The Sword Immortal of Nine Lives

Good, good, good, good

You should go along with time and space. What's the point of writing against the flow of time and space? It's boring to always recall the past life to change when you encounter problems or exciting parts.

Not bad, not bad,

I quite like the plot. It's just that the name of this spiritual grass is quite diverse and changes several times in one paragraph. Then, sometimes when I read it, I feel that the tone should be an exclamation point, instead of ~, but this feeling changes.