothing to do with the case, and it's lengthy. Some things that can be mentioned in one sentence are too heavy to write. Personally, I feel that the number of words can be reduced.
How should I say, yes