Journey to the West: I Became the Five-Finger Mountain

Five stars for it, it looks great, I need to work harder! Come on, keep an eye on you.

Hey, I originally wanted to give it one star, but then I thought about it. Author, your writing skills need to be improved. There are also a lot of things that are not rigorous in writing, and the plot is not good. It is just a mess. Also, the protagonist is very familiar with Journey to the West and doesn't even know a lot of common sense. I feel that the protagonist is an idiot. Isn't it very familiar? Even the obvious Nezha and Yang Jian don't know, and there is common sense between Yang Jian and Nezha. Zha already has a master, and some places are very messy. For example, the protagonist has 100 points, spent 60 points to buy foxtail grass, and then got 200 points. The current points are 240 points. Then you say that the protagonist buys 3 items at once, and the Venus flytrap alone has 210 points. The rest are more than 100, how can it be enough to buy simple math questions? Another example is the upgraded item for sale. Originally, you said that it sold bananas, apples, peaches, and ginseng fruits. Then you said that the protagonist bought bananas first and then earned some points to buy the rest. But you said that he bought apples, peaches, pears, and ginseng fruits. Well, the pear came from there, and there are others that I won't list. I can't tell the difference between "The Ancient of Days" and "Journey to the West". I keep calling it "The Ancient of Days." The score of 7.5 Is a bit unworthy. There are still many flaws in this book, so I just read it. Author, your writing style needs to be improved. Please check your writing more carefully so that it won't be too messy. I feel like I know very little about Journey to the West and Ancient Times. I will read more about Journey to the West and learn more about it. I believe I can write better. I don't want to hurt my confidence so I will give it a 3-star medium rating. Come on, the subject matter of this book is still good. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes 🤭

Damn, a time travel novel was written by you and turned into an invincible novel.

The protagonist is like an idiot, and the plot is completely messed up. The part in the early stage where Yang Jian and the others gave some magic weapons as a gift made me feel like the protagonist is an idiot. Just the lotus lantern and the familiar costumes of Yang Chan and Nezha can be recognized by everyone. However, the protagonist did not know the system for so long and did not prompt. Didn't the protagonist say that he is most familiar with Journey to the West? Why don't you even know this bit of common sense?

I beg you, please update as soon as possible. I like your book very much. Please

You can't do this. Some things are very messy. The protagonist has such a high level of cultivation, but he still acts like a fool. He doesn't understand anything. He knows everything after learning the Eight-nine Mysterious Techniques. One method can be used to master all methods.

The author hasn't read The Ancient World, so don't write anything. Is the eldest brother of Chanjiao Tongtian??? Laughing to death

Very well written 👌👍

Well enough

I have no enmity with you, why do you treat me as a fool?