System Showdown

It's pretty good, but the sense of immersion is relatively poor. Dialogue and the like will make you feel confused. And the main storyline here should be a system brawl, right? There are too many descriptions of the life of other systems in this novel. For their individual systems, it can be said that there are very few, but for those with many systems like you, there are many. After all, the highlight of this novel is that there are many systems. Don't worry about not being able to write. There are many systems, which are enough for you to write. In addition, I suggest using a These symbols indicate what the protagonist himself uses, what others use, and what passers-by use. The levels must be clear. Believe me, the highlight of your novel is not life, but their abilities, such as the painted dream. Really, I am very optimistic about this. You can get firearms, cars, and future technology, and it can be helpful in many things. The above are the shortcomings and suggestions I have discovered temporarily, welcome to add↓

Don't know what to say

A very good novel

Quite pretty