Automotive Tycoon: The Richest Man Alive

I think you can close the book. Children aged 4-5 can write it. First of all, the company's management is so messed up that it could have filed for bankruptcy long ago. Again, the protagonist looks like a fool. I just want to ask you what you want to express.

Tomatoes are getting worse and worse

Let's not talk about anything else. I just want to ask, how do you control 70% of the shares so that the remaining 30% shareholders can control it? At the same time, what kind of mentality did the chairman of the board of directors, who controlled 70% of the company, have to be clearly arranged by a group of wage earners? (After everyone's discussion, the chairman personally went to the countryside to promote it) No matter what book you write, it must talk about logic and adult IQ, right? There is always a main line and basic point, right? Although there will be some pitfalls in writing, as an author, you should try your best to smooth out and downplay those pitfalls, right? But you can't have a book full of pitfalls and content that ridicules the reader's intelligence, right? You're not writing about a three-year-old. Nowadays, all the damn two-bit authors treat their readers as fools.

This is not writing a novel, but an introduction to the novel (the introduction is just a little more detailed). The thinking jumps too much! The score of 8.8 Is too high. I personally feel that 5 points is too high!

Pig feet like a fool

I can't say it's particularly beautiful, I can only say it's rubbish.

It seems that writing is not easy for you. How should I put it? It's a little watery and a little poisonous. Harem. The thinking is too fast. If you really haven't seen it, you can take a look. At least it's better than some urban writers

The writing is messy! No connectivity at all, no logic!

Oh, come on

Looking confused