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Not bad, looks good! It's not like those people who just start a harem and then go to heaven. There is no bottom line and it's disgusting to watch. The logic is clear. The protagonist was patient and motivated when he was a child, and his gentle demeanor after counterattack made him a very successful image of a good young man.

Yes, the plot is step-by-step, and there is no random arrangement of the heroine. Originally, Jia Huan was a small character in Dream of Red Mansions. After the counterattack, the description is more reasonable, unlike other stories that are too outrageous and pay an IQ tax.

The writing is good, step by step. It doesn't mean that you will be awesome in ancient times. If you break the rules in the big family, try it and you will be reborn in minutes. This book is much better than that "The Wrong Start with Qin Keqing". It is a harem stallion novel. If you like it, you can read it.

It is a very interesting book. There is no golden finger or Madonna in other books, saving this or that or the harem. You must know that it was not easy for a concubine to live in ancient times, let alone in the Red Mansion. Therefore, in the comments of the article, I saw many people scolding me for not saving Jin Chuaner. , Or I feel speechless if I don't accept women and have traveled through time in vain. It's very inspiring to know that a bastard can strive to study and learn in the upper reaches under the pressure of Mrs. Wang. No matter what others say, I think the writing is very good. You are great, author. Come on.

I really like this kind of book. This is the experience of a normal time traveler. There is not much ability to change it. Instead, it will be affected and assimilated by the environment. There isn't much romance, the heroine has a huge harem. It's just that the pace is slow, and there are too many arrangements in this chapter of Zhengguo.

It was very satisfying to read. The protagonist relies on his own efforts to live a better life step by step. Until now, this book is considered to be the best among the Red Mansion novels I have read.

The positive energy of Red Mansions does not deviate from the original work but also expresses the author's own wishes. The protagonist works hard and does not rely solely on the system. After reading it, it actually produces a real and believable absurd feeling. Looking forward to continuing.

I think this book is the one that suits my taste the most among the ancient time travel novels I have read. It is different from the time travel system type or the kind that uses various modern technologies. It is closer to reality. In terms of the original plot, the protagonist uses his own efforts to make the ordinary characters who time travel slowly become extraordinary, and the plot does not affect the development of the historical plot as much as possible.

It's super good-looking, and each character has its own characteristics. There may be some areas that are open to question, but it's really good-looking! With the author's own efforts, it is more comfortable to read, and the writing is smooth. It can be seen that the author is very careful!

It's still a very interesting book if you take the time to read it. It's not a harem story, and it's not about a woman so I rushed to post it. There is a refreshing flow in the book that makes people feel comfortable reading it.

I really like the plot of Red Mansions and I usually have to watch it. This book still has certain merits. The control of the plot is also good, and the analysis is very clever. I learned a lot about Red Mansions. However, the character of the protagonist of this book is a big flaw. The lack of a distinct character makes the plot a bit dull. It is very unreasonable for women to have no desires and demands for Yingchun's mindless pampering. It makes people speechless when they look at it. As for the changes in the plot, the protagonist has changed the plot, but mainly in the general trend. But the specific plots of some important characters in the Red Mansion have not been changed. Is this to try not to affect the progress of the plot? I feel like I'm getting a little penny wise and pound foolish! What's so cool about the author's writing? It's just a novel. A novel without some cool points feels like a big flaw. For fans of Red Mansion, the biggest pleasure is to change the fate of their favorite characters, and even fulfill their own desires. The protagonist is too wantless in this regard. As far as novels and picture books are concerned, the author's protagonist is not my favorite type. It's too Buddhist, too worldly. After more than 190 chapters, the sense of involvement is still very low. It feels like it is just pampering and tolerant. Leave the plot characters alone. It would be weird to not have a female protagonist in the whole book. I feel like I can't give you more than 80 points. I feel that the author's writing is very depressing. Novel and picture books should have a lot of excitement, otherwise the reading process will be very boring. In fact, most readers are very pure and come here for the excitement. As for novels, entertainment is very important. It is the best work when it makes people think deeply in the joy and attracts people in the charm that makes people daydream!

It's an excellent Red Mansion novel, very pure and upright, there is no harem, and there are relatively few house fights. Come on, author, when will you start giving rewards?

This novel describes the most realistic situation. Although the rhetoric is not gorgeous, the whole novel is solid and solid, with a sense of heaviness that hits your face. This is the best Red Mansion fanfic I have ever seen, bar none.

I finished reading only two books in one sitting, one is My Grandfather is Zhu Yuanzhang, and the other is You. Let's not talk about the writing style. I think the logic is good, and there are not a lot of kitsch harems, which is rare!

It's rare for a Red Mansion fanfic to be of this quality. Although it has some flaws, the flaws are not hidden and it's worth a look.

Among all the books in Tomato like The Red Mansion, I have read some of them. From my personal experience, I think this book can (must) be ranked first. It doesn't have so much love between children, golden fingers, and bad luck. It's more about step-by-step, seeing tricks, and your own efforts. "Three Views of IQ" is already amazing online, and the stories in it are connected one after another. Five stars are appropriate. Although it is not a harem novel, I feel that this kind of literary talent should be included in normal novels. There are foreshadowings and characters, and there is no suspicion of deliberately causing trouble for the later development of the story. It just feels like everything happened naturally. Very nice! There were no serious ups and downs, and Cavan was left scratching his head afterward. It is a description of what normal life in ancient officialdom should have been like. The author is great! Don't let the rating put you off, this book is really worth reading.

This book is underrated. The author writes very delicately, linking the ups and downs of the family with the prosperity of the country, focusing more on the court, and less on the love between sons and daughters among the courtiers. But step by step, very calm. Give the author a thumbs up!

The writing is very good. The protagonist travels to the world of Red Mansions and does not change the character of the characters in Dream of Red Mansions. The author does not cheat the system or anything. They all relied on their own intelligence and wisdom to change their own destiny in the prevailing environment.

Super pretty! The story has ups and downs, the timeline is fully arranged, the characters are very delicately portrayed, the male protagonist is not a stallion, he has a love brain, and the storyline looks very enjoyable!

The author has profound literary skills and a first-class writing style. The works are excellent, but the chapters are written too slowly. I look forward to the wonderful follow-up.

A very wonderful book, it is said to be a Dream of Red Mansions, but it does not fall into the small grid of the Red Mansions and cannot get out. The pattern suddenly opens up. It can be regarded as an alternative fictional historical text, and the content is balanced. It exceeds more than 90% of the Red Mansions. The current level of more than eight points is on the low side, and the actual level should be above nine points. It's just that watching the finale is a bit unsatisfying, just like there are only eighty episodes of Dream of Red Mansions. The author should give Jia Huan another twenty years... A finale around forty years, which might lead to less regrets.

This book is the best of all the Red Mansions genres I've read!

The gradual development of the storyline and the step-by-step plot description create a good novel.

Although there is no harem, I think it's still pretty good-looking. Except for those stereotypes at the beginning that made me a little suspicious of the water character, but that's probably because I'm a bad student. Overall, it's quite interesting. I hope the author will update it soon. The rating is a bit low. I think the rating should be higher.

This book is intuitive and the author's writing is very good. The background of the Red Mansion is very detailed. Especially the characters and images are very detailed. Some details are also attentive. Overall, it is very good. Five stars.

I think it's very interesting. Although it's not very refreshing, I think it's just right. After Jia Huan became an official, the writing was not boring. There was officialdom, heir apparents, and battlefields. The writing style of the author's wife is really great. I have read so many rebirths and time travels. This is really a great book! ! ! Madam, do you have any other books? I'll go after them.

The writing is fluent, the structure is rigorous, the plot is ups and downs, the content is reasonable, the protagonist is very vivid, and the character is just right. This book is undoubtedly a masterpiece of Red Mansions. The only flaw is that the ending is too sloppy, which is regrettable.

It's pretty good. It doesn't deviate from the original work, but it also expands the story very well.

At first glance, I can tell that it was written by an old red fan, and it is very good. I only watched A Dream of Red Mansions when I was in elementary school. It used to be called Story of the Stone. I only understood the relationship between the characters after watching this time travel. Hahaha, it's a pity that the ending was too fast!

The writing style is novel and unconventional. Compared with time travel, it has various golden fingers. It takes a different approach and is more down-to-earth. Worth a look